专题21 英语作文之话题作文类（解析版）

1.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“TheFunofLearning________(playingthepiano/doinghousework/playingfootball/English/…)”.(以“学......的乐趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下问题仅供参考)1.yourexperienceoflearning……(giveanexample)2.reason(s)youthinkitisfunlearning……【答案】ItisnoteastolearnEnglish.IusedtowatchEnglishprogrammestoimproveit.Ifounditreallyinterestingandhelpful.IthelpmelearnEnglishandwidenmyrangeofknoeledgeaswell!Ontheotherhand,ItriedtalingwithmyfatherinEnglish.AlthoughIcouldn’texpressmyselfwellatfirst,everythingwentbetterlater.IwasexcitedwhenIfoundmysuccessinimprovingmyoralEnglishbythis.Iwastrulyproudofmyself.IfoundlotsoffunlearningEnglish.【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者考点：话题作文2.书面表达请就关于减压的问题给学校提一些建议。词数（60-80）。【答案】Nowmanystudentsareundertoomuchpressure.Theyalwaysfeeltootiredtolistentoteacherscarefullyinclass.It’simportantforstudentstorelax.Herearesomedifferentwaystorelaxthemselves.Forexample,theycantrytohaveenoughsleep,ortheycanlistentotheirfavoritemusicafterclass.Theycanalsoreadsomebooksordosomesports.Forme,Ioftenhangoutwithmyfriendsafterschool.Whileyouarestudying,don’tforgettorelaxyourself.Inthisway,youwillbehealthyandstudybetter.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据许多学生因为压力过大，谈谈减压的几点建议。【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。考点：话题作文。3.紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请你以MySummerHolidayPlan为题，写一篇80词左右的短文（开头部分已给出，不计入总词数），谈谈你的假期计划。要求用上提示词并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名。rest(relax)rest(relax)readbooks(getknowledge)chatwithparentshelpdohouseworksocialactivities(knowaboutthesociety)visit…….MYSummerHolidayMySummerHolidayPlanThesummerholidayiscoming._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MySummerHolidayPlanThesummerholidayiscoming.I’mgoingtohaveagoodrestandlearntorelaxmyself.Iwillreadmoreusefulbookstogetmoreknowledge.Iwilltrytospendmoretimeinchattingwithmyparentsandhelpthemtodosomehousework.IamgoingtotakepartinthesocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.Ifpossible,I’dliketogotravelingandvisitsomeplacesofinterest.I’msureI’llhaveaninterestingandmeaningfulsummerholiday.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据提示词谈谈自己的假期计划，根据内容可知是谈论将来的事情，故选用将来时态。【亮点说明】这篇短文时态正确，能利用所给的提示词合理的介绍自己的假期计划。丰富的句式变化可见作者的英语功底深厚，如IamgoingtotakepartinthesocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.，Ifpossible,I’dliketogotraveling等。考点：话题作文。4.假设你和家人4月5号到北京旅游，根据下面所给表格内容写一篇日记，介绍一下你们的旅游经历。Howwasyourtrip?Wonderful.HowdidyougotoBeijing?Bytrain.Howlongdidyoustaythere?Forsixdays.Whatdidyousee?Tian’anmenSquare,theSummerPalace,theGreatWall.Whatdidyoudo?ClimbingtheGreatWall.Whatdidyoueat?BeijingRoastDuck.【答案】OnApril5th,myfamilyandIwentonatourtoBeijing.WewenttoBeijingbytrain.Andwestayedthereforsixdays.wefirstwenttotheheartofChina-Tian’anmenSquare.Itisoneofthelargestsquaresintheworld.OnonesideofthesquareistheGreatHallofthePeopleandontheothersideistheMuseumofChineseHistory.Alotofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitthesquareeveryday.ThenwewenttotheForbiddenCity,IthoughtthatwasreallybeautifulThePalaceMuseumhas9999palaces.Ithasaverylonghistory.IboughtalotofsouvenirsofthePalaceMuseum.Whatnicepalacestheseare!NexttwodayswevisitedthePalaceMuseumandfeltexcited.IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutthePalaceMuseum,youcangotoBeijingandhavealook.Onthelastday,wevisitedtheGreatWall.Itisverylongandold..Ithasmillionsofbricks.Eachbrickisverybigandheavy.LotsofpeoplefromdifferentcountrieslikeclimbingtheGreatWall.WefeltverytiredwhenweclimbedtothetopoftheGreatWall.butIwashappybecauseIknowthechinesesaying：OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero！