历届上海高考英语作文1

历届上海高考英语作文[1]历届上海高考英语作文[1]12/12历届上海高考英语作文[1]2013高考上海卷英语作文谈论II.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiveninChinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）收集公众建议，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必定满足以下要求：简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；说明你的原因（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行比较）DearSir/Madam,I’vejustlearnedthatShanghaiMuseumistoholdafamouspaintingexhibitionandyou’recollectingpublicsuggestionsaboutwhichlocationtoholdit.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itismorereasonabletoholdthepaintingexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.Ontheonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletoreachShanghaiMuseum,locatedinthecenterofthecity.Visitorscangotherebysubwayandbusandsoon.What’smore,ShanghaiMuseumismuchmoreextensivethancommunitylibraries,providingvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmenttoappreciatethefamouspaintings.Ontheotherhand,ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.What’sofgreatsignificanceisthatnotonlydoesitprovideadvancedfacilitiesandhigh-techmonitorsbutalsooffersprofessionalsecurityguardstoprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolenintheprocessofexhibition.Consequently,IstronglyproposethatthepaintingexhibitionistobeheldintheShanghaiMuseum.Yours,WangMin赏析：今年上海市的高考英语作文话题贴近学生的生活实质，用书信的载体表现，让考生对画展感觉到有话可以说，但是想要达到A类作文，不仅要要有扎实语言功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆及画展等生活类的语言应用娴熟，更需要学生从专业一点的角度，深入剖析其选择的原因，这个层面很多学生很难用专业的语言区描述，学一世常学习时间紧张，没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动，而且在紧张的时间里，更别提用一些复杂的语言结构区显现自己的原因，所以学生写到高分不是很简单，大部分学生获得15/16分是没有问题的。采用这样的命题思路对英语授课有较好的反响作用，学校和家庭不可以是督促学生的学习更要供应时机让孩子走出课堂，走向社会，培养学生创立性和责备性思想。提示：生活类词汇:museumlibrarypaintingexhibitionadvancedfacilityhigh-techmonitorsecurityguard分词的应用：locatedprovidingdistinguished句型：主语从句口号从句倒装等2012年上海高考英语作文Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（以以以下图），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：●对两堂绘画课的详尽描述；●你从中获得的启示。2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample3(forreferenceonly)TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey’dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohavetry.Iasawherthinkforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.smiling,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteacherswords’inmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime，witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.Lookingbackatthetwowaysofgivingaclass,Ihavetoadmittheteacherwaswellworthfollowinginmattersofcultivating“flowers”inthespiritGivenoforiginalitythatchildren.areofgreatimaginationandelasticityintheirgrowth,theyaresupposedtobegivenasmanychancesandopportunitiesaspossibleinthecourseofbeingeducatedsoastodeveloptheirpotentialtothefull.Weretheyoungalwaysconfinedtotheestablishedwaysofdoingthingswithoutafreeworld,onethatisalsolongedforbytheambitiousbirdsdrawnbyAmy,howcanweexpectthenextgenerationourcivilizednationwouldbemoreinnovativeandcreative?2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample4(forreferenceonly)TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey’dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohaveatry.Isawthinkherforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.Withasmile,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteacherswords’inmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime，witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.Simpleandamusingasitseemed,thetwowaysofpaintingarethought-provoking.Asisgenerallyaccepted,students,especially,childrenhavegreatpotentialintheirgrowthanddevelopment.Asamatteroffact,whethertheirtalentscanbedevelopedtothefull,toagreatdegree,dependsonhowchildrenareeducated.Whilesomevaluabletraditionsarewellworthcherishing,thinkinginanoriginalwayshouldbeencouragedandemphasizedamongchildrenwhenitcomestoteachingoreducation,whoaresupposedtobecharacterizedbycreation”.Onlyinthisway,cantheykeepinpacewiththe-fastdevelopingmodernworld.2011年上海卷高考英语作文范话题：向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫困学生，需要包括以下的一些要点1.介绍自己2.项目详尽推行方案3.2000元如何利用Dearfoundationorganizers,MynameisJerryLu,astudentcurrentlystudyingatShanghaiXXHighschool.Iamwriting,onbehalfofmyclassmates,toapplyforthe2000yuanworthoffundinabidtoinitiateaprogramaimedathelpingthosestudentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.Beingraisedinfamiliesthatdon’thavetoworryaboutputtingfoodonthetableneednotmeanobliviontoourlessfortunatepeers.Onthisaccount,wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldsponsorourpoverty-reliefendeavor.Thefollowingishowwewouldgoaboutusingthemoney.Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsatourschool.Itisworthnotingthatwewouldinformthemtopickuptheschoolsuppliesthemselvesinsteadofus“dolingout”thesuppliessothatwewouldn’tembarrassthosewhowewanttohelp.Theremainderofthefundwouldbeusedtoinviteamotivationalspeakerwhowastotalkabouthowtoliftoneselfoutofpovertybymakingrightacademicandprofessionaldecisions.

