生活类读后续写专练（附人与动物情节三种套路）-2022届高考英语写作备考

生活类读后续写专练（附人与动物情节三种套路）读后续写模拟专练01读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“IfmumfindsoutthatI'mgoingtothebeach,I'llbeinbigtrouble/Isaidtomyselfsoftlyinalowvoice.Iwentdownstairsslowlyandtriedtowalkcasuallyintothekitchen.AsIwaswalkingtowardsthebackdoor,mumaskedwithoutlookingupfromher“dish-washing","Whereareyougoing?"Iansweredbackwithouthesitation/Iamgoingtothegardentoplay/'AfterIgotoutofthekitchen,Ibreathedasignofrelief.Myplanhadworkedoutfinesofar.Iclimbedthefenceandjumpedontothemuddyfieldnexttomyhouseandstartedrunningtowardsthebusstopattopspeed.AfterhalfanhourIwasatthebeachscanningthecrowdformyfriends,JimmyandBobby.Twoyoungmenwereracinginthecanoes（独木舟）.Afterawhile,Isawthemnearacoconuttree.Irantowardsthemandgotintomyswimmingtrunk（游泳裤）.Foraboutanhour,weplayedvolleyballhappily.Suddenly,Bobbyhittheballtoohardandtheballfellintothesea.JustasBobbywasgoingtopickuptheball,thetidecameinandcarriedtheballfurtherandfurtherawayfromtheshore.IwantedtoshowoffmyswimmingskillssoIdeclaredtohelpgettheballforthem.Idivedintothewaterandstartedswimmingatasteadypace.Afterswimmingforabouttenminutes,IbecametiredbutwhenIsawthattheballwasonlyafewfeetawayfromme,Iputinanextraburstofspeed.However;justasIwasgoingtogettheball,averystrongcurrentswepttheballfurtherawayfromme.Atthatmoment,astringofweed（海草）tangled（缠绕）upwithmyfeetandIcouldnotswimproperly.Istruggledtokeepafloatbutitwasnouse.“IfIhadlistenedtomyparents,thiswouldneverhavehappened/Ithoughtsilently.Paragraph1Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。1、害怕Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.（2020.7高考浙江卷）Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）Anumbingchillgrippedme（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）Thinkingofthewolf'sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（几乎给吓死）（2017年6月高考浙江卷）Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）,mypalmssweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）2、求助与获救Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（疯狂地挥手）,screaming,“Help!”（2020.7高考浙江卷）Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair;Iwasamazedtospot（“惊奇地发现）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.（2020.7高考浙江卷）Havingpulledthemassivebodyoutofthestump,Briancleanedthewounds（清洁伤口）andthengavehimcarefultreatment.Beckykneltdownandtendedtothewolf（蹲下来照1颜狼）togetherwithBrian.（2020.11金华十校）Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.（ill东模拟）Usingarockasthesupportingpoint,Iunlockedthechainandsetthewolffree（放走这只狼）.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）套路三：主题升华设计可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。ElliandIlearnedourlesson（学至U——个教训）:Beawareofabearwithatoothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）Therainthatcamethatdaywasamiracle（那天下的雨是——场奇迹）,savingourfarm,justlikemyboysavedalife.（202103宁波十校）Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky?shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表达感谢）,Whatawarmscene!（2020.11金华十校）Paragraph2WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.翻译小练习：.我还是被推到水下。我告诉自己永远不要放弃。.然后我又使劲拔了一次草。杂草终于断了。.我游回水面深呼吸。我看见两个年轻人划着独木舟，互相比赛。.我筋疲力尽，大声呼救。那两个男人看见我就朝我划来。.当他们到达我这边时，我已经失去知觉了。.直到一位医生走进房间，我才意识到我在医院里。.吉米和鲍比告诉我，那两个年轻人把我带到岸边，送我去医院。.几分钟后，我的父母带着半生气半担忧的表情走了进来。.我父母责骂我偷偷地跑出家门，但也很高兴我没有受重伤。.我永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。我也不想再炫耀了。参考答案：.我还是被推到水下。我告诉自己永远不要放弃。Istillgotputtedunderwater.ItoldmyselfIshouldnevergiveup..然后我又使劲拔了一次草。杂草终于断了。ThenIpulledtheweedagainwithgreatefforts.Theweedfinallybroke..我游回水面深呼吸。我看见两个年轻人划着独木舟，互相比赛。Iswambacktothesurfacetotakeadeepbreath.Isawtwoyoungmenincanoes,racingeachother..我筋疲力尽，大声呼救。那两个男人看见我就朝我划来。Iwasexhaustedandshoutedforhelp.Thetwomensawmeandracedtowardsme..当他们到达我这边时，我已经失去知觉了。Bythetimetheyreachedme,Ihadbeenalreadyunconscious..直到一位医生走进房间，我才意识到我在医院里。ItwasnotuntiladoctorcameintotheroomthatIrealizedthatIwasinahospital..吉米和鲍比告诉我，那两个年轻人把我带到岸边，送我去医院。JimmyandBobbytoldmethetwoyoungmenbroughtmetotheshoreandsentmetothehospital..几分钟后，我的父母带着半生气半担忧的表情走了进来。Afterafewminutes,myparentswithhalfangryandhalfworriedfaceswalkedin..