读后续写遇险类-92岁猎人在森林里迷路 讲义 高考英语专题复习

A92-year-oldhuntergettinglostinthewoodsBillMcDonnellwasgoinghunting.Deerseasonhadbegun,butitwascolderthanusual.

Up

untilhislate80s,

Billhadn’tmindedhuntinginsub-zerotemperatures,buthehadslowedinthepast

fewyears.Thesnow-dustedmountainsoftheShenandoahValleywerenoplacefora92-year-old.

Heknewit.Buthehadmadeuphismindtogetoutside.Hiswife,JoannaMcDonnell,

knewwhat

hewasupto.Butthisparticularday,Joannadidn’teventrytotalksenseintoherhusband.Thenextmorning,Billwokeupatfour,grabbedhisgun,anddrovehisJeeptoward

ShenandoahMountain,aplacewherehehadn’thuntedforalongtime.AttheendoftheoldLaurel

Runloggingroad,hehitthetrailonfoot.Itwasabout7:30a.m.

whenthesunpeeked

(微微露出)

throughthetrees.Billhadstrict

instructionsfromJoannatobeoutofthewoodsby2p.m.andhomeby3p.m.

—

plentyoftime

beforesunset,incasehemissedthedeadline,

whichheoftendid.Notlongintothehike,

hecame

uponapathhedidn’tremember.Maybethiswasasecretroute.

Hetookit.Then,

around11a.m.,heemergedintoaclearingalongavalley.Itseemedthathispathupthe

mountainhadmeandered(蜿蜒)

quiteabit.Whenthoughtsofshort-cutscametomind,Billcouldn’t

helphimself.

“I’lljustbeextracareful,”

hereasoned,andbegancuttinghisownpath.Beforelong,

thecanyon

(峡谷)

narrowedtoadeadend.Thenextthingheknewwasthathewaslost.Hepulledouthisphone,onlytofindithaddied.HedugintohispantsfortheGPSdevicehe

alwaysbroughtincaseofemergencyandpushedthe

“on”button.Nothing.Hehadforgottento

chargeit.Hehadn’tbroughtaflashlighteither.Duringthisperiod,hecouldhearthesoundofa

helicopterflyingoverhishead.Heyelledandwaved,butinvain.Hecouldn’tmakehimselfheard.

Para.1:

Itwasabout9:45p.m.andthesoundofthehelicoptergraduallysoftenedinthedistance.

Para.2:

Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.

场景设置：Para.1:It

was

about

9:45

p.m

and

the

sound

of

the

helicopter

gradually

softened

in

the

distance.

场景一：从他多年的捕猎经验来说，直升机夜里不会再来了。一阵凉风吹来，他似乎想到了什么。场景二：很幸运的是，他从口袋里找到了火柴，他竭尽全力地找来干小的树枝，找了一小山洞，点着小树枝来取暖。场景三：想到老婆的提醒和自己的小聪明，非常后悔，由于白天太累，岁数太大，很快他就睡着了。Para.2:

Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.场景一:

觉得又饿又渴，他环顾四周，发现不远处有几颗果树，慢慢走过去，摘了一些充饥。场景二：继续向前走，他在考虑怎么找到原来的路，突然他发现前面有一条小溪，沿着小溪往上走，就可以找到出口或者求助。场景三：雪路太滑，走了好长时间，终于到了，但是他并没有找到回去的路，这时他找了一块空旷的地方，点燃树枝，来引起直升机的注意，他很耐心的等待，大概在下午，他被直升机救回。下水作文:It

was

about

9:45

p.m

and

the

sound

of

the

helicopter

gradually

softened

in

the

distance.

Fromhishuntingexperience,heknewthatthehelicopterwouldnevercomebackhereatnight.Agustofchilledwindblewonhisface,whichmadehimrealizethathemustdosomething.Fortunatelyforhim,hefoundaboxofmatcheswhenhereachedintohispocket.Helittheleavesandwiththelighthefoundsomedrybranchesthatwereusedtowarmhimself.Hefoundacleanplace,heldherarmstightlyaroundherbody,andleanedagainstarock.Thinkingofthereminderfromhiswifeandhiswrongdecision,hefeltasenseofregret.Buthequicklyfellasleepduetoexhaustionandhisoldage.Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.

Everythinghiddeninthedarkseemedtobesoundasleep.Afterawhile,thesunrosefromtheeast.Thirstyandstarved,helookedaroundandwaspleasedtofindsomefruittreesnearby.Havinghadsomefruit,heproceededtowalkforwardtosearchforthepathleadingtotheroad.Allofasudden,abrookappearedwihtinhissight,leavinghimrelievedbecausehewasabletogotothetopalongit.Soslipperywasthesnowyroadthathewalkedextremelyslowly.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,hereachedthetopatlastwherehelitafiretodrawthehelicopter’sattention.Finallyhewasrescuedafterwaitingtilllateintheafternoon.参考范文：Itwasabout9:45p.m.andthesoundofthehelicoptergraduallysoftenedinthedistance.

Bill

guessedtheywouldn’tbebackuntilmorning,sohedecidedtomakealittlesleepingmatfrom

branches.

Hetriedtogotosleepbutcouldn’tfallasleepsoon.Hewasveryregretfulbecause

he’dtaken

toomanyshort-cuts.Joanna,hiswife,wasprobablyterrified.Hewantedtoget

upandpowerthroughthedarkness,butheknewhe’donlyendupinmoretrouble.Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.

Hestartedtopushhiswaythroughthewoods.

Afterawhile,

Billcametoaspot.

Onlyafewhundredmetersawayfromtherewasthelineof

treeshehadbeenhopingtoreachthenightbefore.Heknewtherescuerscouldn’tbetoofar

away.

Atthesametime,teamsofrescuersweresearchingalongt