Asforfood,IthoughtBeijingRoastDuckwastasty.Ilikeitverymuch.IreallyenjoyedthetriptoBeijing.【亮点说明】这篇短文所给材料直接，不易发挥。但作者详细的描述了各景点的特色，可见英语基础的扎实。同时引用谚语OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero！不到长城非好汉。更给文章增色不少。为了写好文章，平时就要多积累一些词汇，名言等。考点：话题作文。5.假如你的好朋友叫李华，是“中华好少年”(China’sGoodChild)的候选人之一。请你写一份材料，介绍他在家里、在学校、在社会（society）上的表现。个人介绍年龄：15岁外貌：圆脸；笑眯眯的眼睛；高个子；爱好：……,因为……（自拟）个人表现[来源:学#科#网]在家里：……（自拟两点）在学校里：……（自拟两点）在社会上：……（自拟两点）[来源:Z*xx*k.Com]感想1.希望他……；2.号召……。1.词数100个左右；开头，结尾已经给出，不计字数；2.条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整；3.不得出现真实的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相关信息。(提示词：respect尊敬；obey遵守)MygoodfriendisLiHua.HeisluckytobechosenasoneofChina’sGoodChildren.__________【答案】MygoodfriendisLiHua.HeisluckytobechosenasoneofChina’sGoodChildren.Heis15yearsold.Hehasaroundfaceandsmilingeyes.Heistall.Hishobbyistorecycleemptybottlesbecauseitcanhelpprotecttheenvironment.Heisagoodboyathome.Hegetsupearlyeverydayanddoessomereading.Thenhedoesexercise.Doingexercisecannotonlyhelphimkeepfit,butalsohelptotrainaperson’scharacter.Heoftendoessomehouseworkathome.

Atschool,hestudieshardandobeystheschoolrulers.Inclassheoftenanswersquestionsandafterclass,heoftenhelpsthestudentswiththeirlessons.

Insociety,herespectstheoldpeople.Andonweekends,healwaysvisitsoldpeople,spendstimewiththemandhelpsthemasmuchaspossible.Heoftenhelpsthechildren.Givethembooks,warmclothes,raisemoneyforcharities.Ihopehewillbealwayshimself.IthinkweshouldlearnfromLiHua.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍你的朋友李华作为中华好少年的候选人之一他在家里、在学校、在社会（society）上的表现。注意第三人称单数形式的应用。【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。段落层次清晰，使文章的内容一目了然。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。考点：表格作文。6.学校20周年校庆马上就到了。届时，将会有许多毕业生回到母校来参观并看望老师。你作为一名志愿服务者来接待学长们，将在报告厅向他们简单介绍学校现在的基本情况，并谈谈你个人对创建和谐美好校园的建议及对学校美好未来的祝福。现状校园美丽，干净，舒适师生之间关系融洽学生好学，兴趣广泛，课外活动丰富建议和祝福（自拟一至两点内容）注意：1.表达中须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。2.字数80左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。3.文中表达不要提及真实校名及姓名。【答案】Ourschoolisverybeautifulnow.Therearemanyflowerseverywhere.It’snotonlycleanbutalsocomfortable.Thestudentsarefriendlyandtheteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasourparents.Wegetalongwellwithourteachers.wehavelotsoffunatschool.wenotonlyhaveallkindsofclasses,butalsotakepartincolorfulactivitiesafterclasses.Weallworkhardatourlessons.Ithinkourlibraryshouldgetmorebookssothatwecanreadwidely.Ifeelproudofmyschoolbecauseitisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.Iwishmyschoolwillbecomemorebeautifulandmoremorden.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。要求介绍校园的现状,并对建设美好校园提出自己的建议，对学校表示美好的祝福。【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。能应用好的短语和连词，如notonly,butalso.as…as等。考点：表格作文。7.眼睛是身体的重要组成部分。我们每天用眼睛读书，用眼睛来看这美丽的世界。可是由于繁重的学业负担，很多中学生都出现了眼睛方面的问题。因此，保护视力十分重要。有的同学认为保证充足的睡眠、学习期间让眼睛有规律的放松、使用正确的方法读书写字都可以保护视力。请你以作为中学生“如何保护视力（eyesight）”为话题，谈谈你的看法。1．请根据所提供的信息材料和话题（不要逐句翻译），写出结构严谨、内容完整、语言丰富优美、语法准确、可读性强的短文。2．至少80词。3．不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。4．题目自拟。