【省级公开课课件】基于教材文本的概要写作教学(Unit 2 Healthy eating Workbook (Page52))

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HeAnewMcDonald’srestaurantisgoingtobebuiltyourhometown.McDonald’s

HeWhat'sthemainideaofthetwopassages?2.What'sthefirstperson'sopinion?3.What'sthesecondperson'sopinion?WhethertobuildaMcDonald'sForAgainstCheckthehomeworkHelikeseatingnothingbutChinesefood.Checkthehomework1.Guessmeaningfromcontext:Whichofthefollowinghastheclosestmeaningtothephrase“nothingbut”inSpeech1?()A.B.C.BnotatallonlynotimportantHeonlylikeseatingChinesefood.CheckthehomeworktorewritethesentenceinyourownwordsThereistheproblemofallthosecarsthattrytoparkandpreventothercarsfrommovingquicklythroughourtown.2.paraphrase:Allthosecarstrytoparkandthiswillcauseaproblemthatothercarscan’tpassthroughthetownquickly.

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.?ANarration（记叙文）Argumentation（议论文）BCExposition(说明文)HowtoWriteaSummaryofArgumentation

IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.Ithoughtaboutallthoseyoungpeoplewhowouldnothavetogotothenexttowntobuytheirfavouriteburgersandchips.McDonald'scaresabouthealthyeatingtooandworkswithscientiststoprovidefoodthatisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Itisalsocheap.Theyoftenprovidesaladsaswellasburgersandchips.Youcanalsochoosebetweencolaandmilkshakes（奶昔）.Ofcourseitalsomeansmoreworkforourareathatneedsjobsbadly.McDonald’ssaystheyareinterestedindoingwhatisrightforthecommunityandbeingagoodneighbour.SoIthinktheywillbeconcernedaboutprovidingparkingforthecarsinourmainstreet.Manyofouryoungpeoplewillbeonlytoohappytoworkforthecompany.McDonald'smakesapromisetothepeoplewhoworkforthem.Theysay,“Wevalueyou,yourgrowingskillsandyourhelptothecompany.”Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.ReadfortopicsentenceofSpeech1

IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.

Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.supportingpoints(reasons)viewpointconclusionIwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.

Ithoughtaboutallthoseyoungpeoplewhowouldnothavetogotothenexttowntobuytheirfavouriteburgersandchips.McDonald'scaresabouthealthyeatingtooandworkswithscientiststoprovidefoodthatisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Itisalsocheap.Theyoftenprovidesaladsaswellasburgersandchips.Youcanalsochoosebetweencolaandmilkshakes（奶昔）.Ofcourseitalsomeansmoreworkforourareathatneedsjobsbadly.McDonald’ssaystheyareinterestedindoingwhatisrightforthecommunityandbeingagoodneighbour.SoIthinktheywillbeconcernedaboutprovidingparkingforthecarsinourmainstreet.Manyofouryoungpeoplewillbeonlytoohappytoworkforthecompany.McDonald'smakesapromisetothepeoplewhoworkforthem.Theysay,“Wevalueyou,yourgrowingskillsandyourhelptothecompany.”Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.Readforkeywordsofthereasonssupportingpoints(reasons)keywordsfoodjobscars1.ofhighquality,videjobs2.valuetheiremployeesTheparkingforcarswillbeprovided.McDonald’sprovidesmorejobsandpromisestovaluetheemployees.Paraphrase(改写)keywords连词成句Thefoodisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Anditisalsocheap.IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonald'srestaurant..

Thefirstperson改变人称hearingParaphrase(改写)theviewpoint同义词

happy变非谓语句型转化willbeaMcDonald’srestaurant.there

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was

happywhenhearingthattherewouldbeaMcDonald’restaurant.Thefirstperson

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forbuildingaMcDonald’srestaurant.变简单句

Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourhometown.同义词改变人称

He改变语态onlyrestaurantwillbebuilt

Hecanseeonlygoodiftherestaurantisbuiltintheirhometown.theirParaphrase(改写)theconclusion

Heagreestobuildtherestaurantintheirhometown.

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First,Second,Therefore,Lastbutnotleast,Summary1.thethirdperson

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Thefirstperson

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forbuildingaMcDonald’srestaurant.

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要点1

要点2

要点3theparkingforcarswillbeprovided.McDonald’swillprovidemorejobsandpromisestovalueemployees.

heagreestobuildtherestaurantintheirhometown.

thefoodisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Anditisalsotherewillbesafe,healthyandcheapfoodofhighquality.cheap.概要写作的4C原则CompleteCoherent（连贯）Concise（精炼）CorrectSteponeFindthetopicsentenceandparaphrasethemSteptwoMarkoutthekeywordsofthesupportingpointsStepthreeWriteasummaryofSpeech2StepfourGroupworkMakeamindmapSteponeFindthetopicsentenceSteptwoMarkoutthekeywordsofthesupportingpointsStepthreeParaphrasethekeyinformationWriteasummaryofSpeech2StepfourIntegrate(整合)andwritethesummary

1.Changetheperson(改变人称)2.Combinethesentences(合并句子)3.Usesynonyms(同义词的运用)4.Summarize(概括)5.Changethevoice(主被动语态转换)6.Changethesentencestructure(句型转化)Tipstoparaphra