16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析

专四新题型写作自2016年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200词左右的作文。出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。值得注意的是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。例题1PARTVIWRITINGReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthenCommentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresourcesYoucansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.Dostudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources?WiththeadventoftheInternetandothertelecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastlygrowingwealthofresourcesavailablefromanimmenserangeofmediaoutlets.Studentshavetheabilitytoabsorbinformationinaquickerandmoreefficientwaywhenresearchingontheirownthroughreadingpublicationsorbrowsingwebpagesonline.Asaresult,somepeoplearguethatstudentsnowlearnmorefromotherresourcesthanfromclasses.Conductingresearchwithonlinematerialsisanactiveprocess,whichallowsyoungsterstofocusingreaterdetailratherthanpassivelylisteningtoalectureinalargeclassroom.TheInternetandTVarealsoeasilyaccessibleplatformsforstudentsintheremoteplaceswhereteachingresourcesarenotasabundantasthoseinmoredevelopedregions.However,teachershavethecapabilityofexplainingtheknowledgeinadeeperwayandnotonlyprovidetechnologyexertsabigimpactonmoderneducation.However,itcannevereliminatetheneedforhigh-qualityprofessionalsinclassroom.（重申论点）(213words)例题2PARTVIWRITINGReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen2）CommentonwhetherpeopleshouldchoosetobecomeindoorsyYoucansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.Shouldpeoplechoosetobecomeindoorsyinmodernworld?InmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingweneedontheInternet,andcommunicateandevenworkthroughtheInternet,becomingindoorsymenorwomenissimplyachoiceofdifferentlifestyle.Inthepast,ifyouwanttobuysomething,youneedtogooutofyourhouse,gotothestore,andspendanhourortwochoosingtheproductyouwanttobuy.Butnowyoucanjustsitinfrontofacomputerandclickyourmouse,andtheproductcanbedeliveredtoyou.Beingindoorsycansavepeoplealotoftime.Beingindoorsycanallowpeopletothinkandworkinapeacefulenvironment.Forexample,writerscanbequitecreativewhentheyarealoneathomewithoutbeinginterrupted.Somesociologistswarnthattheindoorsylifestylewillmakepeoplebecomeself-centeredandnaive.Ifpeoplestayathomeforalongtime,theywillhavelittleinterpersonalcontactwithothers.Theydonotknowhowtohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andtheymaybecomeshy,uncomfortable,orself-centeredwhentheyareinvolvedinreal-lifecommunication.Thisindoorsylifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormalinterpersonalrelationshipandtheirnormalwork.Indoorsymenorwomenspendmostoftheirtimesittinginfrontofacomputer,andtheyseldomattendoutdooractivities.Watchingthecomputerscreenforalongtimewilldogreatharmtotheireyes.Also,manyindoorsypeopledonotliketoattendsportsactivities,andinthelongrun,theirhealthwillgetworse.范文2审题思路本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。在具体行文方面，考生应首先简要概述正方观点：“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。然后概述反方观点：“宅”有种种弊端。接下来给出自己的观点：现代科技是把双刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依赖则会对身体有害。最后总结全文，重申观点。ShouldWeEmbraceIndoorsyLifestyle?Withtheglobalizationofmoderntechnology,especiallytheworld-wideaccesstoInternetservice,people’slifestylehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.(介绍背景)Someenjoyindoorsylifestyle.Theyholdthatindoorsylifestyleistime-savingandpeaceful.Incontrast,thoseagainsttheideaclaimthatkeepanindoorsylifestylewilldoharmtopeoplebothpsychologicallyandphysically.（总结材料）AsfarasIamconcerned,moderntechnologyisadouble-edgedsword.（点明观点）Ifweconsideritasausefultooltoimproveourlife,itwillcertainlybringunprecedentedconveniencetous.WiththeassistanceoftheInternet,onecansavehistimethroughworking,shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersathome.（正方理由一）Also,solitudeisn’talwaysequaltoloneliness.Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreativeandkeephismindsharp.（正方理由二）Ontheotherhand,toomuchrelianceonorindulgenceintheInternetwillcertainlyhaveanimpactonournormallifeandwork.Forinstance,indulginginsocialnetworkonlinemaycorrodepeoples’socialskills.Tobespecific,theymayfeellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to-face,whichmayaffecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamilymembersandfriends.（反方理由一）What’sworse,sittinginfrontofacomputeralldaylongm