2021年新高考1作文读后续写母亲节礼物

2021年新高考1卷读后续写母亲节礼物原文：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Para2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.原文分析：when：Mother’sDaywhere:theirhome—kitchen—upstairswho:thetwinsJennaandJeff,theirfather,theirmotherwhat:ThetwinswantedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotheronMother’sDayandgaveherasurprise.Butitturnedouttobeafailure.人称：第三人称时态：一般过去时本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。合理的续写：第一段：爸爸看到一片狼藉很纳闷，双胞胎解释原因，爸爸提出帮忙一起做/指导孩子做，成功做出美味早餐，双胞胎非常高兴。第二段：妈妈收到孩子的母亲节礼物，感动，幸福满足，双胞胎自豪。父亲的吃惊疑惑及反应：1.Atthesightofthemessinthekitchen，theirfatherrealizedwhathadhappened.2.Theygavetheirfatheranaccountofwhathappened.3.Totheirsurprise,fatherdidn’tscoldthembutpattedthemontheshouldersgently,comfortingthatitwould1

beallright.4.Learninghischildren’splan,thefatherwasmovedandfeltproudoftheiracts.Heofferedtohelpthemtocompletethesurprise.5.Itwasthemessinthekitchenthatsurprisedhimandhejuststoodtherewithoutaword.双胞胎由害怕转为喜悦：1.Theywereliketheantsinthepotswithhandsnowheretoplace.2.Jennadroppedherheadandhadasigh.3.Nosoonerhadthetwinsseentheirfatherthanagleamofhoperushedtothem.4.Aburstofhappinesssweptherlikeatidalwave，surroundingherlikethebrightestsunshine.和父亲一起做早饭1.Thefatherstoodbesideandinstructedthetwinstodealwithalltheseproblemswithpatience.Everythingseemedtogetbackontrackafterawhile.2.Undertheirfather’sinstruction,theysmoothlyfinishedthebreakfast.3.Undertheguidanceofhim,theycleanedthemess,boiledtheporridgeandmadeanotherFrenchtoast.温馨场面（妈妈的感动，幸福，孩子的自豪，父亲用相机记录下美好）1.“Surprise!HappyMother’sDay”criedthetwinsexcitedly,waitingfortheirmother’sreactioninanticipation.2.Theylookedattheirmother,eyestwinklingwithanticipation.Inthemeanwhile,theirmotherloweredherheadtoeatthattoastandutteredinanexcitingvoice“Yummy,thisisthemostdeliciousfoodI’vehad.”，Shewasbathedintheloveofherchildren.3.Shewasoverflowingwithhappinessandappreciation,andjoyfultearswelledupinhereyes.4.Themothertooktheminherarmswithhappytearsblurringhereyes.5.Theorangelightofrisingsunshonethroughthewindowintotheroom,makingthisscenemoremovingandwarmer.6.Seeingsuchmovingscene,shefeltshewasenvelopedwithasenseofprideandhereyesgleamedwithdelightandsurprise.Anditwasatthattimethatshefeltthekidshadgrownup.7.Thefathercapturedthepreciousmomentwithhiscameraintime.8.Itdawnedonthetwinsthatshowingtheirloveandgratitudetotheirbelovedonescanreallymaketheirday.Possibleversion1Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Catchingsightoftheirfather,Jenna’sgloomy(沮丧的，阴郁的）faceturnedintobigsmilewhileJeffwastryinghardtofightbacktears（忍住眼泪）.Confusedaboutwhathadhappened,thefatherdarted(急冲)tocheckJeff’shandandatthesametimelistenedtoJenna’sexplanationcarefully.Anexpressionofintense（强烈的，非常的）joyilluminating(照亮)thefather’seyesaftergettingtoknowthelovelyheartofhistwins,hepatientlyguidedthemtomakeanattemptonceagain.Withinhalfanhour,sweet-smellingporridgeandwell-bakedbreadwerelyingonadelicate（精美的，雅致的）plate,onwhichaheartwasdrawnwithsomeapplejam.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“HappyMother’sDay,dearMom.”thetwinswhisperedtotheirmother.Withamber（琥珀色的）sunlightpiercing(穿过)throughthewindow,themotherhadadrowsy(昏昏欲睡的)lookatthetwinsandthenglancedatthefoodintheirhands,tearsmisting/blurring（使模糊）hereyes.Shequicklytookholdoftheplate,putitonthetable,andhuggedthetwinstightlyinherarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,mybabies.Youaremybestgifts.”Justatthatmoment,thefather2

tiptoedin,lookingatthesceneasifhehadthewholeworldhewanted.Lovemaybeclumsy(笨拙的),butbeautifulindeed.Possibleversion2Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Spottingthemessysituation,theirfatherunderstoodeverything.Insteadofblamingthemfortheircarelessness,theirfatherputon/woreabrightsmileandpattedontheirheads.“Doyouwanttogiveyourmotherasurprise?Letmehelpyoufixit.”Fathersaidwithamischievous(淘气的，恶作剧的heads,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.Underthefather’sinstruction,theyfirstcleanedupthemess,andthentheyrespectively(分别地，各自地)tookresponsibilityforFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Withthe)twinkleinhiseyes.Hearingthewords,thetwinsnoddedtheirexperienceoffailure,theyaccomplishedtheirtaskperfectlythistime.Lookingattheinviting(诱人的，有魅力的)breakfast,theyweredeprivedof(被剥夺,失去)allpowerofspeechbyexcitement.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theinstantshenoticedthebreakfastwasbroughtinbed,aripple（涟漪）ofexcitementflashedthroughherface.Hereyeswanderedbetweenthebreakfastandthetwinsasifshewasaskingwhathappened.“HappyMother’sDay!”thetwinsexclaimedwithonevoice（异口同声）.Themother’sfacebeamed（发光）andhershiningsmilelituptheroom.“Thankyoumyangles!Comehereandgivemeahug.”Thetwinsrushedintotheirmother’sarmsandjustatthatmoment,theirfatherstoppedbehindthem.“Hey!Lookhere!”Themotherandthetwinsturnedtheirheadssimultaneously（同时地）.“Click-click.”Usingthecamera,thefatherrecordedthememorablescene.WhataMother’sDaySurprise!Possibleversion3Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Withtearsinhereyes,Jennarantoherfatherandexplainedeverything.AfterconfirmingtheburnonJeff’shandwaswelltended（照料，照顾）,theirfathercheeredthemup,helpedthemcleanitupandpreparedthebreakfastall