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1、Unit 6 The admirableWriting写作题目阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Why do earthquakes happen? Scientists believe that the surface of the earth is covered by a number of moving plates. Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other. Sometimes they stop for years but at other times they jump and
2、an earthquake is felt. Because of the movements of these plates , China , California of America and Japan, have alot of earthquakes. You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate. When the 1906 earthquake happened, the Pacific plate jumped 5 to 6 metr
3、es to the north.China is a country where many earthquakes happen. The Pacific plate is pushing China from the east and the Indian plate is pushing China from. the southwest. The power of this movement created the Himalayas and Mount Qomolangma. It now causes earthquakes in China. We cannot stop eart
4、hquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy the whole city. First it is not a good idea to build houses along the line where two plates meet. Second, if you think there may be an earthquake,make sure to build houses on rocks rather than on sands. Third, you must make the houses as
5、strong as possible. Weak buildings will fall down in an earthquake, but strong ones may stay up._文本分析本文是一篇说明文,是典型的“总分”结构,全文共分为两段。每段的中心大意如下:第一段:介绍了地震发生的原因;第二段:介绍了中国是-个地震频发的国家及其原因,并介绍了减少地震损害的措施。筛选、整合信息在读懂原文并抓住大意的基础上,定位每个段落的主要内容。第一段: Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other. Someti
6、mes they stop for years but at other times they jump and an earthquake is felt.第二段: We cannot stop earthquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy the whole city.转换表达要点1第一段的前半部分内容可概括为要点1,该要点含有时间先后顺序,可用when引导的时间状语从句来表述,例如,可同义转换为“When two plates move towards and push against each oth
7、er, an earthquake just happens. , 可提炼概括为“Earthquakes happen when two moving plates jump and push against each other.。要点2第一段的后半部分内容可概括为要点2,该要点是对要点1的简单举例说明,可用副词thus与要点1衔接,即Thus, because of the movements of these plates ,China, California of America and Japan have a lot of earthquakes. ,可同义转换为“Thus, in
8、 areas, like China, California of America and Japan, earthquakes happen a lot. ,结合“You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate.可利用定语从句将前面总结的句子转换为“Thus,in areas, like China, California of America and Japan,where different plates meet, earthquakes hap
9、pen a lot. ”要点3第二段内容可概括为要点了,该要点具体介绍了减少地震损害的-些措施。文中采用列举的方式提出三种措施:结合Weak buildings will fall down in an earthquake, but strong ones may stay up.用非谓语结构及省略句式概括为“To protect our cities from this deadly power, wed better build houses in the regions with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary,
10、making them strong enough to survive earthquakes.连句成篇_写作积累1.economic losses经济损失e to ones rescue挽救某人3.be trapped in ruins被困在废墟中4. The earthquake caused structural damage to the buildings.地震对建筑物结构造成了破坏。5.The global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe. 全球水资源短缺(问题)正变得日益严重。6.A severe earthquak
11、e destroyed almost everything.一场剧烈的地震几乎毁了一切。7.People are more and more aware of the importance of the protection of the environment.人们越来越意识到环境保护的重要性。It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten our lives. 它不仅影响我们的日常生活,还有可能威胁我们的生命。实战演练阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。A 7. 1-magnitude quake t
12、oppled(使倒塌) houses, cut off power and first-aid materials supply in northwest Chinas Qinghai Province on Wednesday while rescuers faced difficulties in searching for the buried.Rescuers have set up more than 40 tents for survivors in the Gyegu Town, near the epicenter(震中) in the Tibetan Autonomous P
13、refecture of Yushu in southern Qinghai. But the effort seems far less than enough for the area inhabited (居住于) by some 100, 000 people.Many people sought temporary shelters in buildings that remained unaffected by the tremor(轻微地震).In the yard of Yushus Sports Committee, nearly 1 ,000 people were sit
14、ting or lying on the ground in sheer (完全的) darkness. Some wrapped themselves up with quilts taken out from the debris(残骸). Some brought their own tents and others turned on the lights of motorcycles.“Im hungry and thirsty. Weve been waiting for help since morning, said ZhaxiToinzhub.A woman said her
15、 three children were still buried in the rubble(瓦砾).The National Meteorological Station forecast on Wednesday that temperatures may hit minus 3 degrees Celsius at night and 15 degrees Celsius in the daytime in the coming days.The town will see sunny weather in the coming days, providing favorable co
16、nditions for rescue operations.The town is located in a remote area in Qinghai and the quake and ensuing(随后发生的) landslides have damaged roads, causing great difficulties for rescuers and, especially, machines to enter the region.“Rescuers had to dig with bare hands or iron sticks on Wednesday, looki
17、ng forward to the arrival of digging machines,”said a rescuer surnamed Wang, who was working at a collapsed hostel.“The searching operation became even harder at night without lighting facilities, he said. In addition, rescuers may easily get exhausted working at a place with an altitude (海拔)of abov
18、e 4 ,000 meters.Thousands of rescuers and medical staff are rushing to Yushu from many regions of China, bringing machines,disaster-relief materials and medicines to the quake-hit town. The government, organizations, enterprises and individuals are offering donations of money and materials to the re
19、gion._答案参考范文Earthquakes happen when two moving plates jump and push against each other.( 要点1) Thus, in areas, like China, California of America and Japan, where different plates meet, earthquakes happen a lot.( 要点2) To protect our cities from this deadly power, wed better build houses in the regions
20、 with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary,making them strong enough,to survive earthquakes. (要点3)实战演练写作指导语篇内容解读本文是一篇新闻报道,主题语境是人与自然,主题语境内容是自然灾害与防范。本文共13短。第1段简明扼要地介绍了地震发生的时间,地点,震级和破坏程度等。第2段到底12段详细描述了受灾群众的基本情况:饥渴交迫,无家可归,还介绍了在恶劣的环境下,救援人员面临很多挑战。第13段讲述了许多救援人员前往玉树实施援救,政府,各种组织和个人等为灾区捐献各种物资。Para. 1: Introduction of the earthquake: place, time, magnitude, the survivors and rescuers.文章脉络分析Para. 13: the government and organizations are offering help.The weather co
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