英语作文中的典型错误课件

作文中的

典型错误

分析作文中的

典型错误

一、词的用法与句型搭配不当AnEnglishmanteachesourEnglish.

一位英国人教我们英语。2.

Justlikebeesproducehoneyteachersproduceknowledge.

老师生产知识就象蜜蜂产蜜一样。AnEnglishmanteachesusEnglish.

teach,give,pass,show,buy,sing,send,borrow,lend等有时跟一个宾语、有时须跟双宾语。Justasbeesproducehoneyteachersproduceknowledge.

like不是连词，不能引导主谓结构。一、词的用法与句型搭配不当AnEnglishmantea3.Becauseinourcitytherearealotoffactoriesandmanyvehicles,sotheatmosphereisverydirty.因为我们城市有许多工厂和车辆，所以空气污浊。Becauseinourcitytherearealotoffactoriesandmanyvehicles,theatmosphereisverydirty.

Inourcitytherearealotoffactoriesandmanyvehicles,sotheatmosphereisverydirty.*because引导从句，连接主从结构，表示主从关系；而so连接并列结构,表示并列关系，所以不能同时出现在一个句子里。3.Becauseinourcitythereae.g.Althoughinpoorhealth,butshecontinuedtocarryoutherduties.尽管她身体不好，但她仍继续执行任务。

Althoughinpoorhealth,shecontinuedtocarryoutherduties.Shewasinpoorhealth,butshecontinuedtocarryoutherduties.e.g.4.Ihopesomechancetoimprovemyself.

我希望有进修的机会。

Ihopeforsomechancetoimprovemyself.

英语中只有hope+宾语从句

或

hopeforsth

没有hopesth的结构。5.Herhusbandchangedrudeandselfish.

他们变得自私和粗暴。They

became/turnedrudeandselfish.change不是系动词，不能直接跟形容词。4.Ihopesomechancetoimpro7.Hedecidedtoputhisenergiestowrite.

他决定把精力投入写作。

Hedecidedtodevotehisenergiestowriting.*英语中没有putone’senergiestodosth的结构。*Itisonethingtohavetheories,andanotherthingtoputthemintopractice.有理论是一回事，将它们付诸实践是另一回事。7.Hedecidedtoputhisenerg8.Ifwewanttoconstructourmotherlandtobeadevelopedcountry,wealsoneedmoney.

如果我们想把祖国建设成为一个发达国家，我们还需要资金。Ifwewanttomakeourmotherlandadevelopedcountry,wealsoneedmoney.英语中没有constructsthtobe+形容词的结构。Theteacheraskedmetoconstructasentencelikethis.Theywantedtheirbuildingsconstructedinawaytolookunnatural.(p.19B.2/S2)8.Ifwewanttoconstructour9.Iwillfurnishmynewhousetobemorebeautiful.

我将把我的新房子装饰的漂亮一些。Iwillfurnishitandmakeitbeautiful.*英语中没有furnishsthtobe+形容词的结构。10.Studyinghistoryneedsthatyougooveriteveryday.

学历史需要每天复习。Studyinghistory,youneedtogooveriteveryday.*need不能跟

that从句。

9.Iwillfurnishmynewhouse11.Ontheweekendmychildrenwouldtakemygrandchildrentoseeme.周末我的孩子们往往带着孙子们来看我。Ontheweekendmychildrenwouldtakemygrandchildrentomyplace（andseeme）.英语中没有takesbtodosth的搭配*Wetookflowerstooursickfriends.

我们给生病的朋友带花去。11.Ontheweekendmychildren12.Wewillchangeourcountryintobigandpowerful.我们将要把我们的国家变成强大的国家。Wewillmakeourcountryintoabigandpowerfulone.*英语中没有changesthinto+形容词的结构。*但可以说changeAintoB,其中A、B都是名词。*Thewitchchangedtheboyintoadog.巫婆将那男孩变成一只狗。12.Wewillchangeourcountry13.Ioftendreamtobeacollegestudent.

