初中 初三 英语沪教牛津版9A U8-2 Writing 课件

1、Unit 8Surprise endingsModule 4 A taste of literatureWriting 深圳中学 梁舒云ContentsRead an article about a special gift.01Learn to write about your most valuable gift.02Learn about the writing task.03Module 4 A taste of literatureSurprise endingsUnit 8Think about the kinds of gifts you usually give on spec

2、ial days. Use the pictures and the questions below to help you.What kinds of gifts do you usually give on Mothers Day/ at the Mid-Autumn Festival / on Christmas Day/ ?Why do you choose this gift?What do you often say when you send your gift?How does the receiver like your gift?Have you ever received

3、 a gift that you feel excited about? What is it?Do you have any photo albums?Which photos do you usually put in your photo albums?Do you write notes under each photo?A photo albumA Jimmy has written a short article about the most valuable gift he has ever received. Read the article and answer the qu

4、estions.The most valuable gift What is Jimmys most valuable gift? Whom did Jimmy get it from? Why did Jimmy and Kevin become close friends? What happened to Kevin last summer?Questions about Jimmys article It is a photo album. He got it from Kevin.They were classmates for all six years of primary sc

5、hool and they both liked playing football and listening to music. He had to move to another city because of his fathers job. What can be found inside the photo album? How did Jimmy feel when he got the gift? What does Jimmy do with the gift now? Questions about Jimmys articleHe puts the album beside

6、 his bed. When he thinks of Kevin, he always looks at it. Photos of the memorable events they have experienced together and notes under each photo.He was deeply moved.B Write a short article about the most valuable gift you have ever received. Follow the example in A. Writing processStep 1 Step 2 St

7、ep 3 Step 4 Step 5 Step 1 Make a plan for your article.PrewritingWriting tips:1. Brainstorm the gifts you have.2. Ask yourself about this gift.3.Use a mind map to help.Step 2 Write the first draft.while-writingTips:Answer the above questions.Use complete sentences.Limit your writing time.Step 3&4 Re

8、vise and edit your draft. post writingA good article contains:A logical structureProper words and sentencesSuitable linking wordsGood expressionsPretty handwriting Lets take a look at Jimmys article.The most valuable giftMain ideas of each paragraphPara. 1 The name of the objectPara. 2 The relations

9、hip between the gift sender and receiver Para. 3 The reason for the gift & its featuresPara. 4 The way how “I” treat the gift nowProper words and sentencesSuitable linking wordsGood expressionsStep 3&4 Revise and edit your draft. Tips:When you revise, you change the parts to make your article in a l

10、ogical structure.When you edit, you check the spelling, punctuation and capitalization errors. Pay much attention to the grammar mistakes.The singular or plural forms of the nounsThe tenses of the verbsSubject-predicate agreementRegular collocations Proper prepositions and articlesCommon grammar mis

11、takes名词的单复数问题动词时态问题主谓一致问题固定搭配问题介词和冠词的正确形式问题giftsAmongthegavewantedenjoyhave been readingthe world is full ofbecause this book showsRead this example and make corrections.Step 5 Polish and share your writing. post writing Tips:When you polish (润色) your article, set phrases are more impressive. Try to

12、 use suitable linking words (关联词) and good sentence patterns.post writingBefore you show your writing, youd better make a neat, final copy. The Most Valuable gift I have received so many gifts on my birthdays. Among them, I like the book called “Beautiful English”best. My mother gave it to me last y

13、ear. Because she wanted me to read English as well as to enjoy the beautiful sentences. Since then, I have been reading it. . When I first read this book, I soon felt facinated with it. I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. People around us often help, respect and understand each other. I appreciate this book, for it is not only a book but also my mothers love and guide in my life. 假如你是Lily, 你得知外籍朋友Betty即将回国，你为Betty制作了一个中国结作为礼物，请你根