高中英语短文改错含答案

9.9.NOeOlIlikeridmgmybike.Thoughitisnotveiynew,butitismybestfriend.Ifindveiyconvenienttogoanywherewitliabike.Ridegivesmenotonlyexercisebutalsopleasure・Iusemybikemostlyonsunmierwhentheweatlieriswarmanddiy・Itcanveryunpleasantinwinterwhenitiscoldandraiiiispouringdown・Itcanalsobeveiydanger・OfcourseIwillbeverycaiefiilonmybike.Illfacts,accidentsaienottheonlyproblem・Ou亡dayIwenttoschoolandcomebacktofindliisfiontwheelwasmissing・Itwasalongwalktotherepairer'sshop.NowIhavetwostronglocks.3.6.Ilikeridmgmybike.Thoughitisnotveiynew,butitismybestfriend.Ifindveiyconvenienttogoanywherewitliabike.Ridegivesmenotonlyexercisebutalsopleasure・Iusemybikemostlyonsunmierwhentheweatlieriswarmanddiy・Itcanveryunpleasantinwinterwhenitiscoldandraiiiispouringdown・Itcanalsobeveiydanger・OfcourseIwillbeverycaiefiilonmybike.Illfacts,accidentsaienottheonlyproblem・Ou亡dayIwenttoschoolandcomebacktofindliisfiontwheelwasmissing・Itwasalongwalktotherepairer'sshop.NowIhavetwostronglocks..【答案与解析】去掉buta汉语可说^虽然……但是……S但英语习惯上不能相应地说though...but...o（注：不能去掉though,因为这样还会涉及大小写的改动，而高考短文改错每行只允许改动一处。）find后加itD此it为形式宾语，宾正的宾语绘其后的不定式。3・Ride改为Ridmgo动词原形不能用作主语，要改为动名词。on改为liio表示在某个季节，用介词in。can后加be。此句缺谓语动词。danger改为dangerous□用形容词作表语。facts改为factoinfact为习语，意为'•事实上二come改为came。came与其前的went为并列谓语。his改为myo前后使用代词应一致。此行无错。No-02TheEnglishCornerinZhongshanParkiswherepeoplegotopractisethekspeakingEnglish・EverySundayafternoontheygatheraround,talktoeachotherinEnglish.Amongtheyarestudents,teachers,doctors,andsoon.IfiistwenttoanEnglishCornerwhenIwasinJuniorGradeTwo.IwentthereeveiySundayandchatwithsomepeopleinEnglish・InthepastthreeyearsIhadneverbeenabsent.I'msurePvemadesomeprogressesinmylisteningandspeaking・AndIhavemademanyfiiendstheie.TheEnglishComerisreallygoodplace・Ihopetliatmorefiiendswilljoininus.on.7.TheEnglishCornerinZhongshanParkiswherepeoplegotopractisethekspeakingEnglish・EverySundayafternoontheygatheraround,talktoeachotherinEnglish.Amongtheyarestudents,teachers,doctors,andsoon.IfiistwenttoanEnglishCornerwhenIwasinJuniorGradeTwo.IwentthereeveiySundayandchatwithsomepeopleinEnglish・InthepastthreeyearsIhadneverbeenabsent.I'msurePvemadesomeprogressesinmylisteningandspeaking・AndIhavemademanyfiiendstheie.TheEnglishComerisreallygoodplace・Ihopetliatmorefiiendswilljoininus.on.7.【答案与解析】此行无错。把speaking改为spoken□"英语口语"是spokenEnglish□把talk改为talking.用现在分词作伴随状语。把they改为them=人称代词作介词among的宾语，因此要用宾格。这足个倒装句，amongthem是表语,主语是students,teachers...□去掉oiia在everySunday/week*day之类的时间状语前，不用介词。把chat改为chattedochatted与went并列，指最初去英语角的情况。把had改为have。因为inthepast/lastfewyeais常与现在完成时连用。&把progresses改为progress因为progxess是不可数名词，没有复数形式。在is后加上3。后面的place是单数可数名词。去掉join后而的in。joinin是指参加某项活动（即以表示活动的名词用其宾语）：表示加入到某个组织并成为其中的一员，或与某人一起，要用join。No・03Behindmyapartment,thereisusedtobeadiityandmessycomer.Bitsofplasticbagshangedontlietiees・Brokenbottleswereleftlayinghereandthere・Therewasadamagingcaiinthecenter・Thewholecomergaveoffanunpleasantsmell.Oneveaiago,wedecidedtoturnitillabeautifulpark・Sincethen,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthatcomer.Allthenibbishhavebeenclearedawav・FlowersJandyoungtreeshaveplantedallover.Nowbudscomeheretosing、childrencomeheretoplay,andadultscomeheretoeiijoyourpeacefilllifb.Ithastakenonanewlook.