【中考备考金钥匙】2015中考英语压轴题精编专题(含解析)专题35提纲作文

1、【中考备考金钥匙】2021 中考英语压轴题精编专题含解析专题35英语作文之提纲作文【2021 年福建省龙岩市中考】英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2021 年度“最美孝心少年的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一那么日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：说明自己将向“孝心少年学习；你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；词数： 80 左右。开头局部已给出，不计入总词数。提示词可选用：learnfrom,respect,carefor,do some housework,studyhard Monday, June 30SunnyThis morning,our Englishteachertol

2、dus somestoriesabout “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2021.【答案】Monday, June 30SunnyThis morning,our Englishteachertoldus somestoriesabout “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2021 . I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.I used to

3、 make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter thekey high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety yo

4、uth like them. (88 words)【亮点说明】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:setan examplefor为树立典范；used to do sth 过去常常做某事；take care of 照顾； tryones best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样 等。学习中注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩。 考点：考查提纲类作文。【2021 年湖南省娄底市中考】请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍

5、给你的外国朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junkfood forbreakfastQuarrel(争吵 ) with herIn classAsk some questionsclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateWatch TV or play computerIn the eveningHelp her parentswithhouseworkgames formore thanan hour要求： 1、语言要通顺，表

6、达要正确。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、词数不少于60 个英语单词。4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。【答案】One possible version Dear Mary,I m very glad to introduce(介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning.In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. Aft

7、er school she alwaysexercises(fora longtime).Aftersuppershe helpsher parentswithhousework.(She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk foodfor breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesntgo home on time and she always watches TV or

8、plays computer games for more than anhour intheevening.(Thismakes herparentsunhappy.)IthinkZhang Ying isa very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】试题分析： 这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行表达，写作中主语时态及 主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。 为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很

9、多固定句式，如： be glad to do sth 快乐做某事； a lot of 许多； get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper， Sometimes， in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理清楚。在学习中，我们应注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性, 更富有条理 .考点：考查提纲类作文【2021 年内蒙古包头市、乌兰察布市中考】假设你是李华，请在答题卡相应位置用英语给你的美国笔友Jim 写一封电子邮件，告诉他以下事情：感谢他给你寄来的那些书。你非常喜欢它们，每晚睡前都会读几页。请他下次来信

10、时给你介绍一些美国的节日。非常盼望与他面对面交谈，所以希望他明年夏天能来你的家乡。你愿意作他的导游。你们可以一起参观一些有趣的地方。顺便问一下，这些天他是否在电视中看世界杯。考前须知：文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名等内容。可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。词数 70 110，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：邮寄： mail/post v 导游： guide n 世界杯： the World Cup Dear Jim,How is it going?【答案】Dear Jim,How is it going?Thankyou formailingthebooks tome. Ilik

11、ethem so much thatI read some pagesevery day before going to bed. When you write to me next time, could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day?I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer. On the one handwe can talk face to face and discuss some prob

12、lems that we are both interested in. On the other hand, I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places.By the way, are you watching the World Cup on TV these days?Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【亮点说明】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。 如:thanksb forsth 因为某事感谢

13、某人； sothat如此以至于；such as 比方； On the one handOn the other hand,一方面另一方面；It is adj to do sth，做某事怎么样等。学 习中注意总结 , 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩。考点：考查提纲类作文【2021 年内蒙古通辽市中考】现在养宠物狗已成为很多人生活中的一局部，请你写一篇短文谈一谈对养宠物狗的看法，内容须含利弊两方面。提示：养宠物狗可给人带来快乐，消减孤独与烦恼，陪伴并帮助家人解决一些困难等。养宠物狗会占用很多时间。宠物狗有一定危险性，有时会伤害孩子。另外，它会给家人和邻居带来噪音，污染

14、周围环境等。注意：不要将上述所给的提示直接译成英文，要适当发挥或调整。词数约 80 左右。句首已给出的局部不计入总词数How Do You Like Pet Dogs?Every morning, we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk around. Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think【答案】How Do You Like Pet Dogs?Everymorning,we can see many kindsofpetdogs ledby t

15、hepersonswho walkaround.Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think keeping pets brings joy to our life.Actually,itisgood to keep pets because petscan playwiththeyoung and accompanythe old. Research also shows that living with a pet helps to relieve peoples pressureand distressand even decre

16、asesthepossibilityofgettingheartdiseases.However, many are against living together with animals. They argue that pets areeasilyinfectedby diseases,which may pass on to humans.Whatsmore, the unpleasantsmell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution.So we avoid potential risks

17、 and troubles, we have to make sure that our pets are properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control.【解析】试题分析： 本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于养宠物的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容， 可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行表达，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时， 连词的使用。 内容上应注意描述的全面

