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andEndingsentenceUnitSixStepOnePresentation1.Note-writing祝贺便条除了时间、称呼、结尾客套话和署名外还需有：1）对祝贺的反应2）祝贺行为3）对祝贺的评价和对对方的钦佩4）美好祝愿SampleMarch,30thDearTom,Iamratherpleasedtohearthatyouhavewonthemasterdegree.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltcongratulations.Iknowyoureallydeserveit,foryouhavebeenworkingsohardinyourstudy.IamalwaysadmiringyourpersistencyandIhopeyouhaveabrightfuture.Sincerelycongratulationsagain.Yours,BearSomeusefulexpression:祝贺之事和自己的反应：I‘mhappytolearnthatyou’vejustpassedyourthesisdefense.I’msopleasedtohearthatyou’vegottheadmissionbytheCambridgeUniversitytofurtheryourgraduatestudy.

Someusefulexpression:祝贺行为:Congratulationsonyoursuccess.I’dliketoexpressmywarmestcongratulationsonit.Pleaseacceptmywarmestcongratulations.Congratulationsuponhavingreceivedyourmaster’sdegreefromBeijingUniversity.Someusefulexpression:

对成功的评价和对对方的钦佩:Youreallydeserveitbecause…Thismeantyearsofyourhardwork,andit’sanachievementyoucanwellbeproudof.Ihavebeenappreciatingyourexcellentperformanceinstudyandabilityinyourwork.Someusefulexpression:美好祝愿:Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture.Ibelieveourschoollifewillbemorecolorfulunderyourleadership.Ibelievethattheknowledgeyou’veacquiredwillenableyoutobesuccessfulinwhateveraspectoflife.StepOnePresentation2.Someinformationabouthomework问题解决型

StructureIntroduction－problemBody－reasonsConclusion－solutionsSomeimportantexpression:Recently,theissue/problem/questionofyouthcrimehasbeenbroughtintofocus./hasbeenbroughttopublicattention./hasbeenposedamongpublicattention.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/report/study,_________.Therearemainlythreecausesofthisproblem-thenegativeeffectofmassmedia,increasingpressurefromsocietyandhighdivorcerates.

Inthepastfewdecades/Inrecentyears,therehasbeenasharpincrease/adramaticdeclinein___.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/report/study,___.Theanswertotheproblem/issueinvolvesacoupleofcomplicatedreasons/factors,whichwillbeillustratedasfollows.

