高考英语写作专题经典讲座二十二 句子美化技术1

1、PAGE 第PAGE 页码5页/总NUMPAGES 总页数5页Evaluation Warning: The document was created with Spire.Doc for .NET.写作专题二十二 句子美化技术1：同位语句子美化技术1：同位语同位语表示与前面的名词处于同一关系，在语法上是“名词+名词”结构，在意义上，后一个名词解释前一个名词。例如，在句子“我们的语文老师，陈老师，教书非常出色”中，划线部分就是同位语。英文“Mr. Chen, our teacher of Chinese, teaches us excellently”，划线部分就是同位语。中英思维方式有差异，

2、所以位置有所不同。一 学会使用同位语的多种表达技巧我们认真的观察下面同位语与它所修饰的名词之间的关系：技巧1：I am looking forward to visiting Beijing, a city with many famous places of interest. 小概念 大概念 其他修饰成分技巧2：I am looking to visiting Beijing, capital of china. 被修饰词 表示特征的名词短语He paid a visit to Mr. Bush, president of the United States of America. 被修饰

3、词 表示身份的名词短语Mr. Bush saw a pair of little pandas in the zoo, a kind of animal only alive in China. 被修饰词 补充意义的名词短语二 定语从句与同位语的转化。1 China, which is a country with a long history of 5000 years, is now developing very fast. （定语从句）改为：China, a country with a long history of 5000 years, is now developing ver

4、y fast. 2 Finally, Su Dongpo, who was a great poet, arrived in Huizhou, which was then a city famous for its beautiful lakes.改为：Finally, Su Dongpo, a great poet, arrived in Huizhou, then a city famous for its beautiful lakes.3 Egypt, which is a country with a long history of 5000 years, attracts man

5、y tourists from all over the world. （定语从句）改为：Egypt, a country with a long history of 5000 years, attracts many tourists from all over the world. 4Finally, Li Bai, who was a great poet, arrived in Xian, which was then the capital of the Tang Dynasty and also an international city.改为：Finally, Li Bai,

6、a great poet, arrived in Xian, then the capital of the Tang Dynasty and also an international city.练习三 运用同位语的方法进行翻译1 Marty Fielding患有一种特殊的肌肉疾病，行动笨拙，经常碰到家具上。Marty Fielding, _, moves very clumsily and keeps bumping into furniture. 2. 我渴望去北京，一个拥有4000年历史的城市。I am eager to go to Beijing, _. 3. 昨天，我去拜访了Joh

7、n, 一个乐于帮助别人的人。Yesterday I visited John, _.4. Larry是机器人公司的工程师，送妻子一台名叫Tony机器人做家务，以检测它的性能。Larry, _, gave a robot called Tony to his wife Claire, who tested out the machine. 5.第二天早上，我把一个内壁和外壁装有果冻的，冰冻过的碗罩在蛇窝上方。The next morning, I placed the frozen bowl, _.练习四 运用同位语的方法合并句子例题: Most students cannot wait unt

8、il semester break.Semester break is a time to relax and forget about deadlines and exams.合并为: Most students cannot wait until semester break, a time to relax and forget about deadlines and exams.The ski trip1 Sammy found herself bored on her winter break from school. Sammy was a short, red-haired dr

9、ama major.2 So Sammy called her friend Rhoda. Rhoda was a tall, brown-haired physics major.3 Finally, Sammy and Rhoda decided to go on a ski trip. The trip was a fun, fantastic, fantasy escape.4 First, they made reservations at the Big Bear Hut. The Hut was a ski lodge in Bear Valley.5 Then, Sammy a

10、nd Rhoda rented their supplies. The supplies were skis by Rossignol and boots by Fischer.练习五 运用同位语的方法合并句子例题: Most people enjoy music.The people are those of any age.Music is a kind of medicine for the soul.合并为:Most people, those of any age, enjoy music, a kind of medicine for the soul.1. Heavy metal

11、 is supposed to attract crowds of long-haired, maladjusted teens. Heavy metal is music with loud electric guitars and drums. The maladjusted teens are young people who rebel against their parents. 2. But my Uncle Walter enjoys listening to Heavy Metal. Uncle Walter is a 40-year-old, bald accountant.

12、 His Heavy Metal is usually some song by Arrows and Petunias.3. On the other hand, modern rock is supposed to attract hordes of modern teenagers. Modern rock is music featuring vocals and acoustics. The teenagers are boys who are addicted to MTV and girls who dream of dating the lead singers.4 But m

13、y Aunt Wilma listens to modern rock. Aunt Wilma is a 50-year-old housewife. Modern rock is any new release by D-Fresch Load.5. Soft music is supposed to attract people like Walter and Wilma. Soft rock is background music often played in elevators. Walter and Wilma are people who wear polyester suits

14、.练习答案：练习一 运用同位语的方法进行翻译1. a boy suffering from a kind of muscle disease2. a city with a history of 4000 years.3. a man always ready to help those in need.4. an engineer for a robot company5. the one with some jelly between its outside and inside walls.练习二 运用同位语的方法合并句子The ski trip1 Sammy，a short, red-

15、haired drama major，found herself bored on her winter break from school.2 So Sammy called her friend Rhoda，a tall, brown-haired physics major.3 Finally, Sammy and Rhoda decided to go on a ski trip，a fun, fantastic, fantasy escape.4 First, they made reservations at the Big Bear Hut，a ski lodge in Bear

16、 Valley.5 Then, Sammy and Rhoda rented their supplies，skis by Rossignol and boots by Fischer.练习三 运用同位语的方法合并句子1. Heavy metal, music with loud electric guitars and drums, is supposed to attract crowds of long-haired, maladjusted teens, young people who rebel against their parents.2. But my Uncle Walter, a 40-year-old, bald accountant, enjoys listening to Heavy Metal, usually some song by Arrows and Petunias.3. On the other hand, modern rock, music featuring vocals and acoustics, is supposed to attract hordes of modern teenagers, boys who are addicted to MTV and girls who dream of datin