续写升格微方法：环境描写（1）讲义-高三英语写作专项

续写升格微方法：环境描写（1）Abreezeblewthroughtheroom,blewcurtainsinatoneendandouttheotherlikepaleflags,twistingthemuptowardthefrostedwedding-cakeoftheceiling,andthenrippledoverthewine-coloredrug,makingashadowonitaswinddoesonthesea.一阵清风吹过屋子里，把窗帘从一头吹进来，又从另一头吹出去，好像一面面白旗，吹向天花板上糖花蛋糕似的装饰，然后轻轻拂过绛色地毯，留下一阵阴影，有如风吹过海面。ThelateafternoonskybloomedinthewindowforamomentlikethebluehoneyoftheMediterranean.窗外，天空在夕照中显得格外柔和，像蔚蓝的地中海一样。Roaringnoon.炎热的中午。Therainwasstillfalling,butthedarknesshadpartedinthewest,andtherewasapinkandgoldenbillowoffoamycloudsabovethesea.雨还在下，可是西方的乌云已经拨开，海湾上空翻滚着粉红色和金色的云霞。Itwasdarkhereinfront;onlythebrightdoorsenttensquarefeetoflightvolleyingoutintothesoftblackmorning.前面这里很暗；只有敞开的门向幽暗的黎明射出十平方英尺的亮光。Nowitwasacoolnightwiththatmysteriousexcitementinitwhichcomesatthetwochangesoftheyear.Thequietlightsinthehouseswereburningoutintothedarknessandtherewasastirandbustleamongthestars.那是一个凉爽的夜晚，那是一年两度季节变换的时刻，空气中洋溢着那种神秘的兴奋。家家户户宁静的灯火仿佛在向外面的黑暗吟唱，天上的星星中间仿佛也有繁忙的活动。Thenextdaywasbroiling.酷热难当。OnthegreenSound,stagnantintheheat,onesmallsailcrawledslowlytowardthefreshersea.在绿色的海湾上，海水在酷热中停滞不动，一条小帆船慢慢向比较新鲜的海水移动。Asilvercurveofthemoonhoveredalreadyinthewesternsky.一弯银月已经悬在西天。Wilson’sglazedeyesturnedouttotheashheaps,wheresmallgraycloudstookonfantasticshapeandscurriedhereandthereinthefaintdawnwind.威尔逊呆滞的眼睛转向外面的灰堆，那上面小朵的灰云呈现出离奇古怪的形状，在黎明的微风中飞来飞去。风景描写It’saseparatecommunitybuiltaroundabeautifulgreen,dottedwithfloweringbushes.这是一个独立的社区，周围是一片美丽的绿植，还有鲜花盛开的灌木丛作点缀。Theairiswarmwithhopefulhintsofspringinit.温暖的空气中透出春天的气息。Theskyisazurebluewithpuffywhiteclouds.Brightsongbirdsflutteroverhead.天空蔚蓝，飘着朵朵白云。漂亮的鸟儿在头顶盘旋。风景⭐Notasoulpassedthatwayforalongwhile,andthefaintnotesofthebandweretheonlyhumansoundsaudiblewithintherimofbluehills.很长时间没有人经过，在山峦的四周，能够听到的人类声音只有那隐约传来的铜管乐队的音乐。Itisavalewhoseacquaintanceisbestmadebyviewingitfromthesummitsofthehillsthatsurroundit—exceptperhapsduringthedroughtsofsummer.Anunguidedrambleintoitsrecessesinbadweatherisapttoengenderdissatisfactionwithitsnarrow,tortuous,andmiryways.从环绕在谷地周围的山峦的顶上往下看，景色一览无余——但也许夏天的干旱天气要除开不算。天气不好的时候，没有向导带路而独自漫游到谷内幽深之处的人，容易对蜿蜒其间的狭窄的泥泞小道产生不满情绪。Behindhimthehillsareopen,thesunblazesdownuponfieldssolargeastogiveanunenclosedcharactertothelandscape,thelanesarewhite,thehedgeslowandplashed,theatmospherecolorless.在他的身后，山峦尽收眼底，太阳照耀着广阔的田野，为那片风景增添了气势恢弘的特点，小路是白色的，低矮的树篱的枝条纠结在一起，大气也是清澈透明的。Thevillagewasshuttingitseves.Candlesandlampswerebeingputouteverywhere.村子闭上眼睛。所有地方的烛光和灯火都熄灭了。Theatmosphereturnedpale,thebirdsshookthemselvesinthehedges,arose,andtwittered;thelaneshowedallitswhitefeatures,andTessshowedhers,stillwhiter.Thehugepoolofbloodinfrontofherwasalreadyassumingtheiridescenceofcoagulation;andwhenthesunroseahundredprismatichueswerereflectedfromit.天色已经发白，小鸟在树篱中抖擞着，飞起来，吱吱地叫着；道路完全显露出它的白色面目，苔丝的面目也显露出来，比道路还要灰白。她面前的一摊血水已经凝固了，宛如彩虹的色彩；当太阳升起来时，上面就反射出一百种光谱的颜色。【assume】呈现ItwasafineSeptemberevening,justbeforesunset,whenyellowlightsstrugglewithblueshadesinhair-likelines,andtheatmosphereitselfformsaprospectwithoutaidfrommoresolidobjects,excepttheinnumerablewingedinsectsthatdanceinit.这是九月里一个美好的傍晚，正是太阳落山的时候，黄色的亮光同蓝色的暮霭相互争斗，变成了一缕缕发丝一样的光线，大气本身就构成了一种景色，除了在大气中展翅乱舞的无数飞虫而外，它根本就不需要更多的实体的帮助。Darknessandsilenceruledeverywherearound.AbovethemrosetheprimevalyewsandoaksofTheChase,inwhichwerepoisedgentleroostingbirdsintheirlastnap;andaboutthemstolethehoppingrabbitsandhares.周围的一切沉浸在黑暗和寂静中。在他们的四周，都是猎苑里长的密密麻麻的古老的水杉和橡树，树上栖息的温柔小鸟还在睡最后的一觉；在树林中间，大大小小的野兔在悄悄地蹦来跳去。ItwasahazysunriseinAugust.Thedensernocturnalvapors,attackedbythewarmbeams,weredividingandshrinkingintoisolatedfleeceswithinhollowsandcoverts,wheretheywaitedtilltheyshouldbedriedawaytonothing.那是八月里的一个雾气朦胧的黎明。夜间产生的浓厚的雾气，在温暖阳光的照射下，正在分散开来，缩小成一堆一簇的雾团，掩藏在洼地里，树林中，它们就聚集在那儿，直到最后消失得一干二净。Aparticularlyfinespringcameround,andthestirofgerminationwasalmostaudibleinthebuds.一个特别明媚的春天来到了，几乎听得见苞芽里生命的萌动。TheFroomwat