专题01-7感谢信-2023届新高考英语写作精讲写作模板(教案)

专题01-7感谢信——2023届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板【典题解读】(2021年6月·浙江卷)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家，请给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.回忆Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAlex,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【解读】这是一篇应用文写作之感谢信。要求考生给Alex写一封邮件以表示对他在“你〞英语学习方面所给的帮助表示感谢。题干除了把写信的缘由交代清楚了(在Alex即将返回自己的国家之际，对他所给的帮助表示衷心的感谢)，其他只给了笼统的提示，需要考生围绕“回忆Alex对你的帮助〞去展开。展开时必须要紧紧扣住“经常帮助你学习英语〞这个话题(在哪些方面给了你实实在在的帮助，在他的帮助下/指导下，你所取得的成绩等等，或者用虚拟语气“withoutyourhelp/butforyourhelp/guidance,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressinEnglish.〞开启话题)。【答案】DearAlex,Learningthatyou’releavingfortheUnitedStatessoon,I’meagerlywritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourhelp.Honestlyspeaking,it’ssoniceofyoutooffermeaclassofpracticallearningskills.Underyourprofessionalguidance,IhavemadesuchunbelievableprogressinEnglish.It’sindeedapleasantsurpriseformetoevenrankfirstinarecentEnglishspeechcontest.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmforEnglishandpromotesmetoregaintremendousconfidence.NowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua附录：中间段另外两种表达1.Tobefrank,withoutyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressinmyEnglish.Itwasyourpatientinstructionsthatenabledmetocommunicatewithforeignersfluently.Apartfromthat,notonlydidmyEnglishlevelimprove,butIalsohadabetter

understandingofEnglishculture,whichisbeneficialtomyEnglishlearning.WhatcountsmostwasthatyoutaughtmehowtokeepcalmandoptimisticwhenIwasfacedwiththedifficulties.IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.2.InthelatestEnglishexamination,Igotthefirstplaceinmyclass.Franklyspeaking,butforyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchprogressinEnglish.WheneverImetdifficulties,youalwayscheeredmeupandhelpedmeout.What’smore,itwasyourloveandsupportthatgotmethroughthehardtimes.【写作点拨】感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心、支持、馈赠、款待过自己的集(群)体或个人表示感谢的书信，或者是对人家写给你的慰问信、祝贺信回复的信件。一般来说，高考应用文感谢信的题干对“由于什么事情要给对方表示谢意〞交代得比拟具体，但是对事情具体细节题干提示得既简单又笼统，因此，考生在写作时要特别注意围绕题干所给的要求增加具体内容，以使行文连贯，力求符合题目所规定的字数要求。第一段：(问好、介绍自己)。由于什么事情要给对方表达谢意；第二段：细述对方给予的帮助并发表感想或表示赞赏；第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报对方的愿望。【常用素材】How’severythinggoing?Iamwritingthesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyoufor...您最近好吗？我写下这寥寥几行是为了表达我对您……发自内心的感谢之情。I’mwritingtoconveymysinceregratitudefor...我写信是为了表达我对……的衷心感谢。Iwouldliketoconveymythankstoyouforyourkindhelp.我想感谢你的帮助。Forthisreason,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincerethankstoyou.为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。I’mwritingtothankyouforthefewwonderfuldaysin...我写信感谢你帮我在……度过的快乐日子。Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfelt/sincere/earnestthanks/gratitudetoyouforyour...在这封信中，我要对您的……表示衷心的/真诚的/诚挚的感谢。Havingbeenthoroughlyimpressedwith...Ihavereceived,Iwouldliketoextendmysinceregratitude/thankstoyouforyour...我对收到的……留下了深刻的印象，谨对您的……向您表示衷心的感谢。Thankyouverymuchforthe...yousentme.It’soneofthemostwonderful...Ihaveevergot.非常感谢您给我寄来的……。这是我收到的最好的……之一。Iamwritingtoconvey/extendmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourkindhelpduringmystay...,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyedmyself.我写这封信是为了表达我衷心的感谢，感谢您在我逗留……期间给予我的帮助，没有您的帮助，我就不会玩得那么开心的。Ifithadn’tnotbeenfor/haditnotbeenfor/butfor/withoutyourassistancein...,IfearthatIwouldhavebeen/done...如果不是因为/不是因为/没有你在……方面的帮助，恐怕我就会……Imadegreatprogresswithyourhelp,withoutwhichIcouldn’thavegotthefirstprize.在你的帮助下，我取得了很大的进步，没有你的帮助，我不可能得到一等奖。It’sconsiderateofyoutodo...formeandIdoappreciateitmorethanIcansay.您为我做……真是体贴，我真的非常感谢你。Iwouldliketothankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforallthatyouhavedoneforme.我要衷心感谢您为我所做的一切。Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.您对我如此的友好和慷慨，我真是感谢不尽。WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.每当我遇到困难时，你都给了我慷慨的帮助和不断的指导。Tobeginwith,itwasyouwho...carefullyandpatiently.首先，是你认真耐心地……What’smore,Istillrememberthedaywhen...而且，我还记得……的那一天。Eventually,withyourhelp,Imadeit.最后，在你的帮助下，我成功了。Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks〞toexpressmyappreciationforyourgeneroushelp.任何语言都不能表达我对您慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。WheneverIlookback,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofyou.每当我回首往事，我就忍不住想起你。Itwassokindofyouto...你……，真是太好了。Nothingwillbeabletoerasemywonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.没有什么能抹去我美好的回忆，我将永远珍惜它们。Thankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp.再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmysincerethanks.如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感谢。Yourkindnessandhelpwillalwaysberemembered.我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,Ihavemadesuchgreatprogress.多亏你的慷慨帮助，我真是感谢不尽。Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.你对我如此友好和慷慨，我真是感谢不尽。Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks〞toexpressmyappreciateforyourgeneroushelp.我希望有比“谢谢〞更好的词能表达我对你慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。Thanksalotforyourassistanceagain.Givemybestregardstoyourfamily.再次感谢您的帮助。代我向你的家人问好。IsincerelyhopeyoucancometoChinaforavisitwhenit’sconvenienttoyouandIwillbeyourguide.我真诚地希望你能在方便的时候来中国参观，我做您的向导。【模板构建】模板一Dear_______,(Howareyoudoing?/Howiseverythinggoing?/Howaboutyourlife/study/work?)I’mwritingtoconvey/expressmyheartfelt/sinceregratitudetoyoufor/thanksforyour_______(感谢的缘由).Undoubtedly,ifithadn’tnotbeenfor/haditnotbeenfor/butfor/withoutyourassistancein_________(对方给予你某方面的帮助),IfearthatIwouldhavebeen/done_________(后果).WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.Tobeginwith,itwasyouwho________(帮助1).Besides,________(帮助2).What’smore,Istillrememberthedaywhen/neverIwillforgetyour_______(帮助3).I’mmorethangratefulforwhatyouhavedoneformeagain/Thanksalotforyourassistance/help/kindnessagain.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth/Wishyouallthebest/Givemybestregardsto_______(何人何方)!

