9.10-9.13作文击破班真题第1天-课件

1、GRE作文击破班Day 1: Argumentyanyu日程安排Argument (今天晚上)Ie (周六上午)冲刺 (周日上午)：Argument今日”类instruction“考虑Argument四种instruction现场讲解学生作文现场写作“考虑”类instructionWrite a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the arg

2、ument.evidence类instruction出现频率30% ( 52/174)从字面上来理解：Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.还需要什么特定来评价（作者的）论证从字面上来理解：Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidenc

3、e is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.解释（这些）如何增强或削弱论证几个值得思考1. 作者的论证和结论一定错误吗？几个值得思考2. 新只能削弱作者的论证吗？几个值得思考3.的目的是增强作者论证吗？对于这类instruction而言作者的结论/建议需要判断，但暂时无法判断对于这类instruction而言作者的结论/建议需要判断，但暂时无法判断因为作者的论证过程中存在问题，论证得不好对于这类instruction而言作者的结

4、论/建议需要判断，但暂时无法判断因为作者的论证过程中存在问题，论证得不好但是，如果有了新，作者的结论就可以判断了对于这类instruction而言作者的结论/建议需要判断，但暂时无法判断因为作者的论证过程中存在问题，论证得不好但是，如果有了新，作者的结论就可以判断了也许对，也许错得看具体可能是什么如何确定所需的？寻找作者论证过程中存在如何确定所需的？寻找作者论证过程中存在考虑什么样的信息能够解决这个问题（注意是解决，不是否定！）如何确定所需的？寻找作者论证过程中存在考虑什么样的信息能够解决这个问题这个信息的载体就是练习：评价以下sement还需要哪些的帮助？高速公路的安全性，P市去年把所有高速

5、公路的限为了速由55英里/小时降到了45英里/小时。但是这样的努力尝试失败了：事故发生的数量没有下降。练习：评价以下sement还需要哪些的帮助？Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive patternhave previously been found onlyhe immediate vicinity of theprehistoric village of Palea and therefore were beved to havebeen made only by the Palean people. Recentl

6、y, however, archaeologists discovered such a Palean basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found.Thus it follows uniquely Palean.t the s

7、o-called Palean baskets were not：Argument今日”类instruction“考虑Argument四种instruction现场讲解学生作文现场写作回到这个Argument本身作者论证有问题，为什么？Write a response in which you examine thesed and/or unsed amptions of theargument. Be sure to explain how the argumentdepends on these amptions and what theimplications are for the a

8、rgument if theamptions prove unwarranted.找出下文中的amption(s)：In an effort to improve our employees productivity, we shouldimplemen their worksectronic monitoring of employeesernet use fromions. Employees who use theernet from theirworksions need to be identified and punished if we are toreduce the numb

9、er of work hours spent onal orrecreational activities, such as shop installing software to detect employeesor playing games. By ernet use on companycomputers, we can prevent employees from wasting time, foster abetter work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overall profits.回到这个Argument本身作者没证明假设，？Wri

10、te a response in which you discuss one ormore alternative explanationst could rival theproed explanation and explain how yourexplanation(s) can plausibly account for the factspresentedhe argument.找出下文的alternativeexplanation(s)：In an effort to bring new jobs to Dillton and stimulate the citys flaggin

11、g economy, Dilltons city council voted last year to lower the citys corporate tax rate by 15 percent; at the same time, the city began offering generous relocation grants to any companyt would move to Dillton. Since these changes wento effect,twfactories have opened in Dillton. Although the twofacto

12、ries employ moren 1,000 people, the unemployment ratein Dillton remains unchanged. The only clear explanation for thisist the new factories are staffed with out-of-town workersrathern Dillton residents.但是，就算作者没有给出严谨证明作者的结论一定错吗？但是，就算作者没有给出严谨证明作者的结论一定错吗？或者能判断哪种解释正确吗？进一步思考：如何判断哪种解释正确？如何判断作者结论是否正确？Write

13、 a response in which you discuss whatspecific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.找出下文中需要的evidence(没有s！)：Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the islandof Tertia and concluded from his observationst

14、childrenertiawere reared by an entire village rathern by their own biologicalparents. However, my recenterviews with children livinghegroup of islandst includes Tertia showt these children spendmu adultsore time talking about their biological parentsn about otherhe village. This research of mine pro

15、vest Dr. Fieldsabout Tertian village culture is invalid and thust theobservation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid as well.Theerview-centered methodt my team of graduate students iscurrently usingertia will establish a muore accurateunderstanding of child-rearing traditions there and

16、 in other islandcultures.是不是少了一种instruction？Write a response in which you discuss what questions would needto be answered in order to decide whether themendationand the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help toevaluate themendat

17、ion.找出下文中需要考虑的questions：For many years the city of Grandview has provided annual funding for the Grandview Symphony. Last year, however, private contributions to the symphony increased by 200 percentand attendance at the symphonys concerts-he-park seriesdoubled. The symphony has also announced an in

18、creaseicketprifor next year. Given such developments, some citycommisers arguet the symphony can now be fully self-supporting, and theymendt funding for the symphonybe eliminated from next years budget.：Argument今日”类instruction“考虑Argument四种instruction现场讲解学生作文现场写作本次课程布置的文章Ten years ago our company had twoffice buildings constructedas regional headquarters for two regions. The bui