高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件

Improveyourwriting高三作文专题课高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第1页。高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第2页。Learningobjectives

Attheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto:

1.identifyproblemsrelatedtosupportingdetails,cohesion&coherence（衔接与连贯）,wordsandsentencevarietyinapassage;2.knowhowtoimproveapassagebyaddingdetails,makingitmorecohesiveandcoherentandvaryingthelanguage;

3.improveapassagewithsomeproblems.高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第3页。Whataretheproblems？

Structure

ThreepartsTopicsentencesContentKeypointsSupportingdetailsLanguage

Correct,cohesiveandcoherent(衔接连贯),varied高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第4页。Whatcanbedoneifyourwriting…？doesnothaveenoughsupportingdetailsforeachkeypoint;isnotcohesiveorcoherent(衔接连贯)doesnothavevariedlanguage

(dullandrepetitive重复的)高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第5页。SupportingdetailsHowtoaddsupportingdetails？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystoaddsupportingdetails.高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第6页。Tomakethesentenceslongerandmorespecific,wecan:1.usespecificwords2.giveexamples3.explainreasons4.givefactsasevidence…Summary高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第7页。(1)Ihatethebadweathertoday.(2)Myfatherisawarm-heartedman.(3)SquaredancingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Haveatry!高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第8页。Cohesionandcoherence（衔接与连贯）

Howtomakeyourpassagecohesiveandcoherent？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystomakethepassagemorecohesiveandcoherent.高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第9页。Tomakethelanguagemorecohesiveandcoherent,we:1.canusetransitions（衔接词、短语）2.mustpayattentiontothelogicalrelationship···3.shouldmakesurethetopicisconsistent…Summary高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第10页。Onlinecourseshavesomeadvantages.Theyareconvenient,becauseyoucanlearnsomethingthatcannotbegainedinclassroom.Theyhavedisadvantages,too.Manythingshavedisadvantages,soweshouldtakethemseriously.Haveatry!高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第11页。VariedlanguageHowtovarythelanguage？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystovarythelanguageinapassage.高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第12页。Toavoiddullandrepetitivelanguage,wecanuse:1.pronouns2.synonyms3.differentsentencepatterns…Summary高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第13页。Haveatry！

Doingsportsisausefulwaytoreducestress.Doingsportshelpsyouforgetthetroubleandmakesyourefreshed.Talkingwithyourfriendsisalsoausefulwaytoreducestress.高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第14页。Summary高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第15页。ImprovethewritingReadthepassage,findoutthepossibleproblemsanddecidewhatkindofproblemstheyare.①lackssupportingdetails②isnotcohesiveorcoherent③thelanguageisrepetitiveanddull2.Improvethepassage3.Discussingroupsandcollectyourideas.高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第16页。PresentationSharewhatyouhaveimproved.2.Explainthereasonswhyyourimproveitinthisway.高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件全文共19页，当前为第17页。Homework

假定你是李华，你校学生会刚刚举办了“跳蚤市场（fleamarket）”活动。你的外国笔友Jenny对此很感兴趣，于是写邮件向你了解基本情况。请你给她写一封回信，简要介绍这次活动。要点如下：1.活动的目的和内容；2.你的心得体会。

注意：100词左右。