2022第一学期浙江强基联盟10月统测-读后续写《感恩妈妈来接我》

2022第一学期浙江强基联盟10月统测--读后续写《感恩妈妈来接我》阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Whenschoolwasover,thedaywasfadinganditstartedtodrizzle（毛毛雨）.Istoodattheschoolgate,withaloadedbackpackonmyshoulders.ItwasFridayagain:aweekendofjoywithunlimitedsleepinghoursanddinnercoursesspeciallymadetomytaste,aweekendathome.Iwavedgoodbyetomyfriendsastheyjumpedintotheirfathers'warmandcomfortablecars.Curiously,thisgaverisetoadisturbingfeelinginme.Itwasnotexactlywhattheycalledjealousy,butsomethinglikedismay（沮丧）.IknewallIcouldexpectwasanoldbikeMomwouldridealongon,withthebadly-oiledchaincreaking（嘎吱作响）againstthewheeltoannounceherarrivalEveryFridaywhenMomcametopickmeupfortheweekend,itwasamomentfullofgreatexpectationandgreatunease.Ialwaysfeltmyfaceburningaswerodeourwayinandoutofthenumerouscarsandsawmyfriends7facesstickingoutofthecarwindows.Itwaslikesteppingintoaballroom（舞厅）withbeautifullydressedladiesandfindingyourselfinasmellyT-shirt.Totellyouthetruth,Momisquiteaheadacheonceinawhile.Shejustlooksahomelymiddle-agedhousewife.BeingapractitionerofDIY（〃自己动手〃原则的践行者）sheknits（编织）mostofmysweaters,chieflystyles.Whenevercaughtbysomecuriousclassmatesaskingwhatbrandmysweatersare,I'dforceasmileandreplyinahalfjokingmanner:homemade.Icouldn'trememberwhenIstartedtofindhersuchanembarrassmentAsalittleboy.IreliedonhersomuchShehadbeenworkingathome,cookinginthekitchen,knittingbythelamporridingacrosstowntobuymeabookIbadlyneeded.Ithadalwaysbeenmuchfunridingwithmom.Butjustnowthereseemedtobesomethingstandingbetweenus.somethingthatmadehersostrangetomeandmetoher.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。（——框）Paragraph1Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat.（—©Paragraph?Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin我想就着这个续写，把以前网上流行的一篇文章《我的父亲是一个收棒子的一一以此献给天下所有父亲》印给学生看一看。算是一个“感恩教育”。正如网上文字所说：父母给了我们生命，不能给我们锦绣前程！不要责怪父母，他们没钱，他们贫穷，任何人都可以小瞧他们，但我们不可以！父母尽自己最大的所能，把儿女养育，对儿女付出。作为儿女，千万不要嫌弃自己的父母。他们已经在为了孩子，付出了自己的大半生！对父母，多尽孝心，不忘恩情，穷不怪父，自立自强！懂得善待父母，老天给你留路！我自己也下了个水。目前在“读后续写”方面的教学，我的指导思想是：强化基础，写对句子。每次选取某个主题，然后进行多次练习。让知识不断地在学生脑子里复现，从而转换为永久记忆。(——框)Paragraph1Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat.Iwasfilledwithexcitementatfirst,butitwasquicklyfollowedbydepression.Lookingaround,Iblushedquicklybecausetherearenumerouscarsaswellasfriends5facesstickingoutofthecarwindows.Overwhelmedwithsadness,Irantomom,hopingtoleaveassoonaspossible."Mysweet,whynotwaitformeoverthere.Itisraininglightly."Momsaid,consumedwithworryobviously.“Gobackhomequickly.Idon'tfeelgood,"Iansweredcoldlyandthensatonthebike.Havingcoveredmewiththebackoftheraincoat,momsetoff.Andastimewentby,itbegantorainheavily,formingastorm.)Paragraph2Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.Unintentionallyseeingtherainfallingonherface,Iwassuddenlyovercomebyastrongsenseofguilty.Andatthesametime,numerousscenescametomymind:mom'scookinginthekitchen,herknittingbythelamp,andridingtobuymeabook,andsoon.ThenIrealizedhowselfishIwas."Eventhoughmomisnotrich,shegivesmewhatevershehas.1shouldn'thavetakenherasanembarrassment.vAtthethoughtofthis,Icouldn'thelpwipingawaytherainonherface.Laterwearrived.AndwhenIsteppedintomyroom,Ismiledatmymom,"Dearmom,thankyouforallyoudoforme.IhopetoseeyoueveryFriday/9【官方答案】Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat.Seeingherstandingintheheavyrainwithallthebodywet,Ifinallycouldnotcontrolmyselfandshoutedather,“Whydoyoulooksoflustered?Idon'tneedyoutotakemehome.Ifeelashamedtohaveamotherlikeyou!”Suddenly,Momwasshockedandsilent.Maybe,shehadneverthoughtthatIwouldhavethatfeelingofherappearanceandourhomecondition.Shesaidnothingandjustcoveredtheraincoatonme.Ipusheditawaywildly.Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.Withasmile,shesaid,"Dearson,I'mtryingmybesttoearnourliving,andI'msurethatifweworkharder,wewillgetwhateverwewantinthefuture."Hearingherwords,Ifeltembarrassed.Ithoughtofthetimewhensheknittedinthedeepnightandcookedforme