外研版英语短文改错

外研版英语短文改错外研版英语短文改错外研版英语短文改错资料仅供参考文件编号：2022年4月外研版英语短文改错版本号：A修改号：1页次：1.0审核：批准:发布日期：（一）DearElli, I’maseniorstudent.IlikemakefriendswithpeoplebutIdomybesttogetonwelleveryone.ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriendswroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeandthathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.NowshehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’m fat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriendofmine

Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.ShouldIdolessexerciseorusepillsAnddoyouknow anyotherwayPleasegivemesomeadvices.Yours, Mary（二）DearSir,IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’mquiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsiteforpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledgeindifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytogetalongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother. Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollegebroadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillgetthechanceworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardto（三）Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboyWhatthismeansisthatifyou studyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwise youwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthattheworkyoudoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendayandsevennightsaweek. （四）DearTracy，AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexamplemetofollow.Butheoftensays：“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme. （五）EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotonatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!”,heshouted.（六）Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computersaregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inpast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend. （七）In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’s handbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthelift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedfortheground floor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught. （八）OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet. Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIhasshivering andIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imusthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.（九）Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecityinlastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.Wesupplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’sincomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastrade. （十）Thankyouforyoure-mail!Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,butwealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself

Tellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon! Lisa（十一）HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,thechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatIwasverylovely

Yes.Yousee,Iwasmakingface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.IaskedmymotherhowoldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthattime.Canyouseethehouseallmakingofwood

Thehousewhichwasnewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthisoldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,becausethereweremanyfriendlyneighbourswegetalongverygoodwitheachother,butit’sagreatpitythatWewillmoveawaysoon.Totellatruth,Ireallycan’tbeartopartfromthem. （十二）Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedaletterfromaelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayhesawthatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoabuswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefusetooffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,theyevensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorryforthis.Today’syoutharetomorrow’soldpeople.RespecttheoldandcaringfortheyoungisafinetraditionofourChinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepitup.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingthisincidentandyouwillhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideoroutsidetheschool.Thankyou.（十三）Hello!I’mHannah,isformerEditorofKiwibox’sLife&Peoplesection.I’venowmovedandbecametheSeniorEditorofBooks&School.Alittleaboutmeyoumaynotknow:Iam17-year–oldhighschooljuniorfromArizona.I’vebeenonKiwiboxforJanuaryof2004, whichIbecameareporter.OutsideofKiwibox,myhobbiesincludemusic,writingandjusthangingoutandtrytogetthroughhighschool.I’mreallyhappilytobeapartoftheBooks&Schoolsection.Ilovereadandwrite,sobookreviewsarealwaysalotoffuns.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorcommentsaboutthissection,I’dlovetoanswerit.Youcanreachmeatgingermulatta.（十四）HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyandoftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,butin1904heproducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,acarmaker,wasveryinterestinginRoyce’scar,andsoonRollsandRoycegointobusinesstogether.OneoftheirfirstmodelwastheSilverGhost.In1907,aSilverGhostbroketheworld’srecordbydrive14,371mileswithoutbreakingdownonce.Afterthedrive,itwascostjustover￡2toputthecarbackintoperfectcondition.ThisisnotsurprisingthattheSilverGhostwasregarded“thebestcarintheworld”.（十五）HowmuchtimesdoyouspendwithyourparentsWhendidyoulasttellthemwhatisonyourmindYouparentsareyourdearestpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung.Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep.Buteventhoughmanychildrenstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmaybecomemoreclose asyougetolder.Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.Haveyoueverthoughtwhatyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethem

Findchanceanddosomethingforthemortohaveasinceretalkwith

them.Ifyoucandothis,yourparentswillbeveryhappy. （十六）“Practicemakesperfect”wasanoldsaying.Ittellsusthatitdoesnotanymatterifweareslowatdoingsomething.Aslongaswekeepontryingandpractice,we’lldoagoodjobintheend.ThesayingisespecialusefulinEnglishstudy.Sinceastudentispooratspeaking,heshouldgraspeverychancetoopenmouthandspeakEnglish.HisoralEnglishmaybeexcellentonedayduetohishardworks.Notonlyis thesayingusefulinEnglishstudy,itisalsohelpfulinourdaylife.Toanextent,itisnoshortcutindoingeverythingsincekeytosuccessliesin“Practicemakesperfect”. (十七)AtaFridaynight,apooryoungartiststoodatthegateofthesubwaystationandplayedhisviolinwithlargepieceofpaperontheground．Beforelong,hewassurroundingwithpeople,whowereallattractedbythewordonthatpaper.Itsaid,“lastnight,agentlemanputanimportantthingintomyhatbymistaken.Pleasecometoclaimitsoon.”Seeingthis,peoplewonderedwhyitcouldbe.Afterabouthalfanhour,amancameandbroughtbackhislotterywhichwonaprizeof＄500,000.Latesomeoneaskedtheviolinist:“Whydon’tyoutakethelotteryticketforyourself

”Hesaid,“WhileIdon’thavemuchmoney,Ilivehappily.However,Ilosehonesty,Iwon’tbehappyforever.”