【答案与解析】1.Behindmyapartment,thereisusedtobeadiityandmessycomer.Bitsofplasticbagshangedontlietiees・Brokenbottleswereleftlayinghereandthere・Therewasadamagingcaiinthecenter・Thewholecomergaveoffanunpleasantsmell.Oneveaiago,wedecidedtoturnitillabeautifulpark・Sincethen,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthatcomer.Allthenibbishhavebeenclearedawav・FlowersJandyoungtreeshaveplantedallover.Nowbudscomeheretosing、childrencomeheretoplay,andadultscomeheretoeiijoyourpeacefilllifb.Ithastakenonanewlook.【答案与解析】1.去掉is。根据下文是“曾经有一位……=所以用thereusedtobe…。.7.9.hanged改为hung。因为hang作“悬挂，解，是不规则动词，其过去式是hung：作•，绞死“解，才是规则动词.过去式zt:hangedolaying改为lyingo此句leave...doing...（th处于某种状态）的被动式：表示状态的“在、位于”，用1©其现在分词是lying；而laying是及物动词by（放置）的现在分词。damaging改为damaged□因为car与damage是被动关系，所以用过去分词作定语。in改为into。因为表示“把变成"是用短语turn…mto…。去掉beeiio因为不去掉been就是被动语态了，而takeplacezti不及物动词，无被动语态。hrve改为Ms。因为主语nibbish不可数名词，所以谓主用单数。&在planted前加been3因为谓语动词pkmt与主语是动宾关系，要用被动语态。此行正确。改为【heir。因为在此指代的是adults。No.04Itisimportanttodowithtlienibbishillcities.Rubbishmustbe1.treatedproperly・Thus,itmaycausealotofproblems・Itmaypollute2.theakandwater.Whenpeoplebreathethepollutedairorchinkpolluted3.water,wemaygetill.Ouicityhasbeguntopayattentiontotheioblem.4.

AsforasIknow、somembbishissortedandsenttodifferentfactoiy・5・Rubbish,suchasoldnewspapersandglass,arelecvcled・Somehainiful6.mbbishissenttoaceitaiiiplaceandburied.Wasteairiscleanedafterit7.goesintotheair.Wastewateristreatedbeforeitpouredmtorivers・Ttectfromtheenvironment,thegovenunenthaspassedlawsto9.preventpeoplefiomtluowiiigmbbisheverywhere・Weshoulddooui10.besttotakegoodcareoftheenviiomnentandfightagainstpollution・【答案与解析】把do改为deal,dowith表示“处理帜能用于与what连用的疑问句中,否则，它是•'需要、想要、忍受”之意(常与can.could连用)。把thus改为othenviseo前后不是因果关系，而是“否则如果不处理好的话，就会…“。3・在dank后加the。thepollutedair与thepollutedw定并列关系，特指前句提到的那些被污染了的空气和水。把we改为the*因为替代的是前面的people□把factory改为factoriesc不同的工厂，当然不只一家。把are改为儼因为主语是mbbish,是单数，当然用is。把Mer改为before0山前后总义的逻辑关系所知。在poured前而加is。因为it(wastewater)与pour(倒)是被动关系°去掉protect后面的tect身是及物动词，protect…&om…意为“保护…免受…此行正确。No.0.Howmanytimedoyouspendwitliyourparents?.Yourparentsaieyourdealerpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung・Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep・Buteventhoughmanychildienstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmaybecomemorecloseasyougetolder・Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.Haveyoueverthoughtofhowyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethem?Findachanceanddosometliingforthemortohavesinceretalkwiththem・Ifyoucandothis,vouiparentswillbeveryhappy.【答案与解析】1・将irnnv改为much□修饰不可数名词(tune)不能用many。2.将dearer改为dearest□与intheworld连用，用最高级。3・将of改为for。careforsb-lovesb.爱某人。将deep改deeply为。表示抽象意义“深深地S用deeply«将more改为less。illevendiougli和st山可知，小孩随着年龄增大，与父母的关系可能变得不及以前亲密。将you改为they。因为是代替上文的manychildreno去掉of。thinkof后面常接sth.或doingsth.,不接从句。9.9.此行正确。去掉to。have与前面的find并列，均为祈使句。在sincere前加上a。haveatalkwithsb是固定词组。