南京英语中考复习-写作文指导

WritingHowtowritegoodcompositions?1.认真审题2.列出提纲3.连词成句4.连句成文5.细心检查

agoodcomposition审时态人称体裁内容字数自从实施规范办学后，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：

不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.……

看法我认为……

建议（至少3条）合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

……注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数体裁人称内容时态字数以一般现在时为主Introduction

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Conclusion不良现象同行为看法建议Writeanoutline花太多时间在兴趣爱好上迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏

------------合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

------已给出总结全文，再次点题列关键词Problemsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies,

becrazyabout,playcomputergames,watchtoomuchTV,

refusetodohomework,…列关键词Opinionsnotgoodforourhealthandstudy,paymoreattentionto

…列关键词Suggestionsplantimecarefully,

joininterestgroups,

achieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbies,

takepartindifferentafter-schoolactivities,

dosomesports,dosomehousework…列关键词ConclusionLet’s…,Ihope…并列句复合句结果状语从句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies.Theycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandtheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeSomestudentsspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeHowtomakebettersentences?变换句式连词成句连句成文Therearemanythingswecando.wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?ForexampleBesidesthese,AndalsoweWe添加连词或句子！suggestionsHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.方法一：善用连词连接句子，使文章更流畅。1、表转折的连词:but,although,however…2、表因果的连词:

because,so…,sothat,asaresult

3、表顺序的连词:

atfirst,tobeginwith,then,later,atlast…

三类连词:Let’stry1._____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.2.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.3.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.4._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\Althoughinstead

suchasFirstNextFinally\AtlastA.Alotofpeopletravel.B.Mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.A.SomepeoplevisittheirfriendsandparentsB.Tovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

方法二:善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇Somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.方法三：妙用引文和例子，多用于“正文”,有时用forexample/suchasWeinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Readloudly（theending）Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.

只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb（谚语）加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.方法四：加谚语，可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.DoastheRomansdo.5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。

中考英语书面表达评分标准1.短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣1分。

2.通篇人称错误，统扣2分。

3.拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。3个小错相当于1个大错。

4.相同错误，只扣一次。字数过多或过少词扣2分。

5.文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣2分。

6.书写潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。第五档（13～15分）：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。第四档（10～12分）：能写明大部份要点，语言有一些错误（句子结构或动词时态错误1～2处),但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。第三档（7～9分）：能写明一些要点，语言错误较多（句子结构或动词时态错误3～4处）但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第二档（4～6分）：能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。第一档（1～3分）：只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。二、评分档次：一、评分原则：细心检查Now,wehavemuchfreetimethanbefore.Butmanystudentsdon’tknowhowshouldtheyspendthetime.Theyspendsomuchtimetoplaythattheycan’tfinishhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomanyTV,Somearecrazyaboutplaycomputergames.Idon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?First,wecanplanourtimecarefulandtrytoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Second,wecantakepartininterestgroups.Besidesthese,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehouseworks.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourlifecolorful!moretheyshouldplayingmuchplayingcarefullyjoinhousework4大错，4小错。-5分4.CheckingSpelling(拼写)Tense(时态)Grammar(语法)Handwriting(书写)Punctuationmarks(标点符号)通览全文仔细检查Correctmistakes1.Everyoneknowsthathealthisveryimportantforourself.2.Ourstudyisgettingmoreandmorehard.3.Theythinktravellingthatcanmakepeoplefeelrelaxedandhappy.4.Ithinkitisunhealthybecausepeopledon’thaveenoughtimetorelaxedthemselves.5.Todaymanypeoplearesufferfromstress6.Andthereareafewpeoplestillworkontheholiday.7.Peoplecanhaveagoodrestwillbehealth.

.ourselvesharderandharderthattravellingrelaxsufferworkingwhohealthyr15分FromSusan11分卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！假如上周一你班举行了“爱护水、节约水”的主题活动，请你根据以下要点为你校校报写一篇活动报道。活动内容邀请王老师作报告；全班讨论如何节水和爱护水。活动收获我们知道我国一些地方水源受到污染；我市虽有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以……(节水和爱护水的方法至少各发挥一点)。活动感受……要求：1.词数不少于90，文章的开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；

2.要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯；

3.文中不得使用真实的人名、校名。Introduction

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Conclusion内容收获Writeanoutline邀请王老师作报告全班讨论如何节水和爱护水我国一些地方水源受到污染我市也缺水节水和爱护水的方法举行主题班会活动感受列关键词Introductionholdanactivityabout…saveandprotectwater列关键词Contentinvitesbtodogivesbatalkhaveadiscussionabouthowtosaveandprotectwater列关键词Achievementsomeoftheriversbepollutedbeshortofasaresultthrowrubbishintodump…into…uselesswater…列关键词Feeling:takepartintheimportanceofprotecttheenvironment…LastMondayourclassheldanactivity.Wetalkedaboutsavingandprotectingwater.Howtomakebettersentences?变换句式连词成句LastMonda