宁波五月适应性考试作文分析(推荐信续写高分作文)

试题回顾假如你是华，你们学的外教Mr.James找一个人他8岁的儿子中文。请你写信推荐你的朋友王明，内容包括：1.写信目的，2.推荐理由。注意：1.词数80左2.可适当增加细节使行文连贯。审题：体：应用文之荐信结构内容写信目的+推理由时态：一现在时+般过时时等写信人与信人：学生------外教续写：Whitewasbornseventeenyearsagowithbirthproblemsinherbody.oforgans,bonesandmuscleswereoutofshape.Nooneexpectedhertosurvive.Shedidmakeitbutwithherstrangebodyfigure,everyonecouldrecognizeher,evenfromadistance

②InEmilyWhite'shometown,therewasayearlyoutdoorperformanceintheschoolauditorium(

礼堂)hadbeenperformedforsomanyyearsandactuallyhadbecomeoneofthemostimportanteventsoftheChristmasseasonformanyofthetown'speople.③Manypeopletriedouteachyearforit,butsomanywereturnedaway.Itcanonlyincludethemostexcellentpeopleinthefield.toMrs.Owens-hermusicteachertoasktojoinintheperformance.Withoutlettinghersing,Mrs.OwenstookalookatAmy'sbodyandsaid,"Child,youjustdon'tfit.wouldstareatandthatwouldyouuncomfortable.Itwouldmakethemuncomfortable,too.⑤Withoutsingingasinglenote,Emilywassentbackthroughthedoorofthechoralroom.Hurtandupset,shedecidedtotryoutagain.ButMrs.Owensretired.HeheardaboutEmilyandsuggestedthatshehaveatry.didn'twanttoberejectedagain,soshehesitatedalittleaboutit.Emilystruggled,thedoor

waspushedopenandMr.Buttlercalled,“Emily,you'renext."Althoughkindofnervous,EmilydidasMr.Buttlertoldhertodo.Mr.ButtlersatbythepianotokeepEmilycompany.WhenEmilyfinishedhertestingperformance,thankedMr.Buttlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.couldn'tsleepthatnight.Shewassufferingfromthefeelingsthatshedidn'tfitandthegreatneedtobeaccepted.Bythenextmorning,herstomachwaseveninpainbecauseofstress.

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