英语中考英语总复习--书面表达含解析

1、（英语）中考英语总复习-书面表达含解析一、英语书面表达1 .你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历？请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy.【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good use o

2、f time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also

3、upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式

4、和短语，为文章增色不少，如 make good use of, last weekend ， how to do ， play a game a kind of， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end , be angry with , be going to do , on the paper , put up 等。而特殊非谓语动词结构 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We shoul

5、d write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习 中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性， 也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的

6、作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2.假定彳是David,来自美国，你的 QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来 信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语 回复，可以有适当的发挥。To: HYPERLINK mailto:davidwoodlandschool davidwoodlandschoolFrom: HYPERLINK mailto:limingsunshi

7、neschool limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David,out it.I m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I intere sted in it very much. I m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little abCould you help me answer the following questions?

8、Why do you want to be a volunteer?What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?Do yoihave any problems with volunteering?If my parents don t allow me to do so, what should I do?I m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes,Li Ming注意：1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数；.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校

9、名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer.

10、Now let me answer your questions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environ

11、ment and so on.It s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can balance my study and work. If your parents don t allow you to volunteer, you should have a goodtalk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Look

12、ing forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给好友 Li Ming回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料， 可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主 要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： Im glad;-we can； It s OK to , If your parents don t allow you tyou should-. ,- I hope 等句式的应用。写 作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结

13、构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍 我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工 作。止匕处 would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。.书面表达每年的4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开 展读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校

14、同学发出倡议。读书的意义.获取知识，开阔视野.使人愉悦，益于学习. （自由发挥）现状.作业多，无良好读书习惯.不知道读什么书，不会选择倡议（至少两点）注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life.Let s start reading now!【答案】 Reading is very important in our daily life .First

15、of all, reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books . It can also help to open up a whole new world to us . Second, reading will/can make us clever and happy . It is good for our study and it can help us grow up . Third, reading can help us think more and further and make our life

16、 more colourful However, there is usually so much homework for us to do that we dont have enough time for reading . Moreover , some of us dont have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet .In my opinion , our school can have aReading Weekonce a te

17、rm . Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library We must spend more time reading some useful books. As a result, we can have a better future .Lets start reading now!【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语， 例如 first of all, all kinds of books , help to do , be good for, more

18、and further , so much , spend too much time doing , search the Internet , in my opinion , as a result 等。同时 First of all, / Second, / Third 等时间副词和 However/ Moreover / As a result 等结构副词的运 用，既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮 点点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考

19、生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。.（题文）书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能 有：1.定时做饭、洗衣服；2.陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；.处理紧急情况（如：拨打 120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1.意思连贯，语句通顺；.词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）.参考词汇：at a fixed time 定时 emergency 紧急情况ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,

20、Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for atten ding our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals

21、and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I m sure my ne

22、w invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing , I d like to dointroduce sb. to , all of you , at home , do some washing , at a fixed time ， hav

23、e a chat， play chess do exercise ， deal with ， a great help ， in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help theelderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达

24、多样化，是本文的 最大凫点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊英语角”投稿，内容包括：.雾霾的危害2.雾霾产生的原因（2个）3.应对雾霾的措施（3个）提示：雾霾 smog poisonous有毒的注意：1.词数110左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为

25、你写好（不计入总词数）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.【答案】In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which hasaroused great concern among people.Smog has a bad effect on people s health. Many peop

26、le, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result o

27、f people s burning coal, driving; cars, industry production and so on.What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or sch

28、ool by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将 这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不 能遗漏要点，

29、并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可 知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化， 这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使 用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词 汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。6.书面表达初中就要毕业了，校报 英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根 据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。活动毕业晚会时间6月28日晚上七点地点学校礼堂school hall参与日全体初三学生和老

30、师活动内容1.邀请校长作演讲；.互赠礼物送祝福；.各班表演精彩节目.要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯 ；2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整 洁。3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数 ；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,Im very happy to have the chance to show my plan for

31、the graduation ceremony. The ceremonywill be held in our school hall at 7 o clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. Firstof all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and

32、 blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要

33、考查一般现 在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构 和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写 作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。7 .假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到 80岁。目前数量在减少，因为：1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。要求：1)恰当运用比较级和最高级；2) 80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：哺乳动物 mammal;象牙ivoryDear classmates

34、I believe everyones contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.Yours, Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in t

35、he forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the l

36、aw to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.I believe everyones contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.Yours, Lihua 【解析】【详解】本文是一封倡议书 倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所 处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态 主要为一般现在时。

37、提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let s/We d be峰表示建议的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largestmammals 及 First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly, .Secondly,等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or,but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。8 .假如你是李华，彳的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋

38、词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的游子吟(Song of the parting son)很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下 提示给他回信：.作者：孟郊.时间：唐朝.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服.主题：母爱的伟大注意：.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；.词数：80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son .Yours,【答案】Dear Jack

39、,I m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son . NowI m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in dai

40、ly life a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother s lbe. In a word, this short poem has touched many people s hearts.If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇材料作文。【详解】根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一

41、般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分：第一部分：交代写信目的 一一朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍游子吟(Song of the parting son ) 这首诗。第二部分：文章主体部分具体介绍游子吟(Song of the parting son)这首诗。.作者：孟郊.时间：唐朝.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服.主题：母爱的伟大第三部分：信的结语一一如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来 信。9.近年来，习近平主席提出了实现中华民族伟大复兴的中国梦”。学校开展了 梦想少年的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，请根据以下提供的要点，以 Im a Drea

42、m Teenager为 题，写一篇80- 100词的短文，向大家推介自己。(可联系实际，适当发挥)注意：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。提示词语： 1.be good at 2.help.with 3.follow.rules 4.cheer up 5.be popular with.6.volunteer to do something【答案】Im a Dream TeenagerGood morning , dear teachers and friends , I am Zhang Ming . Its great honor for me to make a speech here.

43、As a fifteen-year-old boy , my dream is to be a good teacher . To make my dream come true , I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects . Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much , and I really enjoy sports . At school, I always follow the school rules , so I a

44、m popular with my classmates and teachers . On weekends, Id like to help people . For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up.In a word , I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. Thats all. Thank you!【解析】【详解】这是一篇图表作文。学校开展梦想少年”的主题演讲活动，假如你是张明，要求根据图表提示内容，以Im a Dream Teenage两题，写一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根据所给出的 材料提示可知文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。首先认真审题， 看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的 表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要将图表内提示信息用英语正确