No.06TOC\o"1-5"\h\zTodayisSunday,Theskyisfiillofsunshine,sodoesmylifb.l._Atabout9:00a.m.Igotothebookstorewithmyfiiends,tliere2._wasalotofnewbooks,Ididn'tknowwhichonetobuy,because3・_thesebookswereallusefultom匕Atlast,Ichosetwo.4._At10:00,wewenttotliecinema,thefilmcallingTitanicwas5._verypopular・Ittookusabout3hourstosee.Havingseenthe6._film,andeveiyonewasdeeplymoved・Somefriendseven7._burstouttears・Fromtliestory,Iunderstandthatloveisnoble8._andvaluable.TliafsareallywondeiiiilfiliiiItisveryworth9._seeingagain.Whatahappyday!IhopetomorrowIwillbeevenhappy!10・.【答案与解析】does->is0主语所陈述的内容与前一句主语所陈述的内容相同，用so连接并倒装。go-went。文帝的主导时态是陈述过去，故用一般过去时。3・was—>were□有很多书，故用复数。calling—>calledocalling—>calledo表示"被叫做S作定语修饰film.see后加ito作某事花去某人多少时间。去掉and。前面部分为分词作状语，后而部分为主句。out—*into0词组buistmtotears流，泪。very—>\vell。常说be(well)worthdoing(很)值得作某事，不用very。happy-happier=.根据语境，该用含蓄比较级。No.07Iliketiavelverymuch・IhadbeentomostofthemteiestedplacesinBritainalreadyandIjustdon'twantothercoldEnglishsummer.SoI'llgoabroadforchangethisyear.WhererdliketoisFiance,Spain,orItaly.Thoughgomgabroadhasthetroubleofchangingmoneyabroad・ButwhenIjusttlunkofthesunrdeiijoyfbi\thenewplacesrdsee,thepeoplerdmeet,Igetexcited.Illfact,whichrdreallyliketodoistopracticemyFrenchandSpanish・Itwoulddomealotatwoik..7.Iliketiavelverymuch・IhadbeentomostofthemteiestedplacesinBritainalreadyandIjustdon'twantothercoldEnglishsummer.SoI'llgoabroadforchangethisyear.WhererdliketoisFiance,Spain,orItaly.Thoughgomgabroadhasthetroubleofchangingmoneyabroad・ButwhenIjusttlunkofthesunrdeiijoyfbi\thenewplacesrdsee,thepeoplerdmeet,Igetexcited.Illfact,whichrdreallyliketodoistopracticemyFrenchandSpanish・Itwoulddomealotatwoik..7.2.,3・.,3・4.6.7.&2.,3・4.6.【答案与解析】h3d改为have。指到目前为止己经去过英国的大部分有趣的地方，用现在完成时。interested改为mteiestingc指有趣的地方，而不是指人感到有趣，所以要用mteiestmgoother改为another□因为summer是单数，句意是：我不想再在英国度过一个寒冷的更天。change前加a。forachange足习语，意为“为了改变常规、为了变化一下“。9后加gOowhereI'dliketogo意为"我想去的地方二of改为withe表示“某事或做某事让人伤脑筋"用uoublewithsthordoingstho去掉for。Idenjoy足定语从句，前而省略了代替先行词thesun的that：enjoy是及物动词，直接说enjoythesum所以for是多余的。此行正确。which改为what□因为用which（哪一）句总不通：what-thethingthat…总为"（所）...的二do改为helpo因为用do.意思不通：helpmealot总为•'对我帮助很大二No.08YangLiweiwasbornfromanordiiiaiyfamilyinLiaoningProvincein1965・HebecamethepilotinChineseAirForcein1987?spend1,350hoursintheair.Hehasspent5yeaistrauiiiigtobecomeaspaceman・Husentintospaceat9a.monOctober15thbyChina’sShenzhouspacecraft,thatorbitedtheeanh14times.Helandedsafeat6:23a.mtlienextday,makingCliinathethudcountrysuccessfullysendmgapersonintospacebeforetheformerSovietUnionandtheUSA・YangLiweicomesbacktotheearthaftera21-hourtriptospace・InspaceYangrecordedtoeveiythinghesawandshowedChina’snationalflagtothepeoplewatchmgonTV.【答案与解析】from—>inQ"出生于什么家庭"应该是bebornina...family。the-a°他成为了''一名“中国空军飞行员。3・spend—^spendingo现在分词短语作状语。sent前加was。他""被”神州五号送上天空。that-which-非限制性定语从句不用that引导。safe—*safelyo修饰动词应该用副词。Cbefore->afteic中国发射载人飞船应该是在美国、苏联之后。comes—*cameo"回来"这一动作明显发生在过去。去掉tOcrecoid绘及物动词。No.09Oneday,didnotfeelingwell,Mr.Smithwenttothehospitaltohavehimexamined・Whenhewasgiventhetestreport,hewasgreatlyshocked."AmIdying?”Heinmiediatelywasfeltveiyill.Filledwithsadness,hewentbackhome,takingalotofpillsandevenwrotehiswill."Maybead