How to better our composition导学案 高三英语写作指导

Howtobetterourcomposition【Topic】Writing【Aim】Towriteagoodessay【Keys】Toimprovethewritingskills【Importantaims】选用恰当的词汇，根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法。【Diffcultaims】使用一定的句型、词汇，能够清晰地传递信息、表达主题。STEP1:Accuracy先正确A.阅卷老师最深恶痛绝的错误1.Therearemostofpeopleholdtheopinionthatdoexercisesdoesagreatgoodtoourhealthy.2.Underyourhelp,hemakeagreatprogress.3.Asweareallknown,…4.IhavedifficultinEnglish.5.Ithasbadefforts/affectsonus.6.Itisbenifitialtous.7.I’mappreciatedthatyouhelpmeinEnglish.8.It’sofvitalimportant.9.Notonlydoesgoodtous,butalso…10.Onlybythisway,youcanliveahappylife.11.Helpingplaysanimportantrole.Becausehelpothersishelpourself.12.Tohissurprise,hecamecrosshisoldfriendandspended3daystogether.13.Writebacktomeaspossibleaswecan.14.Iwantyoudoit.15.Asthetimegoingby,hestillkeepsupagoodstateofmind.16.Butforyouhelp,Ican’tfinishthework.17.Ileavethefirstimpressiononthecountry.18.Wecanaskhelpforteachers.Weshouldattachimportanceonit.19.Themoreharderyoustudy,themoreprogressyoumake.20.Hardlydidhearrivedwhenherecivedaphonecall.B.Correctthefollowingpassages.(1)Myparentsliveinthecountry.TheykeepadogcallingAhFu.OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterwithAhFualong.Whiletheyworking,mysisterwalkedtotherivernearby.AhFufollowedherthere.Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhileshefallintotheriver.AhFubarkedandjumpedtothewaterimmediate.WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarking,theyrantotheriver.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarriedmylittlesister.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarm.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesister.(2)MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementmake.TheStudentUnionisgoingtoholdapartyinSaturdayevening,August15,towelcomeourfriendsfromtheUnitedStates.ThepartywillbeholdintheroofgardenoftheMainBuilding.Itbeginat7:30p.m.Therewillhavemusic,dancing,singing,gamesandexchangeofgift.Everybodymaybringasmallgiftonthispurpose.Remembertowrapitup,signyournameandwriteafewwordsofgoodwish.Don’tforget:7:30,Saturdayevening,roofgarden,MainBuilding.Everybodyiswelcomed.STEP2:Advanced后高级Richvocabularyexercises丰富的词汇A.lielivestandhangrun/flowsitgofloatInfrontofthebuildingtheplayground.OnthewalloftheroomamapofChina.Atthefootofthehillafarmhouse.Onthetopofthemountainatalltree.Behindourschoolariver.Onthesurfaceofwaterafallenleave.Therethebell.Onceuponatimethereanoldman.B.1.Weallthinkheisagreatman.Weall__________________him.2.ThecouragetospeakEnglishisimportant.ItisthecouragetospeakEnglishthat___________3.Therearetwenty-sixclassroomsinourschool.Ourschool______________________twenty-sixclassrooms.4.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.You’ll_________________findingmyhouse.5.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.Isuddenly_______________agoodidea.\Agoodidea_________________me.STEP3.Advanced后高级Variouskindsofsentencepatterns丰富的语法结构A.1.Hecameinandtherewasabookinhishand.Hecamein,_______________________.2.AssoonasIarrive,Iwillgiveyouane-mail.____________Iarrive,Iwillgiveyouane-mail.3.Ihadjustreachedthestation,andatoncethetrainstarted.____________hadIreachedthestation_________thetrainstarted.4.Ican’tfocusonmystudybecauseIamfedupwiththeendlesshomework._____________________________,Ican’tfocusonmystudy.5.Hewaslateagain,sohisteacherwasangry.________________madehisteacherangry.6.WecanlearnEnglishwellonlyinthisway.____________________learnEnglishwell.7.WhenyouworkhardatEnglish,youwillmakegreatprogressinit._________youworkatEnglish,____________________youwillmakeinit.8.Hedidn’trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.Notuntilhereturnedhome_______________hisfoolishness.9.Heiscleverbuthedoesnotworkhard.____________as/though__________,hedoesnotworkhard.10.Theclocktowerstandsontheothersideofthestreet.Ontheothersideofthestreet________theclocktower.D.一句多译阅读对我们很重要。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________STEP4.Advanced后高级Properconnectingwords合适的衔接词what’smore,asfarasI’mconcerned,inaword,however,therefore,firstofall,onthecontrary,which,what____________,thetopicsinourtextbooksareverypopularwithusstudents.__________,therearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,_____canhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter._________,someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus._________,I'dliketosuggestchangingthemintoeasierones.STEP4.Practice图表类根据某机构最近对某市中学生的调查，发现中学生对网络语言的使用看法不一，结果如下：支持者网络语言是信息时代发展的产物易懂，易学，使用快捷方便；很酷很有趣，丰富了校园文化生活，缓解了学习压力。反对者有些网络语言粗鲁，庸俗；汉语言是传统文化的基础，过多地使用网络语言会使下一代逐渐淡忘传统文化；请以Iscyberlanguagedangerous为题，陈述以上的调查结果并发表你自己的看法。

注意：1.词数100字左右；，不计入总词数；

2.参考词汇：草根文化grass-rootsculture;

庸俗vulgar

Iscyberlanguagedangerous？

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Withthedevelopmentofinformationtechnology,cyberlanguagehassteppedintoourlifeandisspreadingrapidly.Accordingtoasurveyrecentlyconductedamonghighschoolstudents,opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Somethinkcyberlanguageisaproductoftheinformationageanditiseasytolearnorunderstand,andconvenienttouse.Besides,itwillnotonlyenrichtheirschoollifebutalsoeasethepressureofstudybecauseitisfunandcool.

However,othersobjecttoit.Firstly,cyberlanguagewordsarerude.Secondly,Chineseisthefoundationofourgreatculture.Overusingcyberlanguagewillleadtoyoungpeopleforgettingourtraditionalculturegradually.

Inmyopinion,itisdangeroustousetoomuchcyberlanguage,foritmaywelldogreatharmtoourmothertongue.Weshouldsparenoeffortstolearnitwell.STEP5Translation名作欣赏：荡涤你的心灵，美化你的一生！Anyway——MotherTeresaPeopleareunreasonable，illogicalandself-centered；Lovethemanyway.

Ifyouarekind，peoplemayaccuseyouofselfish，ulteriormotives；Bekindanyway.

Ifyouaresuccessful，youwillwinsomefalsefriendsandsometrueenemies；Succeedanyway.

Thegoodyoudotodaywillbeforgottentomorrow；

Dogoodanyway.

Ifyouarehonestandfrank，peoplemaycheatyou；

Behonestandfrankanyway.

Peoplefavorunderdogsbutfollowonlyt