18、性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。【亮点说明】这篇范文中出现一些不错的句式和短语，如become a part of成为的一局部； Whats more而且，再说；强调句式，It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样；make sure 确保；以及由if引导的条件状语从句等。学习中注意总结, 牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩。考点：提纲作文【 2021 年山东省临沂市中考】请以“ My favoriteteacher 为题， 根据以下提示， 用英语写一篇不少于60 词的短文。标点符号不占格。提示 ( 短文

19、须包含以下要点) ：What subject does your favorite teacher teach?What does he/she look like? And how about his/her personal traits(性格 )?Tell a story about how he/she helped you.What do you want to say to him/her when you meet in the future?注意：短文中,老师的姓名请一律使用Mr Wang 或 Ms Wang，不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否那么不予评分。My fa

20、vorite teacher【答案】My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair.And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Herclasses are very interesting and creative. Because she has different w

21、ays of teaching. But she is very strictwith us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we arein trouble, she can tryher bestto helpus.We all likeher, and she likes us,too.【亮点说明】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be strictwith对 严格； be ready to do sth 准备做某事；

22、in trouble 处于困难中； try one s best do to sth 尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结 , 牢记一些固定句式及短语 , 写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。考点：考查提纲类作文1Subjectsfavorite, do well in2Activitiescompetition, sports3Friendsget on well 4Spare timewash clothes, reading5Planwork hard要求： 1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2.条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写标准。3.可以适当发挥。4.词数： 80 词左右。文章开头已给出

23、，不计入总词数。Dear Mom and Dad,How time flies! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a fewweeks ago. But now I enjoy my school life.【2021 年湖北省荆州市中考】莹莹的父母外出打工了，她到学校寄宿学习。开始她感到不习惯，在老师和朋友们的帮助下，现在学习、生活非常好。假设你是莹莹，请根据下表提 示给父母写一封信，介绍你的在校情况和今后的打算。Yours, Yingying【答案】Dear Mom and Dad,How time flies

24、! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a fewweeks ago. But now I enjoymy schoollife.Wehave ninesubjectsat school.My favoritesubject is history. Its interesting and I can learn a lot from it. With the helpof my teacher, I do better in English. There are many activities at school. L

25、astweek, I tookpartina singingcompetitionand won thefirstprize.I have made lots offriendshere and we geton wellwitheach other.Inmy sparetime,I usuallywash my clothesor do some reading.Sometimes I playsportswithmy friends.Imstronger than before. Dont worry about me. I can look after myself very well

26、and will workharder in the future.Yours,Yingying【解析】试题分析： 这篇短文要求我们就表格内容写一封给妈妈的信。表格中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容。主要内容包括：一是关于学科方面，包括你最喜欢的学科和擅长的学科等。二是关 于活动方面，比赛和体育活动有什么等。三是交友方面， 你与同学们相处情况。四是业余时间的活动， 如洗衣服、 读书五是你的方案，如今后要努力学习这5 方面的内容是我们写作的根据， 但还需要我们自己去充实一些内容，让短文更加完整、充实。 我们需要发挥想象力，把我们平时积累的知识加以运用。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接要紧密，使文意连

27、贯，表达流畅。时态方面要注意，如Last week, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize.等，表达过去发生的事情要用过去时态。如I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.对将来的打算方案要用一般将来时。【亮点说明】这是一篇比拟不错的作文。作者紧紧围绕要点，向妈妈讲述自己的一些情况，并告诉妈妈自己的方案等。表达要点完整、正确，清晰，语言连贯流畅，有效地传达了规定的信息。 短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得很好，如 I

28、tsinterestingand I can learn a lot from it.等。这些内容都比拟符合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比拟好的句型，如How timeflies!I was notused toeverythinghere a few weeks ago.I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.等。考点：提纲类作文。【 2021 四川雅安】 假设你是一名来自雅安的中学生李红, 今 年 14 岁,暑假你将参加学校组织的赴北京的夏令营活动。请你用英语写一篇在开营仪式上的

29、自我介绍发言稿。请将该发言稿写在答题卡相应的位置上。词数60 - 90。发言稿还包括以下要点:你爱好画画 ;课余时间你喜欢野营, 喜欢在大自然中画植物, 聆听鸟儿的歌唱;你最喜欢的科目是科学 , 希望长大以后成为一名科学家;你很快乐参加夏令营, 希望你们能成为好朋友。【答案】Dear friends,I m very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong. Im 14 years old. I live in Yaan. Im interested in drawing. In my free time, I often goc

30、amping,draw some pictures ofplants,and enjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.My favourite subject is Science. I want to be ascientist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends.That s all. Thank you for listening.【亮点说明】这篇短文虽然语言简单，但是表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。考点：提纲作文。8. 【 2021 年山东烟台】当前，

