被动语态与拟人的效果对比

1、被动语态与拟人修辞的效果对比1 中国学生的作文，尽管其文无大的用词或语法错误，但读起来总感到欠缺地道的英语味道。往往只注意一一对应语态转换。对于语态的认知纬度或视角存在较大差异，而这是无法从语法结构及其组成部分的意义上来认知的。 那么拟人的修辞手法更是少之又少。现状：status quo2问题概括：句型过于单一缺乏简单的修辞手法3汉语人称倾向相对比较明显，故常见采用主动句式（侯晓蕾）有学者统计过英语被动语态的使用频率高达5199%，而汉语则少很多（侯维瑞）4原因：5第二部分：被动语态：被动的形式：be+过去分词目的或用途：强调，句子或篇章的连贯I expect you to be there

2、on time.You are expected to be there on time。6拟人：把无生命的事物、动植物乃至抽象概念等当作有知觉、情感和人格的人来描述，这种修辞方法叫作拟人方法（Personification/Prosopopeia）7拟人常见于诗歌和戏剧中例如：The light has, a thousand eyes, and the day but one, yet the light of the bright world dies with the dying sun. The mind has a thousand eye, and the heart but o

3、ne: yet the light of the whole life dies ,when love is done.81、用人格性质形容词修饰非人的名词2、人格名词同非人格名词连用3、人格动词作非人格主语的谓语（包括逻辑谓语）91、用人格性质形容词修饰非人的 名词the smiling moon微笑着的月亮the angry ocean愤怒的海洋102、人格名词同非人格名词连用the childhood of the world 世界的童年the anger of the tempest暴风雨的愤怒113、人格动词作非人格主语的谓语（包括逻辑谓语）Everything smiled on

4、him.一切皆对他肥效开颜An idea spoke within him, racing through his mind.一个念头在他内心里述说着，疾驰过他的脑际。12相似之处：都是通过动词来体现的主语是物，宾语是人或人的某个部位A watermelon can be eaten by few people. Everything smiled on him.13examples:Mary saw a beautiful sight.A beautiful sight was seen by Mary .A beautiful sight meets Marys eyes.14I have no idea about this.The idea wasnt reminded /picked up by me.The idea didnt hit my mind.15 I didnt know this word. This word didnt find its way into my vocabulary. This word didnt be found in my mind.16conclusion：变换句型，增强文章的文学效果。尽量避免“汉语腔”实现准确，流畅的表达。也不是所有的