高考英语写作训练- 潍坊二模续写课件

高考英语写作训练2021年潍坊二模续写Iamaproudmotherofthreechildren,mylastlittleonebeingdeliveredinthemiddleofthispandemic.ShewasborninAugustandhernameisAida.ShortlyafterhavingAida,mymother-in-lawAnnshowedmesomethingshelearnedfromherfriend’smotherinanartclasssheattendedweekly.Shehadshowedmehowtoknit(编织)ascarf.Sheshowedmestitches(针)andgavemeherhalfdoneproject.Ispentalotoftimebreastfeedingmysweetlittlegirl,soIhadsomeextratimetodosomethingwithmyhandsthroughouttheday.IenjoyedmakingthescarfsoIpurchasedtonsofyarn(线)sinceitwaswinter.IwantedtomakescarvesformythreechildrenasChristmasgifts.背景Therewasanewfamilythatmovedindownthestreet.TheonlydaughterofthefamilywasJane,ashygirl,aged14,thesameageofmyoldestsonDavid.Itseemedthatshecamefromafinanciallydisadvantagedfamily,forshealwaysworeoldclothes.Worsestill,insuchcolddays,shehadnomoreclothestowearandtrembledwithcold.问题Duetothepandemic,societywasthrownintocrisismode.Schoolswereclosed,foodsuppliesanddeliveriesweresuspendedandchildrenwerestuckathome.Insuchdiscouragingtimes,however,theybecamegoodcompanions,talkingandplayingathomeoraroundthehouses.友谊Itwasdreadfullycoldthiswinter.EverytimeDavidcamebackfromoutside,withredface,healwayscried,“Mum,itisfreezingoutside!”Then,hecameovertoseewhetherIfinishedthescarf.Icouldtellhowimpatienthewastowearmyscarfsooner!Ihadtospeedtheprojecttosatisfyhisexpectation.ButDavidcomfortedmesayinghecouldwaitafewdays.Whatakindandconsiderateboyhewas!ThenmygreatartprojectfinallywasaccomplishedonthemorningaheadofChristmas.我：三个孩子的母亲做围巾proudJane：邻居家的女儿穷冷shyDavid：我的大儿子Jane的朋友kind/considerateAnn：我的岳母教我织围巾Aida：我的小女儿刚出生我——David——JaneIwrappedthescarfaroundDavid’sneck.HiseyeswidenedwithjoyandhisfacelituplikeaChristmastree.表情眼神—抽象“Thankyou,Mom”,hegavemeabighugandkissedmeonthecheek,“ThisisthebestChristmasgiftI’veeverreceived!”言语动作—具体Thenhecouldn’twaittogooutsideandshowoffhisnewscarf.情节发展Iwasrelievedandsatisfied,notjustbecauseIfinishedmyproject,butbecauseIwastrulyabletobringhappinesstothechildreninsuchdepressingtimes.心理活动+原因由表及里孩子表现—说话、表情、眼神、肢体动作（禁止写心理活动）母亲心理—心理活动（写作方法）孩子举动—出去LaterthatdayDavidcamebacksayingJanealsodeservedascarf.Heseemedtobearsomethinginmindbutwashesitatedtospeakout,soIencouragedhimtosharehisthoughtwithme.情节发展“CanIgivethisscarftoJane?Shereallyneedsit.”hemurmured.孩子言语InoddedtohimandtoldhimIwasveryproudtohaveaboylikehimwhotrulycaredforothers.我的回应Gettingmyapproval,DavidexcitedlyrushedouttofindJane,whileIpickedupthestitchesandyarnagain.孩子举动+我的举动“Threescarvestogo,”Ithought,feelingawarmthinside.我的心理活动我David织围巾期待给他戴围巾感谢鼓励他说出来有心事赞同肯定要送别人继续织围巾跑出去送骄傲、温暖全文呈现IwrappedthescarfaroundDavid’sneck.HiseyeswidenedwithjoyandhisfacelituplikeaChristmastree.“Thankyou,Mom”,hegavemeabighugandkissedmeonthecheek,“ThisisthebestChristmasgiftI’veeverreceived!”Thenhecouldn’twaittogooutsideandshowoffhisnewscarf.Iwasrelievedandsatisfied,notjustbecauseIfinishedmyproject,butbecauseIwastrulyabletobringhappinesstothechildreninsuchdepressingtimes.LaterthatdayDavidcamebacksayingJanealsodeservedascarf.Heseemedtobearsomethinginmindbutwashesitatedtospeakout,soIencouragedhimtosharehisthoughtwithme.“CanIgivethisscarftoJane?Shereallyneedsit.”hemurmured.InoddedtohimandtoldhimIwasveryproudtohaveaboylik