浙江高考英语应用文试题解析

2020年1月浙江高考英语应用文试题解析01PartOne试题解读思路点拨谋篇布局之开头本题为熟人（朋友）之间的信件，故无需做自我介绍点明身份。从简明的角度出发，建议开头段开门见山提出邀请。思考：I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechCompetitioninourschool.WhydoyouinviteGeorge?KnowingthatyouarequitefluentandexpertinMandarin,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechContest.Tip1:

次要点——George的优势（邀请George的原因）可以用非谓语做原因状语的形式表现出来。谋篇布局之中段邀请信内容时间(必备)报名方式（必备）奖项设置到某处报名或填写报名表送到某处(邮箱或办公室),需写上截止时间。具体到某月某日或周几的早中晚的某一时刻。参赛优势地点（必备）评委话题（必备）学校里适合大型集会的场所，如报告厅、礼堂、剧场等。中文演讲赛，话题最好体现中国元素，如：我最喜爱的中国文化元素或我眼中的中国等。可适当举例说明话题的涵盖面。可从兴趣、性格、特长等角度出发，适当描述。可适当描述奖项、奖品设置为体现比赛的规格和权威性，可适当列举评委阵容。谋篇布局之中段主要点的表达：1.时间、地点、话题ThetimeforthecontestisJanurary17thanditwillbeheldinthelecturehall.Thethemeforitis“MyFirstimpressiononChina”.Onthethemeof“FirstimpressiononChina”,thecompetitionisscheduledtobelaunchedintheschoolauditoriumat6p.m.onJanuary17th.Tip2:

以competition为主线，将时间、地点作为主要信息组成主句，将话题以介词短语的形式表现出来。这个并列句中主、谓语均不一致，缺乏一贯而终的主线，句子只是“貌合神离”。主-系-表结构的简单句给人以“回答问题”的感觉，缺乏情感。Howtocombinetheinformation?谋篇布局之中段主要点的表达：2.报名方式Ifyouareinterested,pleasefeelfreetosignupforitbyEmail.Tip3:根据过往经历和生活经验，从读者视角出发，适当增加必要的细节。如果George害怕失败而不敢参赛，你将如何鼓励他？

Yourabundantexperienceandoutstandingpresentationskillswillallowyoutowinoutinthecontest.邮件的具体地址是什么？报名的截止时间是什么？表明George的参赛优势和获奖可能，增强他参赛的信心和勇气。Soifyou’reinterested,pleasesignupforitontheschoolwebsite(fileyourapplicationviaChinesecontest@)beforeJanuary15th.谋篇布局之结尾本题属于朋友间建议性质的邀请，故无需要求对方回复。为彰显诚意，可在结尾段表明期待参加，并可提前预祝对方取得好成绩。常用句式：Yourpresenceishighlyanticipated.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.这封信是否需要回复？朋友之间需要如此客套吗？Lookingforwardtoyourinvolvement.Wishyouagreatsuccess!Tip4:遣词造句应从适切性角度出发，根据与写信对象的亲疏程度选择与之相适应的语言，切忌生搬硬套模板句。02PartTwo下水作文赏析DearGeorge,KnowingthatyouarequitefluentandexpertinMandarin(普通话),I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaChineseSpeechContesttobeheld.

Onthethemeof“FirstimpressiononChina”,thecompetitionisscheduledtobelaunchedintheschoolauditorium

onJanuary17that6p.m.Undoubtedly,yourabundantexperienceandoutstandingpresentationskillswillallowyoutowinoutinthecontest.Soifyou’reinterested,pleasesignupforitontheschoolwebsitebeforeJanuary15th. Lookingforwardtoyourinvolvement.Wishyouagreatsuccess!Yours,LiHua(90words)KeenFaithfulConcise03PartThree备考资源同体裁同话题备考资源DearJack,IamLiHua.OnbehalfofStudentUnion,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeoftheEnglishSpeechContesttobeheldnextFridayinourauditorium/schoolhall.

Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlastabouttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeechesonthegiventopic“Doingthingsrightordoingrightthings”.Withyourattendanceandpreciouscomments,itisboundtobeagreatsuccess.

Itcouldn'tbebetterifyoucouldofferussomevaluableadviceonlearningEnglishattheendoftheactivity.

Yourattendanceisgreatlyexpected.Pleaseinformyourpresenceatyourearliestconvenience.