《中考英语写作指导》公开课课件共25张

1、中考英语作文指导 九 （2）2017年4月26日中考英语作文指导 九 （2）2017年4月26英语写作在中考英语中占据重要的地位，写作分值的高低直接影响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？ 英语写作在中考英语中占据重要的地位，写作分值的高低直接影响到习作范例 Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.What exactly your hobby is;When and how you beca

2、me interested in this hobby;Why you enjoy your hobby;About your hopes and plans for the future.写作要求：1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80. 习作范例 Choose one of your hobbie一、写作要点“一审”即审题。 “二写”即列纲或打腹稿。 “三连”即连词和句成文。 “四改”即修改润色全文。 一、写作要点“一审”即审题。 审题：做到三审体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注

3、意文体是什么 时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。 审题：做到三审列纲：做到三思 词汇短语句式 列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。 列纲：做到三思 词汇短语句式 连句成文根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。 连句成文文章

4、分3段：综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题 正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话 结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华 文章分3段：综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题 修改润色全文做到三查 要点、拼写、语法是否连贯看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。 修改润色全文做到三查 要点、拼写、语法是否连贯二、各类作文常用框架1、话题作文，演讲 总-分-总 Its adj for us to. On the one hand,On the other

5、hand, Whats more, In a word,/In short,.二、各类作文常用框架1、话题作文，演讲2、讨论报告，列举不同观点 总-A方-B方-我方-总 Recently, we have a discussion about. Different people have different opinions. A thinks. B thinks differently. As for me,/In my opinion, . All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to.2、讨论报告，列举不同观点3、写信，

6、建议 总-分-总 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you. Firstly,. Secondly,. Finally,. In a word,If you, you will3、写信，建议学生习作AMy hobby is read books. When I was seven years old, I became interested in reading books. I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can l

7、earn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to be a good person. Books even can solve many problems for me. I will read more good books to improve myself. 改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。also的位置应放在can之后。12学生习作A改为reading books，动词作表语时点评：档次10-15分。要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者 但文章不流畅，

8、句子与句子之间过渡不自 然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。有少量错误。 中考英语写作指导公开课课件共25张PPT学生习作BMy hobby is reading. Reading books is very enjoyable. When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before. I went to bed every night. The stories were so interesting that I always felt they werent enough. So I began to read books by m

9、yself. Little by little I became interested in reading. I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world. When I read books, I can enjoy the beautiful sentences. At the same time I can improve my writing. I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read mor

10、e books so that my dream can come true. 学生习作B 开门见山、点题。真情流露，理由充分。文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡 自然、巧妙使用句型以表决心。 点评：档次15-25分。清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实 感，文章有感染力。恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错 误，是一 篇高质量的作文。 开门见山、点题。三、提高写作的方法（造句）三、提高写作的方法（造句）句型转换，句式多样性 Tom is a student. He is 16 years old. He likes running Tom, a 16-year

11、-old student, likes running. 句型转换，句式多样性 Tom is a student. T多使用短语 I got up quickly. I got up as quickly as possible. He studies English well. He is good at English. He does well in English.多使用短语 I got up quickly. I got The girl likes reading.The pretty girl likes reading novels.The pretty girl likes

12、reading novels carefully.The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.扩写 The girl likes reading.扩写 句子的衔接词 并列关系：and，or，either . or，both . and，not only . but also. as well as转折关系：but，however，yet，although条件关系：if, whether，unless时间关系：when，as，before，after， while，until，since，as s

13、oon as因果关系：because，as，since，for，so句子的衔接词 并列关系：and，or，either . In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will t

14、hank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much. In my life, I will thank my moIn my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. (But) she does housework and works hard in the factory. (When) I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. (When) I am ill, she looks after me carefully. (In a word), I will (not only) thank my mother for giving me life, (but also) thank her for helping me. (So) I love my mother very much. In my