新教材高中英语UNIT5RevealingnaturePart4Writing提升训练含解析外研版选择性必修第一册

PAGEPAGE5Part4Writing应用文写作写作题目假设你是李华,英语老师让你观察某种植物的生长过程。请根据你所拍摄的图片写一篇观察日记,记述蒜苗的生长过程,以便在英语课上跟大家分享。内容包括:1.种植方式;2.生长环境;3.生长变化。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:garlicclove蒜瓣;tendershoot嫩芽;garlicsprout蒜苗

思路点拨主题观察植物生长体裁应用文人称以第一、三人称为主时态以一般现在时为主布局第一部分:播种方式;第二部分:生长过程;第三部分:生长结果。遣词造句Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空1.肩并肩地,并排地

2.出来

3.n.根

4.n.厘米

答案1.sidebyside2.getoutof3.root4.centimetreⅡ.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子(1)我小心地把蒜头分成蒜瓣,并排地种在一个圆形塑料碗里,尖头朝上。Icarefullydividethegarlicbulbsintoclovesandinaroundplasticbowl,andthepointedends.

(2)随着大蒜的生长,根长得越来越长。Withthegarlic,therootsgrow.

(3)根看起来像爷爷的白胡子。TherootsthewhitebeardofGrandpa.

(4)蒜苗一天天长得越来越高,已经长到20厘米左右了。Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigher,andtheyabout20centimetres.

答案(1)plantthemsidebyside;faceup(2)growing;longerandlonger(3)looklike(4)daybyday;havegrownto2.句式升级(5)用with的复合结构改写句(1)

(6)把句(2)和句(3)合并成一个含有定语从句的复合句

答案(5)Icarefullydividethegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.(6)Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.连句成篇

参考范文January8Icarefullydividethegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.ThenIpourenoughwaterintothebowlandputitinasunnyplace.Everyday,Iwaterthemontime.January16Manylightgreentendershootsaregettingoutofthecloves.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.January24Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andtheyhavegrowntoabout20centimetres.Allofthemlookverybeautiful,andarenotlessbeautifulthandaffodils.写作积累1.Letmetellyouabouthowtoplantatree.让我告诉你如何种树。2.Digaholelargeenoughforthetree,buttheholeshouldnotbetoodeep.给树挖一个足够大的坑,但坑不应该太深。3.Itisnecessarytokeepthesoildamp.保持土壤潮湿是必要的。4.Youhadbetterputthemintheshade/acoolplace.你最好把它们放在阴凉处。5.TheseedsproutstwodaysafterIputtheflowerpotbesidethewindow.我把花盆放在窗边两天后,种子就发芽了。6.Iwillcoveritwhentheweatheriscold.天气冷的时候我会把它盖上。7.Newleavessproutfromthestem.新叶从茎中萌发。8.Aflowerbudisgrowingatthetopofthestem.花芽在茎的顶端生长。9.Abudgraduallybecomesaflower.花蕾逐渐变成花朵。10.Therootsgrowdeeperintothesoil.根向土壤更深处生长。11.Astimegoesby,itgoes/runstoseed.随着时间的推移,花谢结籽。12.Thewhiteflowershavefallenfromthestem.白花从茎上落下来了。13.Thepinkflowerattractsseveralbees,whicharedancingaroundit.这朵粉红色的花吸引了几只蜜蜂,它们围着花儿跳舞。14.Itlooksasifeveryflowerissinging.好像每朵花都在唱歌。15.Youmustplaceitwherethereisenoughsunshine.你必须把它放在阳光充足的地方。16.Remembernottodisturbthemfrequentlywhiletheyareeating.记住不要在它们吃东西时经常打扰它们。17.IamsocuriousthatIgotoseeitseveraltimesaday.我如此好奇以至于每天去看它好几次。18.Itturnsoutthatyoucan'tfeedittoomuchfoodoritwillgetsick.事实证明,你不能喂它太多食物,否则它会生病。19.Afterconservation,hishairgetsbrighterandbrighter.经过养护,它的毛发越来越亮。20.Itseyeslooklikesapphires,anditsbodyisdottedwithseveralyellowspots.它的眼睛好像蓝宝石,身上点缀着几个黄色的斑点。实战演练P132()假设你是李华,你的英语老师要求同学们利用星期天的休息时间去观察某种动物,并用英语写一篇观察日记,准备回来在英语课上跟大家交流。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Part4Writing实战演练Onepossibleversion:Sunday,August22nd,FineThismorningIgotupveryearly.Iwantedtogotoseemygrandmother.WhenIwentdownstairs,Isawseveralantsdoingsomethinginthecorner.Iwassocuriousandstoppedtowatchthem.Itturnedoutthattheyweretryingtocarryalittlepieceofmeat.First,twoofthemcaughtoneendofthemeat.Th