我常梦想成为一个大学生。Ioftendreamofbecomingacollegestudent.英语中没有dreamtodosth的搭配，但可以说dreamofdoingsth/dream+that从句。*Shedreamedthatonedayshewouldbefamousforhernovel.她梦想有一天她能以她的小说而出名。13.Ioftendreamtobeacoll二、结构错误1.Therearemanymeaningfulthingsthatwecan’tbuythemwithmoney.Therearemanymeaningfulthingsthatwecan’tbuywithmoney.2.Somepeopleinordertogetmoney,theysoldtheirsouls.Inordertogetmoney,somepeoplesoldtheirsouls.二、结构错误1.Therearemanymeaning3.Somepeoplewhoenjoysinginganddancing.Sotheyoftengotoclubswiththeirfriends.Somepeoplewhoenjoysinginganddancingoftengotoclubswiththeirfriends.4.Sheisalwayswarningme,tellingmedon’tdothis,don’tdothat.Sheisalwayswarningme,tellingmenottodothisorthat.3.Somepeoplewhoenjoysingin11.Moneycan’tbeinsteadofeverythinginourlife.Moneycan’t

replaceeverythinginourlife.12.Aswhenlifestyleschange,humansareincreasinglylivinglonger.

Aslifestyleschange,humansareincreasinglylivinglonger.

11.Moneycan’tbeinsteadofe15.Onarrivingattherailwaystation,myfriendswerewaitingformethere.Onarrivingattherailwaystation,Ifoundmyfriendswaitingformethere.16.Thecarrantothedirectionofthesquare.Thecarranin/towardsthedirectionofthesquare.15.Onarrivingattherailway三、表达方式不够地道1。回家的感觉真好，可以吃到妈妈亲手做的家乡菜。

Ifeelgoodtobeathome.Icaneatthehometowndishesmymummakes.It’sgreattobehome.Icanenjoythelocaldishesmymummakes.*athome是物理概念，指具体的存在;behome是抽象概念，指家的感觉与气氛。三、表达方式不够地道1。回家的感觉真好，可以吃到妈妈亲手做的3。家里呆的时间长了，有时我也会想念学校的生活。那里没有妈妈的唠叨，自由很多。Isometimesmisstheschoollifewhenstayhomefortoolong.Ihavemorefreedomtherewithoutmum’sendlesstalking.IsometimesmisscampuslifewhenIstayhomefortoolong.Ifeelmorefreetherewithoutmum’snagging.*schoollife意味刻苦学习，campuslife包含较为轻松生活3。家里呆的时间长了，有时我也会想念学校的生活。那里没有妈作文中的

典型错误

分析作文中的

典型错误

一、词的用法与句型搭配不当AnEnglishmanteachesourEnglish.

一位英国人教我们英语。2.

Justlikebeesproducehoneyteachersproduceknowledge.

老师生产知识就象蜜蜂产蜜一样。AnEnglishmanteachesusEnglish.

teach,give,pass,show,buy,sing,send,borrow,lend等有时跟一个宾语、有时须跟双宾语。Justasbeesproducehoneyteachersproduceknowledge.

like不是连词，不能引导主谓结构。一、词的用法与句型搭配不当AnEnglishmantea3.Becauseinourcitytherearealotoffactoriesandmanyvehicles,sotheatmosphereisverydirty.因为我们城市有许多工厂和车辆，所以空气污浊。Becauseinourcitytherearealotoffactoriesandmanyvehicles,theatmosphereisverydirty.

Inourcitytherearealotoffactoriesandmanyvehicles,sotheatmosphereisverydirty.*because引导从句，连接主从结构，表示主从关系；而so连接并列结构,表示并列关系，所以不能同时出现在一个句子里。3.Becauseinourcitythereae.g.Althoughinpoorhealth,butshecontinuedtocarryoutherduties.尽管她身体不好，但她仍继续执行任务。

Althoughinpoorhealth,shecontinuedtocarryoutherduties.Shewasinpoorhealth,butshecontinuedtocarryoutherduties.e.g.4.Ihopesomechancetoimprovemyself.

