高考英语写作指导感谢信

命题(mìngtí)原那么：合理性、交际性和实用性高考英语(yīnɡyǔ)书面表达第一页，共42页。1一是体裁多样，提示灵活。记叙文、议论文、应用文、说明文，开放式作文(zuòwén)。提示形式有提纲式、图表式、图画式、开放式，英语提示等。二是题材丰富，贴近生活。既适当关注社会热点及焦点(jiāodiǎn)，又注重考生实际生活。三是注重语用，考查能力。考验(kǎoyàn)能否运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行书面交际，对语言的驾驭和运用能力。这是一种命题趋势。特点：第二页，共42页。2词汇短语句型(jùxínɡ)谋篇漂亮(piàoliàng)、地道第三页，共42页。3surprising→amazing→astonishing词汇(cíhuì)的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜词汇(cíhuì)层面adj.聪明(cōngmíng)的、脑筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent第四页，共42页。4短语(duǎnyǔ)层面短语(duǎnyǔ)优先原那么电脑在我们(wǒmen)生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3putersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.第五页，共42页。5句型(jùxínɡ)层面Ihadagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/hitme.Icameupwithagoodidea.第六页，共42页。6在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句式(jùshì)，要灵活运用以下结构：倒装句强调(qiángdiào)句主从(zhǔcóng)复合句分词状语With复合结构第七页，共42页。7写作(xiězuò)五步骤-----忌跑题----忌漏点-----句型结构成分要完整,忌表达单一,忌冗言或逐句硬译，字词堆砌------添加过渡词,忌句子(jùzi)松散第八页，共42页。8应用文日记书信〔信函、电子邮件〕通知〔书面通知、口头通知〕便条说明文〔事物(shìwù)，人物，地点〕记叙文议论文〔观点、建议〕常见(chánɡjiàn)体裁第九页，共42页。9①相当于中文的“敬启者〞。(直接给别人(biérén)写信〕a.lbegtoinformyouthat…b.lbegtotakethisopportunitytoinformyouthat…c.Ihavethehonortoaddressyouthat...d.lwriteinahurrytoinformyouthat…e.Ihavethepleasuretotellyouthat...f.Iamverydelightedtoinformyouthat...书信(shūxìn)开头语第十页，共42页。10②相当于中文(zhōngwén)的“接读某月某日来信，一切知悉〞。a.lthankyouverymuchforyourletterofMay20th…b.YourletterofMay20thhasbeenreceivedwiththanks.c.ItgivesmegreatpleasuretoreceiveyourkindletterofMay20th.d.lnanswertoyourkindletterofMay20th,ldeeplyregretthat…e.lhavereceivedyourkindletterofMay20th.f.Wordscan’texpressmydelightonfindingyourfavorofyesterdayonmydeskthismorning.g.YourletterdatedMay20thhasbeenreceived.第十一页，共42页。11结尾(jiéwěi)语Wearewaitingforyourgoodnews.Ihopetoreceiveyourearlyreply.Welookforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.第十二页，共42页。121.建议信2.邀请信信函(xìnhán)分类第十三页，共42页。13写作格式第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与(ɡěiyǔ)的帮助；第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。感谢信LetterofThanks第十四页，共42页。14第十五页，共42页。15Vocabulary：(感谢(gǎnxiè))v.thank,appreciate;n.thanks,gratitude,appreciation;adj.thankful,grateful,appreciative,obligedadj.感谢(gǎnxiè)的owev.欠债,感谢(gǎnxiè)感谢信LetterofThanks第十六页，共42页。16感谢信LetterofThanks短语(duǎnyǔ)：因…而感谢sb.thankyoufor…appreciateone’sdoing…begrateful/thankfultosb.for…manythanksfor…expressmythanks/gratitudefor…owesb.alotfor…第十七页，共42页。17第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；常用(chánɡyònɡ)句式Iamwritingthislettertothankyoufor…IamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksforIwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfelt(adj.衷心的)thankstoyoufor…WithdeepestgratitudeIwriteyouthisletterfor…Iamobligedtoyoufor...Ioweyouagreatdealfor…第十八页，共42页。18第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与(ɡěiyǔ)的帮助；常用句式Itwasnice/kind/thoughtful(adj.考虑周到的)ofyouto..Thankyouverymuchforyourkindhospitality(n.好客,热情招待)andthehonoryoushowedmeduringmyvisit…Itwasyourkindhelpthat…(强调句型)Ifithadnotbeenforyour(help/guidance/assistance),Iwouldn’thave(wontheprize)(虚拟语气)Butfor/Without…第十九页，共42页。19第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报(huíbào)愿望。常用句式Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.Mytruegratitudeisbeyondtheword’sdescription.Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksforyourhelp,whichIwillneverforget.Nothingcouldeverreturnthefavoryougaveme.第二十页，共42页。20第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。常用(chánɡyònɡ)句式PleasedonothesitatetoletmeknowifthereisanythingIcoulddotopayyouback(回报).Pleasehavenohesitationinwritingtomeshouldyouwant(虚拟语气倒装)metodosomethingforyou…Pleasedoallowmetoreturnyourfavor(报答)Bestwishesforyourhealthandeveryhappiness.第二十一页，共42页。21假设你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr.Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr.Brown写了一封信，内容如下：★收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感谢；★在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；★决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；★盼望见到Mr.Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。注意(zhùyì)：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：100左右第二十二页，共42页。22DearMr.Brown，

Iamwritingto

expressmydeepestgratitudeforthemoneyandbooksyousentme.Icouldnothavereturnedtoschoolwithoutyourhelp.Thankyousomuch.