31、全市各学校正开展“好书伴我成长活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给信息， 以“ Growing up with good books为题，用英语写一篇100-120 词的建议书，向全校同学发出建议。读书的益处获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐。存在的现象听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大局部业余时间。发出建议多读书，读经典好书。向世界传播中国传统文化。让读书成为我们生活的一局部要求：建议书应包括所有要点；建议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Growing up with good booksMy dear friends,Reading is very important.【答案】My dear fri

32、ends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happier. Our study can be improved ifwe readmore good books.The more we read,themore we willlearn,and thebrighterour future will become.However, some students spend much

33、time inlistening to music, watching TV or goingon lineto playgames. Ittakesmuch oftheirsparetime 。 So Iwould liketosuggest thateveryoneshouldread more books,especiallyread classicsso thatwe can spreadour Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let s start reading now. And let it become a part of ou

34、r life!【解析】试题分析 : 首先我们应该注意文章的体裁是应用文，那就要注意应用文的写作特点和格式。其次要注意时态，用一般现在时态。再次要注意内容要点，不要有漏啦。最后要注意条理清晰，语言具有感染力。【亮点说明】这篇短文结构完整，条理清晰，首先介绍了阅读的重要性，然后介绍介绍现在存在的现象，最后发出建议。短文中运用了较好的句式如：The more we read,themore we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.等。为文章增色不少。考点：提纲类作文。9.【2021 山东滨州】 请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“ Le

35、arn to express thanks 为题， 用英语写一篇演讲稿。背1. 认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的；景2. 走向社会后没有感恩意识。感谢社会提供良好的教育时机；感谢父母供养自己上学；学会感恩3. 感谢老师传授知识；4. 感谢朋友的支持与鼓励。参考词汇： enter society进入社会，sense of thanks感恩意识，behavior行为要求： 1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；词数： 80 词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, boys and girls

36、!The topic of my speech today is“Learn to express thanks . In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!【答案】参考范文一：Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my

37、speech today is“ Learn to expre.ssWtehafinnkdssome students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don show any sense of thanks.I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us

38、 a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so o

39、n. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!参考范文二：Learn to express thanks Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is“ Learn to expre.ssWtehafinnkdsmost Middle Schoolstudents don t show any sense of. “ThTehyathniknsk t

40、hat they are certain of eating well andwearing fashionable clothes.As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends a

41、lways give us encouragement and help.In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness.Thank you for your listening!【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表

42、达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当， 多见好句型和习惯表达用语考点：提纲作文。10.【 2021 年安徽】 今天是父亲节。 假定你是李华， 请给你的美国朋友John 写一封电子邮件， 谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：表述你与父亲间的情感；为父亲制作二张卡片；帮助父亲做点事；陪父亲散步等。注意： 1.词数 80-100 ；请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear John,Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it?What your plan for Fathers Day? I

43、m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear John,Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it?Ithinkwe shoulddo somethingto show our love forour fatherson thisspecial day. My fatherand I are good friends.Whenever I meet withdifficulties,he isalways there, ready to help me.Today

44、I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite foodintheevening.Besides,Illtakea walkwithhim afterdinnerand thenplaychess with him, for he likes it very much. I m sure hell be very happy.Whatsyourplan

45、forFathersDay? Im lookingforwardtohearingfrom yon.Yours, Li Hua【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一封电子邮件，介绍如何与父亲一起度过父亲节。材料中给的资料比拟全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。 结合材料可知本文主要用一般将来时态进行表达，写作中， 应注意描述的全面性， 尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结, 牢记

46、一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性, 更富有条理。考点：提纲作文。11.【2021 年广东】 假设你是一名叫李明Li Ming 的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。作文要求：不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。语句连贯， 词数 80 个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Editor,I read the stories on BBC Wor

47、ld Have Your Say today, Your, Li Ming【答案】Dear Editor,I read the storiesonBBCWorld Have Your Saytoday.Iam interestedinMikes story, because Ihad the same experiencewhen I traveled in Guangzhou. I cantstand bad mannersin public, either.In fact,Ireallyget angrywhen people jump the queen and smoke in non

48、-smoking areas. I think its wrong tobreak the rulesinpublic.Inmy opinion,we shouldknow more aboutgood manners.On theother hand,we had betterstoppeople around usfrom beingrude. If we cant stop them, we can alwaysask the police or someone like thatfor help.Yours,Li Ming(92 words)【亮点说明】这篇短文内容涵盖了所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的组织上能够灵活使用简单句和复合句，使文章结构自然流畅。同时， 文章还使用了一些的固定句式和短语，如：am interested in，in public， In fact， In my opinion,以及连接词 when 、if、because 等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语的用法，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。考点：提纲作文。1