写作中高级句式的使用

1、 The usage of highlighted patterns Binxian No.1 senior schoolYuan Xiuying1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。How to write sentences liked by grading people?Advanced

2、 grammar(高级语法结构)独立主格和分词结构 (independent nominativeing /ed form)倒装句(inverted sentences)强调句(It isthat)和it的使用各种从句(clauses)特殊句式(special patterns)_(在他的指导下), we have completed the experiment.He works in a factory_ (生产Toyota的)._(去年建造的桥)is the longest one here. _(解释几遍了), the problem is still troubling me.Dir

3、ected by himproducing ToyotaThe bridge built last yearHaving been explained many timesPattern1:独立主格和分词结构/He derecting us1._(在他的指导下)，we finished the work on time.2._(作业做了)，Tom began to watch TV.3. _(后很多工作要做)，I cant going shopping with him.With him directing usWith his homework finishedWith so much wo

4、rk to doPattern 2:with+complex object(复合宾语)On the top of the hill_(有座寺庙)._(她那样聪明) that she got the answer easily.Only in this way_(你才能学好英语)._(她不仅聪明)but also she works hard at his lessons.stands a templeSo clever is shecan you learn English well Not only is she cleverPattern 3: Inversion (倒装)It is th

5、at是中国的快速发展让老外们惊讶。直到八点钟他才就寝。It is the fast development of China that surprises the foreigners.It was not until eight oclock that he went to bed. Pattern 4: emphasis (强调)I will appreciate it ifIt is obvious/ true/ positive thatIt is generally accepted that.It is said that he has finished his new book.

6、 As is said, he has finished his new book.It is the first time that I have seen the school. It happened that you were not at home. Pattern 5: the usage of it (it的使用)Binxian No. 1 Senior High is the school_ I am studying.I have made great progress, _ made my parents very happy._(他说的一番话) encouraged us

7、 greatly.Bob was a naughty boy, but_ _(他今非昔比了)whichWhat he said now he is not what he waswhere/ in whichPattern 6：Clauses（从句）First, I have to make myself known. 译：Tom is working hard to_(使他的汉语更好).我认为保护环境是我们的责任。make his Chinese better I consider it our duty to protect the environment Pattern 7：Comple

8、x object 首先，我得让别人明白我的意思。* Personalized expression(拟人化表达): He was seen playing football last Sunday. 试译：最近三十年见证了中国的快速发展。* Adjective phrase(形容词短语）: I am very happy to meet you here. _ (我再同意不过第一种观点)。Last Sunday saw him playing football.I cant be happier to meet you hereI cant agree more with the first

9、opinionPattern 8: special pattern (特殊句式) 假如你是张华， 住在哈尔滨市。你的加拿大笔友Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡哈尔滨的情况。请你用英语给他回一封email。Email须包括下表中的内容：自然情况位于松花江边、风景优美、适合居住成就经济发展迅速、新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等存在问恶水、空气污染 人们饱受其害交通拥挤 出行不便对哈尔滨发展的看法内容由考生自定注意：词数100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：经济economyAn exampleThe city stands on the bank of Songh

10、ua River. It isa beautiful place to live and its economy has beendeveloping rapidly in the past ten years. Newfactories, houses and roads have been built. Moreschools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such aswater and air pollution and heavy traffic i

11、n rushhours. In my opinion, Harbin should develop itseconomy scientifically. I would also think that thegrowth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in life. What do you think of it ? Why ?The city stands on the bank of Songhua River. It isa beautiful

12、place to live and its economy has beendeveloping rapidly in the past ten years. Newfactories, houses and roads have been built. Moreschools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such aswater and air pollution and heavy traffic in rushhours. In my opinion,

13、 Harbin should develop itseconomy scientifically. I would also think that thegrowth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in life. Have a try!The city stands on the bank of Songhua River. It is a beautiful place to live and its economy has been develop

14、ing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built.Sentence 1：The city which stands on the Songhua River is Harbin. Sentence 2：It is The songhua River that the city stands on.Sentence 1: It is in the city that more and more schools , hospitals and roads are available for people.More schools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such aswater and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.Sentence 1:In my opinion, Harbin should deve