“innovationModestasoureffortsmaysound,webelievetheywillwarmsomehearts.Muchobligedifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.YoursSincerely,JerryLu2010年上海高考作文及模范以以下图是小学再生的课堂一脚，比较你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感觉。你的作文必定包括：●描述图片里学生上课的场景●比较你同时期的上课情况●简单谈谈你的感觉Asisdescribedinthepicture,agroupofforeignstudentsareraisingtheirhandstogiveanswerstothequestioninajoyfulandactiveway.Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowushowactivetheclassperformanceisintheforeigncountry.Westernstudentsaremorelikelytobeopen-mindedandwillingtoexpresstheiruniqueideasinclass.Justasthepictureshows:Whentheteacherisaskingaquestion,everychildraisestheirhandsandiseagertoanswerthequestion.Theydonotfeargivingthein-classperformancewhileothersarewatching.ThissceneremindsmeofmyownclasssituationwhenIwasatelementaryschool.AsChinesechildrenaremoreoftenthannotveryconservativeandmodest,therefore,myteachersusuallycalledastudent'snameifnobodydaredtoanswerthequestions.Thentheappointedchildbehavedawkwardlyandwasreluctanttosayjustafewwords.Thisrecollectionmakesmefeelratherdisappointed.Infact,weshouldatleastgiveatry,whethertheanswerisperfectornot.It'sachanceoflearning,morespecifically,ifwearewell-done,wewillgainconfidence;ifnot,wewillgetinformedofabettersolution,whichwillprovideusexperienceinthelatersituation.Allinall,it'smoresensibletobeactiveinclass.图画式谈论文特点：是经过观察和剖析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转变为文字信息。注意点：(1).要认真审图(2).需从整体上掌握图画所表现的主要内容，办理好人物与时空的关系及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题。(3).“丰满的想象+变化的表达”结构：第一段描述图画，一般不高出三分之一篇幅第二段揭露画旨（一般一言即可）第三段宣告感想、谈论或提出建议（占主要篇幅）第四段简单谈谈自己的感觉注意：二三两段可合成一段2009年上海高考作文及模范gardening），烹饪（cooking）,某外国学校举办英语夏令营，开设了以下课程：园艺（防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。若是你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必定包括：1、你感兴趣的课程2、你希望从这门课程中学到什么3、为什么想学这些内容Itissaidthatasummercampistobeheldbyyourschoolandafewcoursesareavailabletochoosefrom.Iaminterestedingardening,inthatIbelieveitfeaturesmycharacterandpersonalbenefits.Duringthelearningperiod,Iexpecttogainsomeunexpectedknowledge.AradicaltechniqueI’dliketoobtainistoknowhowtotelldifferentspeciesofplantsandflowersapart.Thishelpsmetohaveaclearoutlookofthoseinmygarden.Furthermore,thepropercuttingtimeandfrequencytowateraresomeotherskillsIwanttolearn.Alittleknowledgeconcerningchoosingsuitablesoilorthereasonableplantingpositionswillalsobeagoodchoice.ThemanireasonwhyIchoosegardeningisthatIwanttohelpmyparentswiththeirworkinthedomesticgarden.Inaddition,Ifindthatwestudentsgenerallylacktheknolwdgeofgardening,missingachancetohaveawordwithnature,sothatknowingthesurroundingsisimperitave.Lastbutnotleast,byattendingthecourse,Iwillhaveameaningfulsummervacation,anddrowningmyselfbewteenplantswillbyallmeansaddabrillianttouchtomylife.2008年上海高考作文及模范你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（groupdancingcooipetition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必定包括以下内容：·你可否会参加比赛·你做出该决定的详尽原因Version1:Agroupdancingcompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolandthemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinit.Whilemostofmyclassmatesarestillhesitatingwhethertoparticipate,Ihavesaidyestoourmonitorwithgreatpleasure.Generallyspeaking,therearetworeasonsformydecision.First,itisagoodopportunityformetorelaxmyself,whichwillenablemetostudymoreefficiently.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy,sogoesthesaying,whichclearlyshowsustheimportanceofrelaxation.Besides,IthinkIamagooddancerafterlearningdanceformorethanfiveyears.Participatinginthecontestwillbeagoldenchanceformetoshowmydancingskillsandmakesomecontributionstotheclass.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatIhavesuchastrongenthusiasmonthegroupdancingcompetition.Version2:Todaythemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinthegroupdancingcompetitionwhichwillbeheldinacoupleofdaysinourschool.Butaftersomecarefulconsideration,Ihavedecidednottoparticipate.Thereareanumberofreasonsformydecision.Firstandforemost,astheCollegeEntranceExamisjustaroundthecorner,studyisthetoppriorityforme.Participatinginthegroupdancingcompetitionhastogivewaybecauseitmighttakemetoomuchtime.What’smore,withoutanyexperienceofdancing,Idon’tthinkIcanbeagooddancingpartner.Iamafraidmypoordancingskillswillprobablyspoiltheperformanceofthewholeclass.Inthiscase,it’sbetterforspectatorcheeringformyclassmates.Forthesereasons,itseemsmoreappropriateformetowatchthecompetitionthantodancemyself.2007年上海高考作文及模范以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必定包括以下内容：你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；该礼物对他（她）可能产生的影响或带来的变化。APresentforFather’sDayTheFather’sDaywillcomesoon.andIwanttogivemyDadapresent.ThatisaVIPcardofahealthclub.WhenIwasalittleboy,Dadworkedhardasateacher.Duringterm,MotherandIsometimesaccompaniedDadinhisofficetillalatehour.Fromthenon,IunderstoodthatDadworkedwithgreateffort.TherearestilltoomanypreciousmemorieswhichI’llcherishinmyheart.AndIwanttogivethispresenttoexpressmythankstohim.TimefliesandI’m18now.AsIgrowup,Fatherisgettingolder.Heisnowstilldivingintopilesofbooks.Withthehealthclubmembership,Ihopethathewillmaketimetodomoreexercises.Ithinkthathewillrelaxinthehealthclubandmakemorefriends.2006年上海高考作文及模范下表供应了你所心仪的南、况说明原因。

