2023年1月高考英语浙江卷读后续写试题解析及范文赏析（蜂鸟报恩）

读后续写真题2023年1月浙江卷蜂鸟报恩1试题再现2试题分析3写作思路4范文赏析目录CONTENTS2023试题再现历年高考英语读后续写真题分析01真题再现第二节(满分25分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.She

ceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthe

window.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain..Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

.2023试题分析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析02梗概

故事讲述了主人公“我”发现一个废弃房子里面有一只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了。“我”把蜂鸟救了出来。在“我”要离开时，这只蜂鸟停在了我的面前，似乎在和我告别。

主题：人与自然——讲述了人与动物之间的趣事，体现了人与自然和谐相处。

视角：第一人称读故事两句段首句1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.占位符标题05故事线IwenttoafarmIfoundatrappedhummingbirdandsaveditItcamebacktomewanttosaygoodbyeIcamebacktothefarmThehummingbirdappearedclimaxrevesalresulotion文章语言表达WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.蜂鸟表现出类似人类的情感：感谢野生鸟类盯着人类野生鸟类盯着人类，发出叫声文章语言表达Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”主人公对蜂鸟行为进行猜测话语：烹饪对蜂鸟的行为进行猜测2023写作思路历年高考英语读后续写真题分析03两种构思方法“四到一行”“线索呼应”看听想说做找出线索，前后呼应“两法六句”第一步依据首句，构思框架两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量。(1)读懂两段首句第一段首句后的衔接句、第一段尾句、第二段首句后的衔接句。即第二段的尾句——能体现故事圆满结局的句子或故事给我们启示的句子。(2)写好三个衔接句(3)写好一个升华句动作描写增加细节所见所闻、所说所思所做环境描写人物描写语言描写心理活动描写第二步增加细节，展开续写Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情节一：brokenwindowWhenpassingthefamiliardesertedmilkinghousewhereIlastmetmyhummingbird,Iinstantlynoticedthebrokenwindowhadbeenreplacedaspromised.Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情节二：thoughtaboutthehummingbirdIcouldnothelptofondlyrecallthelovelyhummingbirdthatcharmedeveryoneofuswithitsdeterminationtobidfarewell.Whatacuteandintelligentcreatureitwas!Para1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain情节三：wanttoseethehummingbirdagain.Asamatteroffact,IsecretlymadeawishtoseeheronceagainsomehowandsomewhereinthisexpeditionthoughIknewdeepdowninmyheartitwasanextravagantidea.Thingswentasplannedandasusual,cheerfullybutnotsurprisingly.Para2：Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.主要预测：thehummingbirdexpressedhergratitude.Theamazinglittlebirdwithshockingmemoryuseditsuniquewaytoexpresshergratitudetoahumanfriend.Naturewassoadorableandmysteriousthatweallfeltawedandhumblewhenfacedwithit.2023范文赏析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析04

Afewweekslater,Ivisitedthefarmagain.

Thesamedilapidatedhouse,thesamegiganticspiderweb,thesamegreenblackberrypath."Willthehummingbirdbethesame?Willthislovelyandhumanisticcreaturebetrappedinthewebagain?Notlikely,sincetheholeinthewindowhadbeenfixed."Thesequestionsandthoughtspoppedintomyheadlikestrandsofspiderthread.Withsmellofroastedfoodwaftingintheair,myfriendsandIchattedandlaughedmerrilyaroundthepicnictable.Itseemedthehummingbirdwastemporarilythrowntothebackofmymind.Soon,t