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SummaryWritingbasedonReadingTextBuildingAMcDonald'ssaladburger/hamburgerchipscola\kolamilk
shakes(奶昔)ice-cream
HeAnewMcDonald’srestaurantisgoingtobebuiltyourhometown.McDonald’s
HeWhat'sthemainideaofthetwopassages?2.What'sthefirstperson'sopinion?3.What'sthesecondperson'sopinion?WhethertobuildaMcDonald'sForAgainstCheckthehomeworkHelikeseatingnothingbutChinesefood.Checkthehomework1.Guessmeaningfromcontext:Whichofthefollowinghastheclosestmeaningtothephrase“nothingbut”inSpeech1?()A.B.C.BnotatallonlynotimportantHeonlylikeseatingChinesefood.CheckthehomeworktorewritethesentenceinyourownwordsThereistheproblemofallthosecarsthattrytoparkandpreventothercarsfrommovingquicklythroughourtown.2.paraphrase:Allthosecarstrytoparkandthiswillcauseaproblemthatothercarscan’tpassthroughthetownquickly.
HeReadforstyleThestyleofthearticleis
.?ANarration(记叙文)Argumentation(议论文)BCExposition(说明文)HowtoWriteaSummaryofArgumentation
IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.Ithoughtaboutallthoseyoungpeoplewhowouldnothavetogotothenexttowntobuytheirfavouriteburgersandchips.McDonald'scaresabouthealthyeatingtooandworkswithscientiststoprovidefoodthatisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Itisalsocheap.Theyoftenprovidesaladsaswellasburgersandchips.Youcanalsochoosebetweencolaandmilkshakes(奶昔).Ofcourseitalsomeansmoreworkforourareathatneedsjobsbadly.McDonald’ssaystheyareinterestedindoingwhatisrightforthecommunityandbeingagoodneighbour.SoIthinktheywillbeconcernedaboutprovidingparkingforthecarsinourmainstreet.Manyofouryoungpeoplewillbeonlytoohappytoworkforthecompany.McDonald'smakesapromisetothepeoplewhoworkforthem.Theysay,“Wevalueyou,yourgrowingskillsandyourhelptothecompany.”Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.ReadfortopicsentenceofSpeech1
IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.
Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.supportingpoints(reasons)viewpointconclusionIwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonaldsrestaurant.
Ithoughtaboutallthoseyoungpeoplewhowouldnothavetogotothenexttowntobuytheirfavouriteburgersandchips.McDonald'scaresabouthealthyeatingtooandworkswithscientiststoprovidefoodthatisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Itisalsocheap.Theyoftenprovidesaladsaswellasburgersandchips.Youcanalsochoosebetweencolaandmilkshakes(奶昔).Ofcourseitalsomeansmoreworkforourareathatneedsjobsbadly.McDonald’ssaystheyareinterestedindoingwhatisrightforthecommunityandbeingagoodneighbour.SoIthinktheywillbeconcernedaboutprovidingparkingforthecarsinourmainstreet.Manyofouryoungpeoplewillbeonlytoohappytoworkforthecompany.McDonald'smakesapromisetothepeoplewhoworkforthem.Theysay,“Wevalueyou,yourgrowingskillsandyourhelptothecompany.”Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourtown.Readforkeywordsofthereasonssupportingpoints(reasons)keywordsfoodjobscars1.ofhighquality,videjobs2.valuetheiremployeesTheparkingforcarswillbeprovided.McDonald’sprovidesmorejobsandpromisestovaluetheemployees.Paraphrase(改写)keywords连词成句Thefoodisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Anditisalsocheap.IwasexcitedwhenIheardthatourcommunitywastohaveitsownMcDonald'srestaurant..
Thefirstperson改变人称hearingParaphrase(改写)theviewpoint同义词
happy变非谓语句型转化willbeaMcDonald’srestaurant.there
Thefirstperson
was
happywhenhearingthattherewouldbeaMcDonald’restaurant.Thefirstperson
was
forbuildingaMcDonald’srestaurant.变简单句
Icanseenothingbutgoodifthiscompanycomestobuilditsrestaurantinourhometown.同义词改变人称
He改变语态onlyrestaurantwillbebuilt
Hecanseeonlygoodiftherestaurantisbuiltintheirhometown.theirParaphrase(改写)theconclusion
Heagreestobuildtherestaurantintheirhometown.
变简单句Point1Point2Point3ForconclusionThestructureSpeech1viewpoint(food)(jobs)
(cars)
He
First,Second,Therefore,Lastbutnotleast,Summary1.thethirdperson
2.about60words
Thefirstperson
was
forbuildingaMcDonald’srestaurant.
(viewpoint)(conclusion)
Thereasonsareasfollows:
要点1
要点2
要点3theparkingforcarswillbeprovided.McDonald’swillprovidemorejobsandpromisestovalueemployees.
heagreestobuildtherestaurantintheirhometown.
thefoodisofhighquality,safeandhealthy.Anditisalsotherewillbesafe,healthyandcheapfoodofhighquality.cheap.概要写作的4C原则CompleteCoherent(连贯)Concise(精炼)CorrectSteponeFindthetopicsentenceandparaphrasethemSteptwoMarkoutthekeywordsofthesupportingpointsStepthreeWriteasummaryofSpeech2StepfourGroupworkMakeamindmapSteponeFindthetopicsentenceSteptwoMarkoutthekeywordsofthesupportingpointsStepthreeParaphrasethekeyinformationWriteasummaryofSpeech2StepfourIntegrate(整合)andwritethesummary
1.Changetheperson(改变人称)2.Combinethesentences(合并句子)3.Usesynonyms(同义词的运用)4.Summarize(概括)5.Changethevoice(主被动语态转换)6.Changethesentencestructure(句型转化)Tipstoparaphra
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