北两所大学的招生信息。

经过比较作出选择，并结合个人情学费

南方大学8000元/年

北方大学5000元/年招生人数

20人

10人优惠政策

无

加20分VersionAOfthetwouniversitieslistedabove,Iprefertheoneinthenorth.Themainreasonisthatthetuitionisonly5,000RMBfortheuniversityayear,comparedwith8,000RMBfortheuniversityinthesouth.Thismakesabigdifferenceforafamilylikeamine,becausemyfatherispeasantandtheonlybreadwinnerinthefamily.Studyingatthenorthernuniversitycansavemyfatherbigmoney.AnotherreasonItakeintoconsiderationisthepreferencepolicythenorthernuniversityoffers.Anycandidatewhochoosestostudytheremaygainanextra20points,whichgreatlyraisesthepossibilityofmybeingadmittedtothisuniversity.Ofcourse,itdoesn'tmeanthatitwillbequiteeasytopasstheentranceexambecausethisuniversityhaslimitedthenumberofqualifiedcandidatesto10only.However,Ihavebeendoingquitewellinschool,soIbelieveIcanpasstheentranceexamwithflyingcolors.VersionBComparedwiththenorthernuniversity,thesouthernoneismoretomyliking.Itistruethatintermsoftuitiontheformeris3,000RMBcheaperthanthelatter.However,that'snotaproblemtomebecauseIcanworkmywaythroughcollegeonceIgetadmitted.Whatcountsisthereputationithas.OnceIenterthisschool,myfuturecareerisguaranteed.Also,theuniversityinthesouthrecruits20newstudentsinsteadof10,whichmeansthatIwillstandabetterchanceofgettingadmitted.Thecompetitionisverykeen,though,asyoucanseebecausethisuniversitydoesn'tgivecandidatesanyextrapoints.SoallIcandonowisstudyhard,passthetoughentranceexam,andqualifyasastudentoftheuniversityofmychoice.2005年上海高考作文及模范祖先云：“天生我材必适用”请你描述你生活中的一件事，说明人均分秋景，无论才能大小都能成为适用的人。Manypeople,especiallythosewhothinktheyarenotastalentedasothers,tendtogiveupintheirundertakingsandthuscomplainaboutlife.Suchpeoplewillcertainlyendupgettingnowhere.Noticethatmostsuccessfulpeoplearenotunlikeus.Whatmakesthemstandoutistheirdevotednesstothejobtheyaredoing,whichistypicalofthestoryofLiDahua,aneighborofmine.Dahuawasbroughtupinapoorfamily.Sincehedidn'tdowellinschool,hejoinedhisfatherincollectinggarbageforalivingsoonafterhegraduatedfromelementaryschool.Hisneighborsshooktheirheadswhenevertheysawhim,thinkingthatthisboywouldbynomeanscarveoutabrightfuture.Yearspassedby,andDahuakeptcollectinggarbage,buthetookonestepfurther.Throughbooksheknewhowtosortoutthewastehehadcollectedandhaveitrecycled.Youknowwhat?Hehassetuparecyclingfactoryandbecometherichestmanintown!HissuccessprovestheancientChinesesaying:"Theremustbeauseformytalent."2004年上海高考作文及模范老师要求你负责班级墙报(wallnewspaper)工作并征采你的建议。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。MyDiaryThursday,March11Thismorningmyheadmasterhadachatwithme.Hetoldmethathedecidedtochoosemetobeinchargeoftheclasswallnewspaper.HewantstokinowifIamwillingtoacceptthetaskandwhatIplantodoforit.Firstofall,IwouldliketosayIwouldalwayssetahighvalueondoingaservicefortheclass.SoI’monlytoowillingtobeinchargeofthewallnewspaper.Asastudent,todomybitforourclassisagoodwaytoputmyabilitytogooduse.Tohelprunthewallnewspapercangivefulplaytomytalent.Weallknowoursocietyneedspeoplefullofcreativityanfcreativitydoesn’tcomefrombooksbutfrompractice.Thewallnewspaperprovidedsmewithachancetopractise.I’msureIcanbenefitalotfromit.Secondly,Iregardthewallnewspaperasawindowofourclass.Itservesasabridgebetweentheteachersandthestudents.WiththeactiveparticipationofthewholeclassIcanhaveitpublishedeverytwoweeks.Throughthewallnewspaperwecanexchangeourwaysoflearning,freelycommunicateourviewsonschoollife,voiceourconcernsoverhealthcaresandevenmakeproposalsontheteachingmethodandthetestingsystem.Someofmyclassmatesaregoodatdrawing.Theycanhelptoaddcolourtothewallnewspaper.Ihopemyideasforthewallnewspaperwillmeetwiththeteacher’sfavourableconsideration.2003年上海高考作文及模范你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。