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托福作文写作范文详解题目:Today,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?话题和题型分类媒体类;同不同意题型题目分析广告能否提高产品销量思路提示A.同意广告提高产品知名度名人代言,激发购买欲密集的广告宣传攻势B.不同意需考虑可支配收入与个人的消费习惯有关SampleAnswerNowadays,therearelotsofadvertisementsontelevisionoronthestreets.Somepeoplethinkthattheadvertisingbooststhesalesofgoodsanditencouragespeopletobuythingsunnecessarily.Thisargumentmaybetrue.Aroundtheworld,manyadvertisingcompaniesproduceadvertisementswithfamousandpopularactorsorsingers.People,especiallyyoungsters,buygoodsthattheirfavouriteidolsadvertise,eveniftheydonotreallyneedtheproducts.(首段开篇摆明观点:广告可以影响人们消费这一观点可能是正确的)Foronething,onthetelevisionscreenaproductmaylookgorgeousandofsolidquality.Asaresultofthis,peopleoftenbuygoodswithoutenoughconsideration.Consumersmaynotactuallyneedthembuttheybuygoodsimpulsivelysoonaftertheywatchtheadvertisement.Furthermore,asmanycustomersbuyaparticularproductduetoitsadvertisingcampaign,otherpeoplemaybeaffectedbythetrend,eveniftheproductisnotessentialtothesociety.(文章第二段从正面论述作者观点)Ontheotherhand,therearevariousaspectsagainstthisargument.Inparticular,itisthepeople'schoicetomakeadecisiontobuygoods.Advertisingmaynotevenbeamajorcauseofcustomers1buyingactivitiesasindividualshavetheirownspendinghabits.Iftheyhavegotenoughdisposableincome,thentherighttomakeadecisionisgiventothem.Noonecanactuallyjudgewhetherthegoodssoldarereallynecessitiesofthesocietyornot.Inaddition,astheretendstobealimitedamountofdisposableincomeconsumersareabletospend,peopletrytoallocatetheirbudgets.Theycannotbeswayedsimplybythoseadvertisements.(文章第三段从反面论述作者观点:消费者购物不会单纯受广告影响)Inconclusion,ascustomershavetheirownstrongopinionsandstandardsofhighqualityproducts,itisbettertoleavethemtomaketheirowndecisionsinbuyinggoods.Itisimplausibletoclaimthateveryoneisswayedbyadvertisingandbuygoodsimpulsively.(全文总结,突出作者观点)满分要素剖析:语言表达本文的语言简洁明了,观点清晰。同时本文分别从正反两面论述观点,结尾处突出作者观点,结构完整,论证客观、全面。本文中一系列的连接词使得文章更加连贯:foronething,furthermore,ontheotherhand,inaddition,inconclusionoOntheotherhand,therearevariousaspectsagainstthisargument.此句型可用于在议论文中提出反面论据。逻辑结构本文是总分总结构的议论文。开篇先陈述事实并表达观点,第二段从反面切入后转向正面论述,第三段从正面进一步论述,使得论证更加客观严谨。第四段对全文进行总结,并重申自己的观点。题目:Somepeoplebelievethatchildrenaregiventoomuchfreetime.Theyfeelthatthistimeshouldbeusedtodomoreschoolwork.Howdoyouthinkchildrenshouldspendtheirfreetime?话题和题型分类抽象类;说明类考题题目分析先天因素vs后天经验思路提示A.先天因素研究表明先天因素对人的影响非常重要环境决定了最终性格能不能形成后天经验的不可预测性B.后天经验性格是父母遗传和后天经验交互影响形成的如果这个结论不成立,我们就可以断定人的性格在出生那一刻就已经被决定SampleAnswerTheissueofwhetherchildrenaregiventoomuchfreetime,inmyopinion,doesnotrelyonhowmuchtimetheyaregiven,butonwhatkindsofactivitiestheydotoutiliseperiodoftime.Takingfulladvantagesofthefreetimeoutofschoolcanbenefitchildrenalot.(首段开篇摆明观点:利用好课余时间对孩子们大有益处)Apparently,topromotechildren'sintellectual,emotional,andphysicaldevelopment,thereareavarietyofways,whicharenotmerelyrestrictedtoformaleducationalapproaches.Forinstance,socialactivitiescaneffectivelyenhancechildren,ssenseofteamspiritandtheirabilitiestocooperateandcommunicate,whichareevenmoresignificantthanIQintheirfuturecareers.Theyshouldbeencouragedtoparticipateinvoluntaryactivitiesandsports,whichcanbenefitthembothphysicallyandmentally.(第二段分析孩子们如何利用课外时间以及课外活动带来的好处)Besides,childrenwhohaveinterestsinartscanhaveanabundanceoftimetofostertheirspecialtalents,bywhichtheywillnotnecessarilyhavetogrowuptobepianistsorpainters,etc.,buttheymightbenefitfromtheseusefulresourcespsychologically,i.e.thesekindsofleisureactivitiescanhelpthemeasetheirminds,overcometheirlonelinessandacquireasoundingwellbeing,especiallywhentheyareconfrontedwithadversitieswhentheybecomeadultsinthecompetitivemodernsociety.Whatsmore,withoutthedirectsupervisionofaparentorateacher,theyhavetolearntheabilitiesoftimemanagement,andhencetheawarenessofthatoneshouldtakeresponsibilityofoneselfwillbeelevated.(第三段从有充足时间培养特长和学会管理自己的时间分析课外时间以及课外活动带来的好处)Inconclusion,nomatterinwhatrespects,childrenshouldbeencouragedtospendmoretimeoutofschool,ratherthanfocusonlyonstudies,sinceactivitiesinfreetimecanhelpthempromotetheirdevelopment,fostertheirspecialtalentsandlearntheabilitiesoftimemanagement.(总结全文重申观点)满分要素剖析语言表达本文多出现长句、复合句,作者利用连词等句子各部分紧密连接,逻辑性强,行文流畅,语言表达清晰,准确表达作者观点。Forinstance,socialactivitiescaneffectivelyenhancechildren,ssenseofteamspiritandtheirabilitiestocooperateandcommunicate,whichareevenmoresignificantthanIQintheirfuturecareers.Forinstance用于举例说明;which引导的非限定性定语从句解释在未来职业生涯中,合作与交流的能力甚至比智商更重要。Besides,childrenwhohaveinterestsinartscanhaveanabundanceoftimetofostertheirspecialtalents,bywhichtheywillnotnecessarilyhavetogrowuptobepianistsorpainters,etc.,buttheymightbenefitfromtheseusefulresourcespsychologically,i.e.thesekindsofleisureactivitiescanhelpthemeasetheirminds,overcometheirlonelinessandacquireaso

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