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读后续写练习写作指导讲义读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。TheSaturdaybeforeChristmas,1o'clocka.m.,Iwasheadingforabird-watchingsiteafewhoursnorth.Theweatherforecastcalledforthepossibilityoffog,butthedrivedownwasclear.AsIapproachedthedestination,thefogbegantobuild.Atabend,Ihitaroadshoulderandlostcontrolofthetruck.Itriedtocorrect,butitwastoolate.Withaclang,thebackofmytruckwentoverasteepbankandsliddowntothewater.Therewasaseriesofflashes,clicks,andwhirsbeforealllightsandelectronicswentout.Iprayedthatthewaterwasn'tdeep.Atfirst,thesceneseemedpeaceful,almostbeautiful.Inthedimlight,IcouldbarelymakeoutthatIwasinalargecanalfloatinggentlydownstreamandspinningslowly.Itriedtoopenthedoor,butitwaslocked.Thewaterhadshortedtheelectricalsystem.IrememberedIhadaglassbreaker.Itwasinthecentreconsole（仪表盘）.Igrabbedthetoolandgavethepassengerwindowasharphit,butthebreakermerelybouncedoff.Ihititagain,withthesameresult.Itriedatwo-handedswingbutonlymanagedtoscratchthewindow.Witheachfailedattempt,theurgencyofmysituationbuilt.Watergatheredatmyfeet.Ilaydownontheseatandtriedtokickoutthewindow,butmyfeetjustbouncedoff.Bythispoint,thetruckwasmostlysubmerged（淹没）andthewaterwaspushingagainstthewindow.Inside,thewaterlevelwasovertheseat,andcoldwatersoakedmybackandneck.IfIcouldreachmytoolboxbehindtheseat,surelyIwouldfindthetooltobreakthewindow.Idivedforit,withobjectsfloatingaroundme:aplasticbottle,afoldablewindshieldcover,asmallpillow.Theinsideofmytruckhadbecomeagiantsnowglobe,andIwastrappedinit.注意：.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitmyfireextinguisherbyaccident.Paragraph2:Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthebankofthecanal.写作解析■前文分析•时间theSaturdaybeforeChristmas,1o'clocka.m.•地点onthewaytoabird-watchingsiteachanal•人物I•事件Iwasheadingforabird-watchingsitebutanaccidenthappened.•主要情节圣诞节前的那个周六，为了观鸟，我凌晨一点出发前往观鸟地。天气预报说，可能有雾，但没特别留意。在接近目的地的时候，在一拐弯处，因雾太浓，看不清，车撞到了路肩上，之后车滑进了水渠里。车子到了水里，因为浸水，汽车出现了故障，更麻烦的是，车门打不开，没法逃生。后来，经过一系列的努力，……■下文分析•两段开头段1:Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitmyfireextinguisherbyaccident....段2:Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthebankofthecanal....•情节安排段1:①于是就潜水去取灭火器，但因水冰车晃，没法抓牢。②求生的欲望，让我在拿到灭火器后把窗砸开了。③就从砸破的车窗逃出去。段2：①寒风低温让我一时爬不上岸。②最终经过多次尝试，用尽最后一点力气，上了岸。③反思此事，吸取教训。范文1Paragraph1:Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitmyfireextinguisherbyaccident.Idivedforit,butthecoldwaterandtheswingingmotionofthetruckmadeitimpossibleformetograspittightly.However,itwasthebeliefofsurvivalthatgavemetheperseverancetoswimtothewindow.Igatheredallmystrength,graspedthefireextinguisherandslammedthewindow.Itwasreallyalife-savingtool,whichhelpedtocrackthepassengerwindow.Adefinitereliefcametome.Nothingwasmoreimportantthanbeingalive.Ipassedthroughthebrokenwindow.(86words)Paragraph2:Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthebankofthecanal.Thebitingwindandthelowtemperatureaddedthedifficulty,makingmybodylosealmostallsensation.Withseveralconstantattempts,Imanagedtotakeholdofthestoneonthecanalsidewithmylaststrength.Havingashortrest,Isucceededingettingmyselfoutoftrouble.Whendawnfinallycameandthefogfaded,survivingwasthehappiestthing,thoughIhadnochancetoheadforabird-watchingsite!Lookingback,Ialwaystoldmyselfneverblindlytobeover-trusting.(84words)范文2Whilestrugglingwiththetoolbox,myhandhitthefireextinguisherbyaccident.Igraspedandusedittobreakthewindow.Theextinguisher,too,merelybouncedofftheglass.Thewaterlevelhadrisen.Iexperiencedamomentoffearborderingonpanic.ButIknewIhadtocarryon.Inthefollowingtime,Iswungtheextinguisherunderwater,wentabovethewatertogulpair,andthendiveddownandtookasmanyswingsasmybreathwouldallow,withtheonlyhopeofweakeningthewindowthroughrepeatedimpact.Ididn'tknowhowlongitlasted,butsuddenlytheimpactfeltdifferent.Iextendedmylefthandandfeltaholeinthewindow.I'mgoingtolive!Iusedthetooltobreakawaytherestoftheglassandswamoutofthetruck.(127words)Iswamforshoreandtriedtoclimbupthesideofthecanal.ThebankwaswetandslipperyandInoticedmultiplecutsinmyfingersfromrippingthedooropen,allofwhichmadeclimbingupextremelydifficult.Apartofmejustwantedtogiveup.Mylifeflashedbeforemyeyes.IthoughtofallthepeopleI'dknown,theexperiencesI'dhad,andtheexperiencesIwouldneverhave.Ittookallmyremainingwillpowertoscreamatthetopofmylungs.Incredibly,someoneresponded.Twobirdwatchersspottedmeanddraggedmeontothebankofthecana