IhavebeenworkinghardsinceIwentbacktoschool.Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudieswiththehelpofmyteachers.Theyoftenpraisemeandencourageme.Butforyourhelp,Imighthaveleftschoolandcouldn’thavegotsuchagood

education.Ihavemadeupmymindtostudyharderandmakegreaterprogress.

Howareyougettingonwithyourlifeandwork?Iwouldliketomeetyouinperson,butIhavenoopportunitytodoso.Wouldyoupleasesendmeaphotoofyourself?

Thankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp

andbestwishes!

YoursSincerely,

LiHua第二十三页，共42页。23第二十四页，共42页。24第二十五页，共42页。25第二十六页，共42页。26通知(tōngzhī)通知可分为书面通知和口头通知两种。书面通知可采用(cǎiyòng)布告形式或书信形式;口头通知要求比较灵活，语言简明扼要。第二十七页，共42页。27【书面通知模板(múbǎn)】

NoticeAnactivitywillbeheld(1)___________.Inorderto(2)_____________.Everyonewhoisinterestedinitiswelcomed.(3)____________

(4)____________

模板说明〔1〕时间(shíjiān)，地点〔2〕活动目的〔3〕通知发布单位〔4〕通知发布时间(shíjiān)第二十八页，共42页。28书面通知常用(chánɡyònɡ)的开头语有：Allteachersandstudentswillberequiredto…(全体师生务必(wùbì)要)Noticeisherebygiventhat…(兹通知)Ourschool/TheStudentUnionwill/isgoingtohold…Alecturewillbegivenat7:00thiseveningin…第二十九页，共42页。29书面通知常用(chánɡyònɡ)的结束语有：Everybodyisexpectedtoattendit.Besuretoattenditontime.Please/Dobepresentontime.Don’tmissthechance!第三十页，共42页。30【口头(kǒutóu)通知模板】

Ladiesandgentlemen,

MayIhaveyourattention,please.Ihavesomethingtotellyou.(1)________________________

Pleaseremember:Time(2)

Place(3)______

That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.

模板说明〔1〕具体内容〔2〕时间(shíjiān)〔3〕地点第三十一页，共42页。31口头(kǒutóu)通知要求：(1)要有称呼用语。如：在正式(zhèngshì)场合用的Ladiesandgentlemen,对学生用的Boysandgirls等。(2)要有开头语。(3)时态：以一般将来时为主。(4)人称问题：第二人称(5)要有结束语。第三十二页，共42页。32口头通知(tōngzhī)常用的开头语有：MayIhaveyourattention,please?Bequiet.ThereissomethingimportantIhavetotellyou.Youneedtoknow....Ihavesomethingtotellyou.第三十三页，共42页。33口头通知(tōngzhī)常用的结束语有：That’sall.Thankyou.Anyquestions?Doeseveryoneunderstand?第三十四页，共42页。34【经典(jīngdiǎn)例句】1.Ladiesandgentlemen,mayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.2.Everybodyiswelcometobepresentatthecontest.3.TheStudentsUnionhasdecidedtoorganizeamusicweek.4.Pleasesignyourname/fillina...form(attheServiceRoom).5.Thefirstsixwinnerswillbegivenawards.6.Pleaselistencarefullyandwe'llhaveadiscussioningroups.7.Cometothegreatfun!8.Theplacefortheactivitieswillbeannouncedlater.9.There’sbeenachangeinourtimeschedulethisweek.Themeetingwillbeputoffuntilnextweek.10.Don’tforgettobringyourgiftswithyou.11.Pleaseconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.第三十五页，共42页。35你校学生会举办义卖活动以资助贫困地区儿童上学。请你写一份通知：●介绍活动的目的●号召大家踊跃捐献不用物品，并参加义卖活动●义卖时间、地点：周六上午9点，校阶梯教室注意(zhùyì)：1.词数100左右；2．可适当参加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：义卖：CharitySale；阶梯教室：lecturehall第三十六页，共42页。36

NOTICE/Notice

TheStudents’UnionofourschoolisscheduledtoholdaCharitySaleonSaturdaytoraisemoneyforchildreninthepoverty-strickenarea.Theeffortstobemadearetosupportthesechildrentocontinuetheirschooleducation.Youarekindlyaskedtodonatesomeofyouritemstemporarilynotusedbyyouandthatmightbeofsomeusetoothers,suchassomeschoolsuppliesandusedtextbooks.At9a.m.thisSaturday,theCharitySalestartsatthelecturehallofourschool.Weareexpectingyoutocome

andofferahelpinghand.Andrememberallthemoneywillgotothesupportofthoseneedychildren.TheStudents’Union第三十七页，共42页。37假设你是班长，根据下面(xiàmian)的内容和提示，写一篇100左右的口头通知，以便向同学们宣布事由：欢送澳大利亚学生来校参观。参观时间：6月15日上午9:00-12:00.参观人数：约60人。活动安排(ānpái)：1.8:30在校门口。2.9:00带客人到会议室开联欢会。3.领客人参观植物园、校办工厂。4.11:00在操场进行篮球比赛。5.客人12:00离校。本卷须知：1.对客人要友好。2.要用英语交谈。参考词汇：植物园:botanicalgarden校办工厂:school-runfactory第三十八页，共42页。38Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,please?AboutsixtyAustralianstudentswillcometovisitourschoolonJune15.We’llmeetthemattheschoolgateat8:30.We’lltakethemtothemeeting-room,whereaget-togetherwillbeheld.Afterthat,we’llshowthemaroundourbotanicalgardenandtheschool-runfactory.At11:00therewillbeab