Thus,asfarasIamconcerned,itisofimportanceforpeopletofindoutitscausesandascertainsomepossiblesolutionstoaddressit.Oneofthemostimportantreasonsfortheincreaseinjuveniledelinquencyliesinthenegativeinfluenceofcommercializedmassmedia.…………Anotherfactorforthesignificantchangeinjuvenilecrimeistheincreasingnumberofsingle-parentfamilies.Finally,theincreasingpressurefrombotheducationandsocietygivesrisetotheyouthcrime.Confrontedwith………,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,……Foranother……Finally…….Alongwiththeawarenessoftheabovementionedreasonscomethefollowingmeasureswhichshouldbetakenimmediately.Thetoppriorityis………Anotherapproachis…..Finally,…..Onlyinthiswaycanwe……..Nouns：：Solution,approach,measure,action,method,step,MeansModifiedadj.:effective,forceful,immediate,practicalVerbs:Solve,dealwith,copewith,handle,resolve,address,tackle,workoutReviewTopicSentence:OneDefinition:ThefocusoftheparagraphTwoParts:TopicandassertionThreeFeaturesofTopicSentence:CompleteNotTooBroadNotTwoNarrowTip:NeveraquestionFoursentencestructuresI.Supportingsentence1.DefinitionSupportingsentencescomeafterthetopicsentence,makingupthebodyoftheparagraph.Theygivedetailstodevelopandsupportthemainideaoftheparagraph.Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.该段落落的第第一句句话就就是主主题句句意思思是广广告影影响每每个人人，第第二和和第三三句都都是扩扩展句句对主主题句句进行行展开开说明明。2.Requirements好的扩扩展句句能使使段落落结构构更加加清晰晰，更更具说说服力力。要要写出出好的的扩展展句，，应该该注意意把握握以下下几点点：1．清清晰翔翔实，，说服服力强强(避免写写出与与主题题不相相关的的句子子)扩展句句是用用来体体现段段落中中心思思想的的，因因此不不可含糊其其辞、、言之之无物物，而而要清清晰翔翔实；；同时时扩展句是是用来来支持持主题题句的的，所所以要要具有有较强强的说服力力，能能清楚楚有力力地表表达思思想，，不可可只考考虑篇幅、、凑足足字数数草草草了事事。例如：：ThereareseveralwaystoimproveourEnglishwritingskillsandkeepingadiaryinEnglishissurelyoneofthem.Comparedwithotherformsofwriting,itisshorterandtakeslesstime.MymotheradvisedmetowritediarywhenIwasveryyoung.ItcanhelpuscultivatethehabitofthinkinginEnglish.Ifwecankeepthispractice,wewillgraduallylearnhowtoexpressourselvesinEnglish.MymotheradvisedmetowritediarywhenIwasveryyoung.2．层次次分明，，逻辑清清楚主题句和和扩展句句除了要要保持意意义的相相关性以以外，还要保持持思想逻逻辑的连连贯性。。为了清清楚地表表达主题思想，，扩展句句必须条条理分明明、脉络络清楚。。所以在写扩展展句时，，要注意意连接转转折词语语的使用用，扩展句之间间一般会会有一定定的逻辑辑关系，，如因果果、转折、递进进等，这这就要求求使用连连接词使使句子之之间连贯，逻辑清楚楚。无疑，逻逻辑清楚的文文章便于阅卷卷理解，也是阅阅卷者判分的的重要标准之之一。TherearereasonswhyIliketofish．Ienjoythepullofabigfishattheotherendoftheline．．Myenjoymentincreasesifthefishisinthedeepwatersofalake．Thehopeofcatchingabigoneluresmetothelesserknownpoolsandthecoolwatersnearsomehiddenrock．．Ilikethequietundertheopenskyawayfromtheweekendcampersandvacationists．TherearethreereasonswhyIliketofish．First，Ienjoythepullofabigfishattheotherendoftheline．Moreover，myenjoymentincreasesifthefishisinthedeepwatersofalake．．Second，thehopeofcatchingabigoneluresmetothelesserknownpoolsandthecoolwatersnearsomehiddenrock．Finally，Ilikethequietundertheopenskyawayfromtheweekendcampersandvacationists．Ofthethreereasons，，Ipreferthelast．3．句式多变变，节奏明快快为了使段落灵灵活多样，扩扩展句除了要要有说服力，逻辑清清楚以外，还还要有多变的的句式，否则段落落语言会显得得单调呆板，，语言水平低下。如如长短句、简简单句和复合合句并用可以使段落落具有节奏感感。读起来才有活活力，令人回味味。可以混合使用用简单句、并并列句、复合合句和短语等等Therearealsomanyquiet,privatethingsthatIenjoydoing.(主从复合句)Iwouldspendawholedayreadingabook,andIsometimestayuplateatnightreadingagoodnovel.(并列句)WhenIamtiredofphysicalactivities,ImayfindagoodmoviesoralightTVprogramveryentertaining.(主从复合句)Inshort,Iliketodomanydifferentkindsofthings,dependingonthemoodIaminandthekindofpeopleIaminandthekindofpeopleIamaround.(简单句，分词词短语作状语语)3.Writingskills3.1LanguageA.平行结构构的运用用

句式式优美、、表达清清晰、重重点突出出主题句：：Pcgamesareakindofentertainment.利利用平行行结构拓拓展为:Theybringpleasurestoyoungsters,trainthemtorespondquickly,stimulatetheirimaginationinelectronics.B.句式灵活活多变若文中的的简单句句出现得得太多,就会显显得单调调、含混混、不生生动。要要写出生生动而鲜鲜明的句句子,可可通过乔乔姆斯基基的转化化生成语语法中的的嵌入方方式来实实现.一一个简单单句,嵌嵌入定语语、状语语、补语语后,变变得生动动有趣。。Eg:Booksareworthreading.Bookstellingpeoplehowtoadaptthemselvestothesocietyareworthreading.C.地道道的英语语习语AttachgreatimportancetoLeaveadeepimpressiononD.连接手手段的补充充启承转合根据在文章章中的作用用,过渡渡词大致可可以分为以以下四类(1)表表达“启””的常用词词语:用用于引导主主题句,或或用于主主题句的后后面,引引导第一个个发展句。。Aproverbsays......Atpresent.......Astheproverbsays....Currently.....Generallyspeaking,....Now,....Ingeneral,.....OntheWhole....Itisclearthat....Recently.....Itisoftensaidthat....Withoutdoubt,.......(2)表表达“承””的过渡词词语:用用于承接主主题句或第第一个(或或前一个)发展句。。First(ofall),......Moreover,.........Firstly,............Noonecandenythat....Inthefirstplace,.........Obviously.....Tobeginwith,.........Ofcourse,.........Also,.......Similarly,.........Atthesametime......Therefore,weshouldrealizethat.....Certainly......Thereisnodoubtthat.......Inaddition,.....What'smore,..........Infact........Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...Meanwhile......(3)表表达“转””的过渡词词语:用用来表示不不同或相反反的情况。。But...Still,......Buttheproblemisnotsosimple...Thereisacertainamountoftruthinthis,butwestillhaveaproblemwithregardto.......However,.......Tooursurprise,..........Nevertheless,........Unfortunately.......Ontheotherhand,.......YetdifferencewillbefoundandthatiswhyIfeelthat........Othersmayfindthistobetrue,butIdonot.Ithink.....4)表表达达““合合””的的过过渡渡词词语语:用用于于总总结结段段落落中中上上文文的的内内容容,引引导导一一个个发发展展句句或或结结论论句句,也也可可以以用用于于文文章章的的最最后后一一段段。。Aboveall,Inbrief,........Accordingly,.....Inconclusion,........Allinall,.......Inotherwords,itishardtoescapetheconclusionthat........Asaconsequence,.........Inshort,.........AsIhaveshown/said/stated/....Insum,........Insummary,.......Ashasbeennoted,....Obviously,.........Bysodoing,.....Onthewhole,.....Consequently,........Presumably,.......Eventually,.........Toconclude,......Finally,........Tosumup,.....Inaword,......Tosummarize,......3.2ContentA.化抽象的概述述为细节的描描述