我父母责骂我偷偷地跑出家门，但也很高兴我没有受重伤。MyparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretlybutwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured..我永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。我也不想再炫耀了。Iwillneverforgetthatterrifyingexperience.NeitherwillIeverwanttoshowoffagain.参考范文：Paragraph1Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotputtedunderwater.ItoldmyselfIshouldnevergiveup.ThenIpulledtheweedagainwithgreatefforts.Theweedfinallybroke.Iswambacktothesurfacetotakeadeepbreath.Isawtwoyoungmenincanoes,racingeachother.Iwasexhaustedandshoutedforhelp.Thetwomensawmeandracedtowardsme.Bythetimetheyreachedme,Ihadbeenalreadyunconscious.Paragraph2WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.ItwasnotuntiladoctorcameintotheroomthatIrealizedthatIwasinahospital.JimmyandBobbytoldmethetwoyoungmenbroughtmetotheshoreandsentmetothehospital.Afterafewminutes,myparentswithhalfangryandhalfworriedfaceswalkedin.MyparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretlybutwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured.Iwillneverforgetthatterrifyingexperience.NeitherwillIeverwanttoshowoffagain.读后续写模拟专练02读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ScoutcouldclearlyrememberthenightshehadtoleaveherhomeinPoland.ItwasthebeginningofWorldWarIIandherfamilyhadtoescapeassoonaspossible.Shequicklypackedasuitcasewithafewpiecesofclothing,herdiary,andhermostprizedtreasure,asilkscarf.Scoutandherbestfriend,Betty,hadpersuadedtheirparentstobuythemmatchingscarves,whichtheytookasasymboloftheirfriendship.Scoutdidn'tknowshewasgoingtoAmericaandwouldnotbereturning.Scoutkeptthatspecialsilkscarfformanyyears.Onedayshedecidedtogiveittohergranddaughter,Eliza,toweartoherfirstjobinterviewforgoodluck.ScoutwasafraidthatElizawouldlosethescarf,butthegranddaughterpromised,"Don'tworry,Grandma,nothing'sgoingtohappentoyourscarf.You'llseethatit'sgoingtobringbothofusluck."Andwiththat,Elizakissedhergrandmotherandleftfortheinterview.Leavingtheinterview,Elizafeltconfidentthatshehadgotthejobsoshedecidedtocelebratebygoingtoarestaurant.Sittingathertable,Elizafeltanelderlywomanstaringatherforalongtime.'Tmsorry.DoIknowyou?"Elizaasked."I'msorry,dear,butyouremindmeofmybestfriend,"theoldwomanreplied."Shelookedlikeyouandusedtowearascarfjustlikeyours."Elizalistenedcarefully,withhereyesandmouthwideopen.Shehadheardstoriesofhergrandmother'sbestfriendandknewthemeaningofthescarf.CouldthiswomanbeBetty,hergrandmother'schildhoodfriend?注意：.所续写短文词数应为100左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；.续写局部分为两段，每段开头语已给出，不计入总词数；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thentheoldwomanintroducedherself,〃MynameisParagraph2:Theoldwomanagreed.翻译小练习：.“我叫贝蒂。我原籍波兰，但13岁时离开了那里。从那时起，我就一直住在美国华盛顿特区J.伊丽莎简直不敢相信，她祖母最好的朋友的故事在她脑海里飘荡。.她以为那个老妇人一定是她祖母最好的朋友。她说，“贝蒂，你介意现在和我一起去吗？我要给你看一个人。”.晚饭后不久他们离开了餐馆。到了史考特家，老妇人急切地按了门铃。.史考特一开门，她就惊讶地看到儿时的朋友站在她面前。.多神奇啊！围巾确实给他们带来了好运。.激动又感动，两人都泪流满面。.他们多年没见面了，有很多事情要提供。参考答案：L“我叫贝蒂。我原籍波兰，但13岁时离开了那里。从那时起，我就一直住在美国华盛顿特区。”“MynameisBetty.KmoriginallyfromPoland,butlefttherewhenIwasthirteen.AndIhavebeenlivinghereinWashingtonDCinAmericaeversince.”.伊丽莎简直不敢相信，她祖母最好的朋友的故事在她脑海里飘荡。Elizacouldnotbelieveit,storiesofhergrandmother'sbestfriendfloatinginhermind..她以为那个老妇人一定是她祖母最好的朋友。她说，“贝蒂，你介意现在和我一起去吗？我要给你看一个人。”Sheassumedthattheoldwomanmustbehergrandmother'sbestfriend.Shesaid,“Betty,wouldyoumindcomingwithmerightnow?Ineedtoshowyousomebody/.晚饭后不久他们离开了餐馆。到了史考特家，老妇人急切地按了门铃。Soontheylefttherestaurantafterdinner.ArrivingatScout'shome,theoldwomaneagerlyrangthedoorbell..史考特一开门，她就惊讶地看到儿时的朋友站在她面前。ThemomentScoutopenedthedoor,shewasamazedtoseeherchildhoodfriendstandinginfrontofher..多神奇啊！围巾确实给他们带来了好运。Howmagical!Thescarfindeedbroughtthemgoodluck..激动又感动，两人都泪流满面。Excitedandmoved,bothofthemwereintears..他们多年没见面了，有很多事情要提供。Theyhadn'tseeneachotherformanyyearsandhadmanythingstoshare.参考范文：Thentheoldwomanintroducedherself,zzMynameisBetty.KmoriginallyfromPoland,butlefttherewhenIwasthirteen.AndIhavebeenlivinghereinWashingtonDCinAmericaeversince/Elizacouldnotbelieveit,storiesofhergrandmother'sbestfriendfloatinginhermind.Sheassumedtha