【答案】HowtoprctectoureyesightEyeisanimportantpartofourbody.Wecan’tread,lookatthebeautifulwordwithoutoureyes.butItisreportedthatmanymiddleschoolstuddentsinChinahaveeyesight(视力)troublebeacauseoftheheavyschoolwork.Soitisimportanttoprctectoureyesight.Moreandmoreparentshopetoimprovetheirchildren'seyesightwithmedicine,orbycorrectingthewaysthatchildrenreadandsit.Andwestudentsalsohavesomeideas.Somestudentsthinksthatweshouldhaveenoughsleeptime.andweshouldmaketheeyesrelaxduringlearning.Wemustusecorrectwaystoreadandwrite.Ithinkbesidesthose,itisgoodtodosomeexercise.Whenweexerciseweasloexerciseoureyes.likeropeskipping(跳绳).Itcanalsobegoodforone'seyesight.Whileskippingrope,onehastomovequickly,makingboththebrainandtheeyesexcited.Itmayalsohelpmakeonegrowtaller.Anotherthingisimportantthatwemustn’twatchtoomuchTVorplaytoomuchcomputergames.Theyarebadforoureyes.【亮点说明】这篇短文主要从三个方面进行写作，一个是保护视力的重要性，另一个是同学们对保护视力的建议，最后是作者对保护视力提供的方法。这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。考点：话题作文。8.假如你是张玉，是一名九年级学生，即将面临中考，可是你在英语作文方面有困难。请给某英语报社的编辑写一封电子邮件，请教如何提高英语写作技能。80词左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Deareditor,I’mamiddleschoolstudentofGradeNine.AndI’mworkinghardforthecomingseniorhighschoolentranceexamination.Bestwishes! Yours, ZhangYu【答案】Deareditor,I’mamiddleschoolstudentofGradeNine.AndI’mworkinghardforthecomingseniorhighschoolentranceexamination.IcandoagoodjobonallofthequestionsintheEnglishexamexceptthewriting.Ihavebeenputtingmyheartintoit,butIstillcan’twriteagoodarticle.EverytimeIbegintowrite,itseemsthatallofthewordsrunoutofmymind,andIalwaysmakemistakeswhenIwrite.WhatshouldIdo?CouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtoimprovemyEnglishwriting?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.Thankalot.Bestwishes! Yours, ZhangYu【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍自己在英语作文的困难，并向编辑请教如何提高英语写作技能。注意在写作时用第一人称单数。主要用一般现在时态。【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态灵活多变，非常合适。能准确的表达句子的意思。句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，如itseemsthat….,andIalwaysmakemistakeswhenIwrite.,runoutofmymind,Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.等等。考点：话题作文。9.周一下午你们班举行了“节约粮食、健康饮食”的主题班会，请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇发言稿。内容提示：1.浪费粮食可耻。作为中学生，我们该如何做？（请提出至少一条建议或做法。）2.健康饮食很重要。作为中学生，我们该如何做？（请提出至少一条建议或做法。）要求：[来源:学科网ZXXK]1.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2.80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词语：shame羞耻Goodafternoon,everyone!I’dliketosaysomethingabouttoday’stopicforourclassmeeting.That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Goodafternoon,everyone!I’dliketosaysomethingabouttoday’stopicforourclassmeeting.First,it’sashametowastefood.Asstudents,weshouldgetintothehabitofsavingfood.Forexample,weshouldorderasmuchfoodaswecaneatinthedininghallandeatupallthefoodwehaveordered.Second,healthisveryimportantforus.Itisgoodtohaveabalanceddiet.Inordertokeephealthy,we’dbettereatinourschooldininghallorathomeratherthaninfast-foodrestaurants.Fromnowon,let’ssavefoodandeathealthily!That’sall.Thankyou!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍两方面的内容，一，作为中学生我们如何节约粮食；二，作为中学生我们如何保持健康的饮食。主要用到一般现在时。主语用第一人称。【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，有一些好句型和习惯表达用语如，it’sashametowastefood.，Asstudents，Forexample,eatupallthefoodwehaveordered.Inordertokeephealthy,we’dbetter等。这使文章更有富有逻辑性，更丰富。考点：话题作文。10.假如你是林涵，下面是你的美国笔友Dave的来信，请据此给Dave回信。80词左右，注意书信格式。DearLinHan,How’sitgoing?I’mfeelingalittlelonelythesedays,butIdon’tknowwhy.Doyousometimesfeellonely?Whatdoyouusuallydowhenyoufeellonely?Pleasewritetomesoon. Yours,