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Scienceandtechnologybenefitshumanbeingmuch.Sciencemakesitpossibleforanationtoensurefoodandclothing(Agriculture),sciencecanmakepeoplelivelonger(Medicine),andit'ssciencethatmakesitasmallworld(Communication).3.3Methods例证法对比法正反论证II.EndingsentenceRestatethetopicoftheparagraph.Keepitinteresting.Makeitaclosingsentencesoyourreaderknowsthisistheendoftheparagraph.这里介介绍几几种常常见的的写小小结句句的方方法:1、小结句句对全全段落落总结结Mymotherhaspassedalongtomecertainrulesforgettingalongwithothers.Don’targuewithparents;theywillthinkyoudon’tlovethem.Don’’targuewithchildren;theywillthinkthemselvesvictimized.Don’’targuewithspouses;theywillthinkyouareatiresomemate.Don’targuewithstrangers;theywillthinkyouarenotfriendly.Mymother’srules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:Don’’targue.2、小结句句对主主题句句呼应应Inthemeanwhile,peoplearoundsmokers,especiallychain-smokersarealsothreatenedbythepoisonousgasesgivenoff.Andaccordingtosomeresearchers,thepossibilityofthenegativesmokers’’cancerisevengreatersincetheybreatheinmoredangerouswastergasesthanthosesmokers.Therefore,thesmokersarealsospoilingothers’healthwhentheyaresmoking.3、小结结句用引引语Thereisnodoubtthatyouthdrugabuseisaserioussocialproblemandhasproducedalotofnegativeeffectsonoursociety.Themostsevereconsequenceistherapidincreaseofjuveniledelinquenciescommittedbyyouthstakingdrugs.Withthehighincidenceofyouthdrugcases,manyonce-happyfamilieshavebeenonthevergeofcollapse,whichwillinevitablydisruptsocialorderandjeopardizesocialsecurityandevennationalstability.Ontheotherhand,youngdrugaddictsalsosufferalot.Theyhavevarioussymptoms,suchasprogressivethinning,damagetotheirvitalorgans,andgeneraldeteriorationofheath.Inshort,asanoldsayinggoes,drugsturnhumanstobeasts.常用的结结尾句句句型有：：Inshort……;Inconclusion…;Tosumup……;Consequently……;Fromthepointofview,…;Inaword…;Therefore…;Thus,……Ex.Writeaparagraphaccordingtoatopicsentence.Mobilephonecanexertpositiveandnegativeeffectsonstudents.HomeworkTheimportanceofcooperation9、静静夜夜四四无无邻邻，，荒荒居居旧旧业业贫贫。。。。1月月-231月月-23Wednesday,January4,202310、雨雨中中黄黄叶叶树树，，灯灯下下白白头头人人。。。。21:28:4721:28:4721:281/4/20239:28:47PM11、以以我我独独沈沈久久，，愧愧君君相相见见频频。。。。1月月-2321:28:4721:28Jan-2304-Jan-2312、故人江江海别，，几度隔隔山川。。。21:28:4721:28:4721:28Wednesday,January4,202313、乍见翻疑疑梦，相悲悲各问年。。。1月-231月-2321:28:4721:28:47January4,202314、他他乡乡生生白白发发，，旧旧国国见见青青山山。。。。04一一月月20239:28:47下下午午21:28:471月月-2315、比不了了得就不不比，得得不到的的就不要要。。。。一月239:28下午午1月-2321:28January4,202316、行动出成成果，工作作出财富。。。2023/1/421:28:4721:28:4704January202317、做前前，能能够环环视四四周；；做时时，你你只能能或者者最好好沿着着以脚脚为起起点的的射线线向前前。。。9:28:47下下午9:28下下午午21:28:471月-239、没有失败败，只有暂暂时停止成成功！。1月-231月-23Wednesday,January4,202310、很很多多事事情情努努力力了了未未必必有有结结果果，，但但是是不不努努力力却却什什么么改改变变也也没没有有。。。。21:28:4721:28:4721:281/4/20239:28:47PM11、成功就是日日复一日那一一点点小小努努力的积累。。。1月-2321:28:4721:28Jan-