作文用词及句型

作文用词及句型表示转折的连词ButWhile(多带有“但是”和“当”双重含义）yet(但，多带有惊讶和出乎意料之意）Whereas（而，多为强烈对比的表现)表示转折的副词however（然而）Nevertheless（然而）Nonetheless（同nevertheless)Yet（然而）Still(仍然，有不顾前文所述之意）表示转折性对比的副词和词组InsteadOnthecontraryIncomparisonBycontrast（形成鲜明对比的是）Incontrastwith/to表示让步的连词和词组ThoughAlthoughEvenifEventhoughDespitethefactthatInspiteofthefactthat表示让步的介词DespiteInspiteof表示原因和结果的词表示原因的连词/词组BecauseSinceAsFor表示原因的介词/词组DuetoOwingtoThankstoOnaccountof（因为，基于）Becauseof表示结果的连词/词组SoSothatSo…thatSuch…that表示结果副词/词组Therefore（那么）Hence（因此）ConsequentlyThus（从而，这样）Asaresult表示原因导致结果的动词/词组Leadto（导致）Contribute

to（对…作出贡献）Accountfor(说明…的原因）BeresponsibleforResultinBringabout（招致）表示结果源于原因的动词/词组Liein（在于）ResultfromBeattributedto（被归因于）Comefrom（来自于）Derivefrom（从…衍生而来）Originatefrom（源于，起源于）表示“重要”的词

？ImportantVitalCrucialNecessaryEssentialIndispensableUrgentImmediateSevereSeriousIrreversible（无法挽回的）Irreparable（无法挽回的）DisastrousCatastrophic优美句式的三个标准完整统一连贯流畅精炼简洁完整统一

优美的句子必须表达统一的、完整的思想内容，而不是多个彼此无关的意义的堆彻。Asweweredrivingoutinthecountry,wemetamanridingabicycle,andwepassedatruckfullyloadedwithvegetables,andonourwaywestoppedatagrocer’stogetsomefruit.应该改为三个句子并突出其关联性Asweweredrivingoutintothecountry,wemetamanridingabicycle.Laterwepassedatruckfullyloadedwithvegetables.Onourwayback,westoppedatagrocer’stogetsomefruit.