我希望有进修的机会。

Ihopeforsomechancetoimprovemyself.

英语中只有hope+宾语从句

或

hopeforsth

没有hopesth的结构。5.Herhusbandchangedrudeandselfish.

他们变得自私和粗暴。They

became/turnedrudeandselfish.change不是系动词，不能直接跟形容词。4.Ihopesomechancetoimpro7.Hedecidedtoputhisenergiestowrite.

他决定把精力投入写作。

Hedecidedtodevotehisenergiestowriting.*英语中没有putone’senergiestodosth的结构。*Itisonethingtohavetheories,andanotherthingtoputthemintopractice.有理论是一回事，将它们付诸实践是另一回事。7.Hedecidedtoputhisenerg8.Ifwewanttoconstructourmotherlandtobeadevelopedcountry,wealsoneedmoney.

如果我们想把祖国建设成为一个发达国家，我们还需要资金。Ifwewanttomakeourmotherlandadevelopedcountry,wealsoneedmoney.英语中没有constructsthtobe+形容词的结构。Theteacheraskedmetoconstructasentencelikethis.Theywantedtheirbuildingsconstructedinawaytolookunnatural.(p.19B.2/S2)8.Ifwewanttoconstructour9.Iwillfurnishmynewhousetobemorebeautiful.

我将把我的新房子装饰的漂亮一些。Iwillfurnishitandmakeitbeautiful.*英语中没有furnishsthtobe+形容词的结构。10.Studyinghistoryneedsthatyougooveriteveryday.

学历史需要每天复习。Studyinghistory,youneedtogooveriteveryday.*need不能跟

that从句。

9.Iwillfurnishmynewhouse11.Ontheweekendmychildrenwouldtakemygrandchildrentoseeme.周末我的孩子们往往带着孙子们来看我。Ontheweekendmychildrenwouldtakemygrandchildrentomyplace（andseeme）.英语中没有takesbtodosth的搭配*Wetookflowerstooursickfriends.

我们给生病的朋友带花去。11.Ontheweekendmychildren12.Wewillchangeourcountryintobigandpowerful.我们将要把我们的国家变成强大的国家。Wewillmakeourcountryintoabigandpowerfulone.*英语中没有changesthinto+形容词的结构。*但可以说changeAintoB,其中A、B都是名词。*Thewitchchangedtheboyintoadog.巫婆将那男孩变成一只狗。12.Wewillchangeourcountry13.Ioftendreamtobeacollegestudent.

我常梦想成为一个大学生。Ioftendreamofbecomingacollegestudent.英语中没有dreamtodosth的搭配，但可以说dreamofdoingsth/dream+that从句。*Shedreamedthatonedayshewouldbefamousforhernovel.她梦想有一天她能以她的小说而出名。13.Ioftendreamtobeacoll二、结构错误1.Therearemanymeaningfulthingsthatwecan’tbuythemwithmoney.Therearemanymeaningfulthingsthatwecan’tbuywithmoney.2.Somepeopleinordertogetmoney,theysoldtheirsouls.Inordertogetmoney,somepeoplesoldtheirsouls.二、结构错误1.Therearemanymeaning3.Somepeoplewhoenjoysinginganddancing.Sotheyoftengotoclubswiththeirfriends.Somepeoplewhoenjoysinginganddancingoftengotoclubswiththeirfriends.4.Sheisalwayswarningme,tellingmedon’tdothis,don’tdothat.Sheisalwayswarningme,tellingmenottodothisorthat.3.Somepeoplewhoenjoysingin11.Moneycan’tbeinsteadofeverythinginourlife.Moneycan’t

replaceeverythinginourlife.12.Aswhenlifestyleschange,humans