(十八)AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,ItookpartinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearnedtospeakGermangoodinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Atthefirstclass,theteacheraskedusdoapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhy."Ifinditgreatfuns.It'sthefirsttimeI'veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent."heexplainedit.（十九）OnedayIhappentofindachattingroomonmyQQ,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised.IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely. （二十）WhiletraveledtoParisonabus,Ibecameverysick.Awell-dressingmanonthebushelpedmegreat.Hetookmeoffthebus,foundoutwherethedoctor’soffice.andtookmetotherehimself.Thenextday,hecametovisitme.Ididn’tspeakFrenchwell,soIcan’ttalkwithhimverymuch.However,evenifwecouldn’ttalk,butwecouldcommunicate.Icommunicatedmyselfthankstohisgreatkindness,andhecommunicatedhisconcernformyhealthy.ThroughthisexperienceIhavelearnedthatcommunicationcantakeplacewithoutmuchactuallanguageatall.（二十一）TheInternetisplayingaimportantpartinourdailylife.Onthenet,wecanlearnaboutnewsbothhomeandabroadandsomeotherinformationsaswell．Wecanalsomakephonecalls,sendmessagesbye-mail，gotonetschools，learnforeignlanguagesbyourselves．Beside，wecanenjoymusic，watchsportsmatches，andplaythechessorcards．Thenetevenhelpusdoshopping，makeachatwithothersandmakefriendswiththem.Inword，theInternethasmadeourlifemoreeasier． （二十二）DuringtheweekendItraveledbyairthefirsttimeinmylife.Igenerallytravelbytrainandbus.Itisbothcheaperandsafe.Butthiswasashortjourney.InthebeginningIdidnotfeelveryhappily,butthisfeelingdidnotlastlonger.Thejourneywasveryexciting.Iwassoonhighupintheskyamongthecloud.Theviewsofmountains,fieldsandriverswereinterested.Ienjoyedmyshortandcomfortablejourneyverymuch.Thisexperiencehaveshownthattravelinginairisactuallythesafestwayofmakejourneys. (二十三)Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.Onmywaytothecinema.ImetanEnglishwoman,whomhadlostherway.Igaveupthechanceseethefilmandtookhertoherhotel.Whilegothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplacehereinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmesomethingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,butIstillfeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpracticedmyspeakingEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldnothavebeenabletohelphim. (二十四)Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenasthetelephonerings.Iwenttoansweritimmediately.Shewasmyclosefriend,Lisa.Whenweweretalkingonaphone,thefirealarmsounded.Iranbacktothekitchen.Theroomfullofsmokeandthebeefwasbadlyburnt.Iquicklyturnedoffthegas,openingallthewindows,andthenwentoutofthehouse.Inmysurprise,twofireengineswereoutsidemyhouse.Iamratherworried.Itoldaboutthefirementhatitwasmycarelesscookingwhichcausedtheheavysmoke.(二十五)IreceivedyourletterwasdatedAprill6thedaybeforeyesterday.Allofourfamilygreatlydelightedtolearnhowyouaregettingalongverywellwithyourlessons.Timepassesquickly.Afterdozensofdays,you’llfinishthemiddleschool.Whatpleasesusmostisthatyoudoverygoodtomakeupyourmindtoenterforthecollegeentranceexaminationthissummer.Whatwonderfulitis!Dad,aswellasMomandI,iswithyou.Wewishedyoutomakebetteruseofyourtime.Thefullpreparationsyoumake,thesurerofsuccessyou’llcertainbe. (二十六)DearJim,I'dliketotellyousomethingmoreaboutourschoolsportsmeet.ItwasholdingonOct.6,whichwasafineday.Therewasover1,000studentsandteachersattendit.WangLin,astudentfrommyclasswonthe100-meterrace.Hefinishtheracein12.6seconds andbrokeintheschoolrecord.Thesportsmeetwasreallysuccess.Thatwasbecausewewerealltryingtodomybest.AlthoughIwasnotoneofthewinner,Iwasproudofthatwehaddone.Lookingforwardtoreceivingyourletter.Yours,LiPing(二十七)Agroupofscientistswereplanningtogotocountrysidetodoascientificresearchinordertofindoutthatwhethertheenvironmentofthecountryhadpolluted．Onarrival，theystartedtochecktheairandwater．Tooursurprise，theyfoundhowterriblythesituationwas．Theycouldseetheseriouspollution．Lookintothecause，theypersuadethegovernmenttopassthelawtoprotectenvironmentandkeptthebalanceofnature．Noweverythinghaschanged．Birdsaresingingwhiletreeandgrasswaving． 改错答案（一）第一行make→making,but→and，well后加with第二行in去掉第三行he→she第四行of去掉friend前加a,other→another第五行less→more第六行advices→advice（二）第一行at→in第二行offering→offered;fit后加for第三行many→much;field→fields第四行easily→easy第五行another→others;work→worked第六行→will去掉第七行work前加to（三）第一行from—of/about；make—makes第二行times—time第三行having—have；him—them第四行that去掉第五行try后加to83．正确第六行compete后加against/with第七行happier—happy；day-days（四）第一行去掉but；children→child 第二行about→for第三行did→does ；在all后加the第四行me前to；Doing→Do 第五行hurting→hurt 第六行去掉been；he→him（五）第一行went→goes第二行newspaper前面加a；passing→pass第三行over→to；see→read第五行unless→until；on→off第六行It改为There第七行去掉to；very→more（六）第一行去掉第一个me；去掉in 第二行usefully—useful 第三行that—what第四行past前加the第五行but—however第六行did—do；第二个it—them第七行very—more ；prepare后加for（七）第一行In—On第二行together后加with；four—fourth第三行enter—entered第四行pulled—pushed第五行for去掉；walked改为walking第六行thief前加the；which改为where第七行has改为was（八）第一行went/\→for；well→fine/nice第二行could→clouds第三行blown→blowing；去掉were；第四行but→so；第一个a→an第五行has→was第六行must→should；去掉第二个to（九）第一行去掉in第二行been去掉第三行We改为They第四行themselves改为them.第五行last前加as；did改为do第六行asking改为asked第七行few改为little第八行delighted改为delight；that改为what.（十）第一行how改为what第二行删去people后面的to第三行listen改为listening；friend改为friends第四行elder改为older第五行funs改为fun第六行第一个yourself改为you第七行had改为would第八行read后加上about；interesting改为interested（十一）第二行去掉it；face前加a第三行foot—feet 第四行in—at第五行making—made；去掉which 第六行and后加have第七行were—are；good—well 第八行a—the（十二）第一行a—an第二行student—students第三行refuse—refused；for—to第四行much去掉第五行Respect—Respecting第六行our—us；have—has第七行this前加from；and后加that（十三）第一行is后加the第二行became→become第三行17—year—old→a17—year—old；for→since第四行which→when第五行try→trying第六行happily→happy；love后加to第七行funs→fun第八行85．it→them（十四）第一行that—which 第二行a^better；but—and第三行interesting—interested；go—went第四行model—mode