专题09读后续写-2023届新高考英语写作精讲解题演示(原卷)

专题09读后续写-2023届新高考英语写作精讲+解题演示1.(2023秋·海南高三期末统考)Ialwaysbelieveinthesaying:Thingswilleventuallysortthemselvesout.Inthefaceofdifficultyandtrouble,Icanalwayspersuademyselftodomyworkfirstwithoutenoughconditions.Yesterday,wejustmovedintoanewhouseandspentallourmoney.Sowehadtogothroughtherestofthemonthuntilmyhusbandgotpaid.Today,mydaughter,Laurie,wenttoschool.Afterawhile,out-of-breathandtired,ourlittlegirlranbackablockbecauseshe’dforgottentotellmethatitwasherturntobringcupcakesfortheclass-—today!Iansweredherwithapromisetoreachherclassroomatnoonwiththecupcakes.Sherantoschoolagain,happy.Twominuteslater,imaginingLaurie’strustingsmilewhenIdeliveredonthepromise,Isearchedintheboxesforbakingtinsandthemixer.Iconfidentlysetthemonthecounterandthenopenedtherefrigerator,onlytodiscovertherewerenoeggs!HowwouldImakecupcakeswithouteggs?ItriedtofigureouthowIcouldfixtheproblem.CouldIborrowsomefromneighborsorfriends?CouldIbuysomeoncredit(赊账)?Itwasalmost9:30andIwasrunningoutoftime.Alittlevoiceinsidemewhispered,“Starttodoyourworkfirst!Thingswilleventuallysortthemselvesout.”“Okay,”Isaidtomyself,“IhavetotrymybesttokeepmywordtomylittlegirlandtheworstresultthatmighthappenisthatIbake‘cakes’withnoeggs.”Thenextstepwasanactoffaith.Iturnedontheovenandmeasuredallthematerialsasmylittlesonlinedthetinswithpapercups.We’djustfinishedmakingthefrosting(糖霜)whenIheardthemailmanclosetheboxatthefrontdoor.Ofcourse!Themailmancouldsendusarefund(退款)checkorsomethinginthemail!IrushedtothedoortogetthemailandwasshockedbywhatIfound.注意：1.续写词数应150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:There,justunderthemailbox,weretwoboxesofeggs!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThephonecallwasfrommyfriendBonnie.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.(2023秋·广东深圳高三期末统考)OnedaylastJune,Ipickedmysonupfromafterschoolcaretotakehimtothesecondofhistwice-weeklyboxingclasses.Hewastiredandhungryanddidn’tfeellikegoing.“Canyoudrivemetothedam(大坝),Mom?Iwanttofindsomethingfunthere,”hebegged.TheCollieryDamisapleasantattractioninourtown.Beautifulbigtreeswithbirdscalling,afreshwaterreservoir(水库)filledwithfish,andacresofpathstowander.ButIinsistedIhaddecidedthatitwasimportantthathefinishwhathestarted,andthatitwasequallyimportanttoteachhimthatsometimeswehavetodothingsevenwhenwedon’tfeellikeit.Effectively,Iwasignoringaneight-year-old’srequestforsomerest.Hewenttoschoolfivedaysaweek,aswellasbeforeandafterweekend.Howeverhadatutoronceaweek,twoboxingclassesandgymnasticsontheweekend.However,Ifeltitjustifiedinthathe’saveryactiveboyandneedswaystogetoutallhisenergy.Butonthisparticularday,hewasnotgoingtoletmeignorehisfeelings,howeverhardItried.Heevendeclaredthathewouldnevergototheboringboxingclassesandinsteadtakethepaintingcourseshehadbeenlongingfor.Asusual,Irejected,claimingthat’sanactivityforgirls.Aswegotinthehotcarfora15-minutedrivetoboxing,hereturnedtoathree-year-old--hescreamedandcriedandkickedmyseat.Wepulledintotheparkinglot,bothofuswornout,annoyedandangry.Mysontookoffhisseatbeltandcurled(蜷缩)intoaballonthefloor.WhatwasIdoing?WhywasIsodeterminedthathegotoboxing?WasIworriedthathisabsencewouldreflectbadlyonmeasaparentsomehow?Wouldn’titactuallyteachhimthatIheardhewastiredandhungryandneededabreakandthatitwasjustaswellthatboystookpaintingclasses?“Putonyourseatbelt,”Isaid.“We’regoingtothedam.”注意：1.续写词数应150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Whenwearrivedatthedam,Inoticedthetensiondisappearfrombothofourbodies._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Mysonhasnowquitboxingandistakingpaintingonceaweek.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.(2023秋·山东潍坊高三期末统考)clock.Everyarlywintermorning.Joanwassleepingsoundlywhenthephoneranginthelivingroom.Sherolledoverandglancedattheclockonthewall—itwasalreadynineo’clock.Everyweekendmorning,hermotherhadtoworkpart-timeinthecafe.AlthoughJoanwasstillsleepy,sheknewshehadtogetup.Afterall,shedidn’texpectherbrotherMike,whowassleepinglikealog,tohearthephone.Shequietlywentovertothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthereceiver,ontheotherendcamethewarmheartedgreetings,“Goodmorning,myDear!”Recognizingthevoicefromherfather,Joanwasimmediatelysurroundedbyasenseofjoyandthesleepinesssweptaway.hard.Borntherwasaseaman,whorarelycameback.Workingontheseawasreallyhard.Borninanot-richfamily,JoanandMikefeltthestressoflifebuttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudentsthroughouttheacademiccareerandactivelyinvolvedinschoolactivities.Theybecametheprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.“Goodmorning,Dad,what’sup?”Joansaidinaneasytone.“Ihavebeenverynicerecently,mybaby.Todayisyourmother’sbirthday,andIhaveorderedheracakeonlineanditshouldcometothehouseinoneandhalfanhour.Doremembertotakethecake.”Hearingherfather’swords,Joanfeltalittleashamed.HowshecouldforgetMum’sbirthday!Shetookaglanceatthedirtyclothespiledonthesofaandtheoilyfloorthathadn’tbeenmopped(拖地)forafewdays—Therewastwohoursbeforehermothercameback.ShecalculatedtheyhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforMum.up.Weingofthis,shefeltfullofexcitement.“Well,Dad,nowI’mgoingtowakeMikeup.WewillgiveMumasurprise!”JoanhungupthephonewithDad,andhurriedlywenttoMike’sroomtosharehimherBigCleaningplan.AfterlisteningtoJoan,Mikereadilyacceptedheridea.注意：1.续写词数应150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:TheBigCleaningplanbegan._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.(2023秋·湖南长沙高三期末统考)IwasbackpackingandplannedtoclimbavolcanocalledVolcanBaru.At3,474m,itisthehighestpeakinthecountryandoneoftheonlyplacesonEarthfromwhereyoucanseetheAtlanticandthePacificOceansatthesametime.Itisanactivevolcano,butlasteruptedaround1550.hotel.Iffbeforesunrise.Itwasalittlecold,soIhadpulledontightsundermytrousers.Iintendedtoreachthetopbymidday,andthenreturnbeforedarktogetalifttomyhotel.I’vealwaysfeltsafetravellingasawomanonmyown,whichI’vedonesincemy20s.Ilovethefr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