Yours,LiHua【模板运用】一(改编自2022·全国高三专题练)假定你是李华，上周六你的英国好友Eric教你如何创立个人网站，你从中学到很多知识。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.简述Eric给予你的帮助；3.再次表示感谢并向他的家人问好。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEric,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

Li

Hua【答案】DearEric,I’mwritingtoconveymysinceregratitudeforhelpingmecreateapersonalwebsitelastSaturday.Undoubtedly,haditnotbeenforyourassistanceinfurnishingmewithprofessionalguidance,IfearthatIwouldnothavecreatedmyownpersonalwebsite.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.Tobeginwith,itwasyouwhoexplainedrelevantknowledgetomecarefullyandpatiently.Besides,youtaughtmethestepsofcreatingapersonalwebsiteindetail.What’smore,Istillrememberthedaywhenyouencouragemenottogiveup.Eventually,withyourhelp,Imadeit.Thanksalotforyourassistanceagain.Givemybestregardstoyourfamily.Yours,

Li

Hua模板二Dear_______,(Howareyoudoing?/Howiseverythinggoing?/Howaboutyourlife/study/work?)Iamwritingthisletter/thesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude/thankstoyoufor_______(感谢的缘由).WhenIlookback,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofyou/whatyouhavedoneforme.Itwassokindofyouto________(帮助1).Besides,you________(帮助2),whichreallysurprisedme/whichmademelesshomesick/Besides,Ihavetotosinghighpraisefor/speakhighlyof________(帮助2),whichwasjustlike_______(做类比).What’smore,Ishallalwaysremember________(帮助3).Nothingwillbeabletoerasemywonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.Isincerelyhopeyoucancometo_______(何地)foravisitwhenit’sconvenienttoyouandIwillbeyourguide.Yours,LiHua【模板运用】二(改编自2022·湖南宁乡市教育研究中心模拟预测)假设你叫李华，暑假期间在伦敦旅行时借住在你妈妈的朋友布朗夫人家。请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件表示对她的感谢，并邀请她来中国。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMrs.Brown,How’severythinggoing?IamwritingthesefewlinestoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourwarmhospitalitywhenIstayedinSydney.WheneverIlookback,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofyou.ItwassokindofyoutooffermeacomfortableandcleanroominyourhousewhenIwasinLondon.Besides,youcookedmesomedeliciousfood,whichmademelesshomesick.What’smore,IreallyappreciatedyourpracticingoralEnglishwithme,whichhelpedmemakesuchrapidprogressinmyspokenEnglish.Nothingwillbeabletoerasemywonderfulmemories,andIwillcherishthemforever.IsincerelyhopeyoucancometoChinaforavisitwhenit’sconvenienttoyouandIwillbeyourguide.Yours,LiHua【写作实践】一(改编自2022·安徽安庆一中三模)假设你是李华，高三生活即将结束，跟同学、老师相处多年，友情弥足珍贵，请你给你最喜欢的同学或者老师写一封信。内容如下：1.写信目的；2.你们之间难忘的事情；3.再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右，文中不要出现真实的人名或地名。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMs.Zhang,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMs.Zhang,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforhelpingmesuccessfullypassthecollegeentranceexamination.Undoubtedly,butforyourassistanceinmystudy,IfearthatIwouldn’thavebeensuccessful.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youofferedmegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidance.Tobeginwith,itwasyou,asmybelovedheadteacher,whohelpedmeadapttothestudylifeofseniorthreeassoonaspossible.Besides,whenIwasatalossafterIfailedinoneexmination,youcomfortedmeanddiscussedwithmethereasonsformyfailingintheexam.What’smore,neverwillIforgetyourprofessionalguidanceonmyEnglishstudy.I’mmorethangratefulforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth.Yours,LiHua【写作实践】二(改编自2022·天津经济技术开发区一中)假设你叫李华，在美国学习期间，吃住在一户美国人家里，现在马上就要学成回国，临走前你给你的房东Mrs.Jones写封感谢信，