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HowtoWriteaGoodPassagePARTiiWriting：假如你是李华，你的好友Smith想要来你家乡旅游，希望你能为他提供建议。请你给他回信，内容如下：1.表示欢迎；2.推荐一处家乡景点及家乡美食；3.提供出行建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节使行文连贯。DearSmith,________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yourstruly,LiHuaWhatarethesharedqualitiesofhigh-scoredpassages?Morestrategiesonwriting:Strategy1:BetterChoiceof________________________(_________________________)Group1Iwanttoshowmywarmwelcome.Iwantto____________mywarmwelcome.Iwantto____________mywarmwelcome._____________________Group2Iwarmlywelcomeyou.Iwarmlyexpressmyheart-feltwelcome. _____________________Group3Youwon’tforgetthePandaBase.You__________________thePandaBase. _____________________Group4IamhappythatIcanhelpyou.Iwouldbedelightediftheabovecouldbeofvaluetoyou._____________________Strategy2_________________________________Byusing_____________________________,wecanalwaysaddinformation,modify(修饰)thingsvividly,explainthingsclearlyandstrengthenthelogicoftheideas.Q:Whatistheproblemwiththispassage?Example1Fillintheblanks1.YouwillbegreatlyimpressedwiththePandaBase.2.Andyoucanhaveclosecontactwithpandas.Sentence1YouwillbegreatlyimpressedwiththePandaBase______youcanhaveclosecontactwithpandas.Example2Itisawisechoicetobuytheticketsonline.Buyingticketsonlinewillsaveyoumuchtrouble.Sentence2Itisawisechoicetobuytheticketsonline,_______willsaveyoumuchtrouble.Task1:MakeonechangeinFaker’swritingwithanAttributiveClause,orinyourownwritingandshare.___________________________________________________________________________________Example3Translation观察不同学校之间的差异是很有趣的。_________interesting_____________thedifferencesbetweenschoolsindifferentcountries.2.让这次旅行与众不同的将会是欣赏地方戏，“川剧”。_______________________________enjoyingthelocalopera,the“SichuanOpera”.3.这次旅行一定要去峨眉山参观。_________totheMountE’meiisamusttothistrip.Strategy3_____________________Bymakingchangestothesubjectofasentence,wecanalwayshighlightthekeyinformationandbalancethesentenceastheimportantinformationshouldbeputfirst.Commonwaystochangeasubject:“It”as“FormalSubject”“Clauses”assubjects“todosth.”assubjects“doingsth.”NounsassubjectTask2:MakeonechangeofsubjectinFaker’swriting,orinyourownwritingandshare.…whatmakesthistripspecialwillbehavingclosecontactwithnaughtymonkeysalongtheroad…Strategy4Makefulluseof“__________________”“Non-finiteverbs”canserveasasubject,anobject,andevenleadanadverbialclause,etc.Theydisplaytherelationshipbetweenideasclearlyandreasonably.Example4Fillintheblanks_________(hear)thatyouarecomingtoChengdu,Istartedmakingplansforgreatfoodsandplacestovisit._____________(travel)ataspeedofover400kilometersperhour,thetraincancompletethe30-kilometerjourneyineightminutes._______(locate)insouthwestSichuan,Chengduhasattractedvisitorsworldwide.________(pay)avisittothenationalhistorymuseumprovidesuswithachancetogainmoreknowledge.Task3:MakeonechangeofsubjectinFaker’swriting,orinyourownwritingandshare.Practice:推荐一处家乡景点touristattraction/scenicspot/；西岭雪山是你一定要去的景点。（ChoiceofExpressions/changeofsubject）YoumustgoandseetheXilingSnowMountain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________这里山顶积雪覆盖，是很多濒危动物和罕见植物的家园。(ChangeofStructure)Themainpeakismarvelouslysnowcappedanditishometomanyendangeredan