-新教材高中英语UNIT1Wishyouwerehere表达作文巧升格学案译林版选择必修性必修第三册

PAGEPAGE4UNIT1Wishyouwerehere写一封介绍家乡的电子邮件本单元的写作项目是写一封介绍家乡的电子邮件，属于书信的写作范畴。[基本框架]开头(thebeginning)——引出写邮件的目的主体(thebody)——详细介绍你的家乡结尾(theending)——发出邀请[常用词块]1．belocated/situatedin/on...坐落在……2．coveranareaof...占地……3．hasalargepopulation人口众多4．datebacktotheTangDynasty追溯到唐朝5．hasmanyplacesofinterest有很多名胜6．isfamousforitsbeautifulWestLake因美丽的西湖而闻名[常用语句]★精彩开头1．IamsogladtoknowthatyouwillcometoTibetforavisit.NowletmeintroducesomethingaboutTibetforyou.我很高兴知道你会来西藏参观。现在让我简要介绍一下西藏。2．I'mpleasedthatyou'recomingtotourinChina.我很高兴你要来中国观光。★正文佳句1．ItislocatedinthesouthwestofChina.Ithasapopulationofabout2.8million，coveringanareaofmorethan1.2millionsquarekilometers.它位于中国的西南部。约有280万人口，占地面积达120多万平方公里。2．YibinisanimportanttransportationcenterofSichuanProvince，withhigh­speedrail，expressways，waterwaysandairlinesconvenientlyavailabletothecity.宜宾是四川省重要的交通枢纽，高铁、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。★余味结尾1．Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.Ibelievewe'llhaveagoodday.很期待见到你。我相信我们会有美好的一天。2．Providedyoucanvisitmyschoolsomeday，Iwillshowyouaroundit.假如有一天你能参观我的学校，我就带你参观一下。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游，发邮件向你询问改建后的前门大街的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1．简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；2．位置：天安门广场南面；3．交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；4．特色：步行街、铛铛车、茶馆、剧院等。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：步行街pedestrianstreet；铛铛车trolleycar；地铁subwayDearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltofQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours，LiHua[学生习作]DearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltofQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Onthis800­metrestreet，therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing，justonthesouthofTian'anmenSquare，it'sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakebusesNo.11，69or59！SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet，butithastrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops，butalsotothetheatersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrueChinesewayoflife.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours，LiHua点评：1.本文能够概括介绍前门大街的情况。2.有两次关于介词on的错误使用。3.个别句式有错误。如：...ithastrolleycarstotakeyou...[升格作文]DearSarah，ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltofQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreet，datingbacktoover600yearsago.Therearemorethan300shopsalongthis800­metrestreet.JusttothesouthofTian'anmenSquare，it'sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakebusesNo.11，69or59！SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet，butyoucantaketrolleycarstotheshops，thetheatersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours，LiHua假定你是李华，你的朋友Jack要来你的家乡参观。请给他写封邮件表示欢迎并简要介绍你的家乡，内容包括：1．自然环境；2．人文环境(交通、生活等)；3．表示欢迎。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】DearJack，I'mverygladtohearthatyouaregoingtopayavisittomyhometown.YibinislocatedinthesouthofSichuanProvince，intheintersectionofJinshaRiver，MinRiverandYangtzeRiver.Itisabeautifulcitywithgreenwaterandgreenhillsallaroundit.YibinisanimportanttransportationcenterofSichuanProvince，withhigh­speedrail，expressways，waterwaysandairlinesconvenientlyavailablet