连贯流畅

具有连贯性亦是优秀句式的一个要素。它要求句中相关联的词语词序正确，能将相互间的关系表达得清楚、明白。It’sraining.Ididn’tbringanumbrellawithme.Iwaswet.It’sraining,butIdidn’tbringanumbrellawithme.SoIwaswet.表示因果的Therefore,consequently,thus,hence,as,for,becauseof,forthisreason,dueto,owingto,thanksto,onthataccount,inthisway…表示递进的Furthermore,moreover,besides,also,too,likewise,what’smore,inaddition表示转折的But,however,yet,unless,instead,unlike,regardless,exceptfor,incontrast,ontheotherhand表示让步的Though,evenso,eventhough,despitethat表示强调的Indeed,certainly,naturally,obviously,clearly,actually,surely,ofcourse,asamatteroffact,inthiscase,anyway,inanycase,inparticular表示比较关系的Like,similarly,likewise,despite,unlike,nevertheless,while,still,conversely,accordingly,meanwhile,onthecontrary,equallyimportant,atthesametime表示列举的Namely,incidentally,forexample,toillustrate,acaseinpoint表示时空关系的First,second,finally,before,later,meanwhile,next,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile,tobeginwith,atfirst,atlast,beyond,farther,closeto,infrontof,inthecentreof,oppositeto精炼简洁写作时要注意避免重复、累赘的用词，力求用精炼的语言把意思表达清楚。ShewillcomebackhomeintheearlypartofMay.ShewillcomebackhomeinearlyMay.Wemustfindsomesolutiontosolvetheproblem.Wemustfindsomesolutionto/fortheproblem.IthinkinmymindthatIamintroublenow.IthinkI’mintroublenow.一简单句变长句句型一：并列句1.以and为代表的（包括and,both…and,notonly…butalso…,neither…nor…等）2.以or为代表的（包括or,either…or等）表示选择的并列连词3.以but为代表的（包括but,not…but,while,whereas,only,yet等）表示语义转折和对比的并列连词。并列句是零散而又相互关联的句子的简单相加。Hewasseriouslyill.Hehastohavealungtransplant.Hewasseriouslyillandhastohavealungtransplant.安全系数高还有其他合并方法吗？Sincetheboywasseriouslyill,hehastohavealungtransplant.（原因状语句）Beingseriouslyill,theboyhastohavealungtransplant.（非谓语状语句）Itisbecausetheseriousillnessthattheboyhastohavealungtransplant.（强调句）Theboy,whowasseriousill,hastohavealungtransplant.（从句）Theboybeingseriouslyill,hastohavealungtransplant.（独立主格）句型二：附加句插入语同位语定语从句（略）财富可以带来什么？Firstofall,moneycanbuymorethings.Apartfromthat,wealthenablesonetotravelaroundtheworld.Lastbutnotleast,wealthcanhelppeopletohaveaccesstoabettereducation.试试插入语：Firstofall,veryobviously,moneycanbuymorethings.Apartfromthat,withoutanddoubt,wealthenablesonetotravelaroundtheworld.Lastbutnotleast,asfarasIamconcerned,wealthcanhelppeopletohaveaccesstoabettereducation.同位语Mr.Yuisverykindandhospitable.Mr.Yu,ourprincipalofthehighschool,isverykindandhospitable.Iaskedthreepeopletospendthebirthdaywithme.Iaskedthreepeople,intimatefriendssincechildhood,tospendthebirthdaywithme.二，多个短句合并为一个长句句型一：分词短语作状语Iamsinging.I’mdancing.I’msohappy.Singinganddancing,Iamsohappy.Theyoungpeoplearepressuredbythecompetitioninthedomesticsociety.Theyalsofilledwiththedreamtoknowmoreabouttheworld.Sotheystrugglefortheoverseasdiploma.Pressuredbythecompetitioninthedomesticsocietyandfilledwiththedreamtoknowmoreabouttheworld,theyoungpeoplestrugglefortheoverseasdiploma.主语一致从山顶上看，这座城市十分漂亮。Seeingfromthetopofthemountain,thecityisverybeautiful.Seeingfromthetopofthemountain,Ifinditisverybeautiful.Seenfromthetopofthemountain,thecityisverybeautiful.考虑了这些因素，问题就可以解决了。Consideringthesefactors,theproblemwillbesolved.Allthesefactorsconsidered,theproblemwillbesolved.(独立主格）句型二：非生命主语Itiswidelybelieved/thought/acceptedthatknowledgeispower.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatlanguageispower.Itcannotbedeniedthatthecampuslifeisincreasinglyexpensive.Itmustbepointedoutthattimeandtidewaitfornoman.Itmustbekeptinmindthatthereisnosecretofsuccessbuthardwork.Itcanbeseenfromthiscasethatthereisnodifficultyintheworldwecannotovercome.Ithasbeenprovedthateverysubstance,nomatterwhatitis,madeupofatoms.Therebe句型Thereisagrowingagreement/realization/awarenessthatmoneyisnoteverything.Thereisnodoubtthatyouwillbehelpedbyothersifyouhaveanydifficulties.Thereisnodenyingthat…THINKOVER…Ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicyclesaresuperiortocars.Acarefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillshowthesuperiorityoftheformertothelatter.Rewritethefollowingsentencesbyusingimpersonalsubjects.ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.Moreandmorepeopleagreethatwomenshouldenjoyfullequalitywithmen.Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotachievesuccessassoonaswealwaysexpect.Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreatpressureofpopulationgrowth,wewillhaveacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.KEYItiswidelyacceptedthatbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.Thereisagrowingagreementthatwomenshouldenjoyfullequalitywithmen.Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewillnotbringussuccessaswealwaysexpect.Abetterunderstandingofthegreatpressureofpopulationgrowthwillbringusacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.巧用语法难点被动语态倒装被动语态