收信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平（不可以用自己的真实姓名）写信日期：2003年6月8日June8,2003DearXuHaiqing,Yousaidinyourletterthatmanyofyourclassmateswerewearingfashionableclothes,butyoucouldn’taffordtobuythebestbrands.Soyoufletverydepressed.Therearedifferentviewsonpeople’swear.Thefollowingaremyideasaboutit.Firstly,youshouldn’tputtoomuchemphasisonphysicalappearance.Youmustalwaysrememberthemostimportanttaskforyoutodayistoconcentrateyourattentiononyourstudies.Nomatterwhatyouwear,youwillreallylookyourbestwhenyoucomeoutfirstinyourexaminations.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Grugality(节俭)isthemotherofvirtue.”So,secondly,youmustunderstandthatitisafinevirtuetolearntoliveinfrugalitywillbenefityoualotinyourlaterlife.IhopeyouunderstandwhatImean.Iamsureyouwilltakeapositiveattitudetowardslifeandwillbehappyagainwhenyoureadmyletter.BetRegards,HuangPing2002年上海高考作文及模范2002秋季高考II.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsbasedonthepictureandtheinstructionsgivenbelow.简要描述图片内容，结合生活实质，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。Duetotheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyspoilthechildtoomuch.Asisdepictedinthepicture,whenachildislearningtorideabicycle,herparentsandgrandparentaresweating,runningalongsidethebikeandtryingtheirbesttoprotectthechildforfearthatsheshouldfallandgethurt.Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.SoIthink,fortheparents,theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchspoilinghasontheirchild.Undertheparentsprotection,’thechildknowsonlycomfortandease.Iftheydon’tlearnhowtoliveindependently,howcantheycopewiththehardshipsandtrialswhichtheywillmeetinthefuture?Forthechildren,theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselvesandareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneagerparent.Thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenwehavelearnedtostandonourownfeet,canwesurvivethechallengingworld.(219words)2002年春季高考依照所给图表，简要描述某城市近来几年每百人手机（mobilephone）用户增添情况，并试剖析其增添原因。某城市近来几年每百人中手机用户增添表示图605040人数3020100Moreandmorepeoplehavemobilephonesinrecentyears,shownastheabovediagram.In1995,onlyonepersoninahundredhadamobilephoneinsomecity.10peopleinahundredhadmobilephones.Thenumberofthepeoplewhohadmobilephoneswastentimesasmanyasin1995.In1999,therewere20peopleinahundredwhohadmobilephones.In2001,ahalfofthepeopleinahundredhadmobilephones.Thereareseveralreasonsfortheincreaseofthenumberofpeoplehavingmobilephones.Firstly,mobilephonesareusefulinpeople’lifes.Wecancommunicatewithothersveryconveniently.WecantakephotosandevensurftheNetwiththelatestmodel.Secondly,people’sincomehasbeenincreasingquickly,andthemobilephonesarecheaperthanbefore.Inthiscase,peoplecanaffordamobilephone.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatsomanypeoplehaveboughtcellphonesandthistrendwillnotstopinthenearfuture.表式作文的几种形式:一是以表格形式,将的数据或被明的事物直接用表格形式体出来二是以形形式

,即表。A表示数据化的曲;B表示数据的大小或数量之的差异的柱状;C表示体内部构化的扇形。表式作文写作分三步:第一步：开山地点明本表所反响的主。常使用的有:table,chart,figure,graph,describe//tell,show,represent常用句型：

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⋯第四步：若是要求感觉AsfarasIamconcerned,⋯2001年上海高考作文及模范你大量入家庭后，家庭、境和可能生的影响。Nowadaysthenumberofpeoplewhoownprivatecarsisontherise.Likeeverythingelse,privatecarshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,thefavorableaspectscanbelistedasfollows.First,privatecarscanbringconvenienceandmobilitytoowners.Acarallowsapersontomovecomfortablyandsafelyaswellasquicklyandfreely.Becausemyfamilyownsacar,weareabletomakeextensivejourneyseveryyear.Therefore,IbelievethetouristindustryinChinawilldevelopmorequicklywiththeincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars.Secondly,ifmorepeoplebuycars,theautomobilesindustrywilldevelopdramatically.Whatgrowthof’smore,thetheautomobileindustrycantriggertheboomofotherimportantandrelatedindustriessuchasironandsteelproduction,energyandtechnologicalapplication.E