高三英语书面表达课件-

1、高三复习writing高考书面表达的评分原则:按评分标准分为五个档次第五档：2125分第四档：1620分第三档：1115分第二档：610分第一档：15分 0分24-25 21-2319-20 16-18 14-15 11-139-10 6-84-5 1-3第一档 ( 4-5分） 大部分句子可读性差，只能通词汇 勉强传递少部分信息，词汇明显有限，基本 没有句子能力。（1-3分）只能提到零星内容要点，写了一些 无关内容， 无法传递所需信息 Remember:不要照抄试卷上阅读或其他的篇章内容！第一 杜绝 0 分第三档（14-15）允许遗漏一个主要内容要点，但不影 响预期的写作目的。句子虽然有一些错

2、误，但基本可读。至少有2-3个基本正确的句子并都与不同的主要内容要点有关。基本完成试题规定的任务。第二 保证15分第五档24-25 1) 覆盖所有内容要点 2）句式灵活，能合理使用复合句，非谓语 动词，倒装句，省略句等语法结构 3）衔接合理，过度自然，句子流畅，层次 分明，词汇丰富地道，语气自然得体。 完全达到预期的写作目的。允许有个别 语法结构或词汇方面的小错误（因尽力 使用复杂结构，高级词汇所致）21-23 要求同上,允许有2-4个不影响理解的小错误第三 突破20分抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法2014年高考海南卷英语书面表达题 一家英语报社向学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”, 请根 据

3、下列要点和你的畅想，完成短文。 1 家庭 2 工作 3 业余生活 注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.开头语已为你写好 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.一、审题抄改连扩抓审书面表达文体，人称，时态1 文体：充满想象的记叙文2 人称：I ( we )3 时态：将来时二、抓要点抄改连扩抓审书面表达确定要点齐全，写出和要点相关的单词或短语要点一 家庭 与要点相关的词汇： marry , husband , wife , child, house 要点二 工作 与要点相关的词汇: teache

4、r, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives要点三 业余生活 与要点相关的词汇：play basketball/football/ computer gamestravel, watch movies/TV , read, dance, sing三、扩展成句抄改连扩抓审书面表达把与要点相关的词汇扩展成句。为了保证句子正确，最好写简单句。要点一 家庭与要点相关的词汇： marry , husband , wife , child, house Ill get married to a beautiful

5、girl. Ill have a handsome husband. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. 要点二 工作 与要点相关的词汇： teacher, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. . 要点三 业余生活 与要点相关的词汇

6、： play basketball/football/ computer games travel, watch movies/TV ,read, dance. sing I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time. Ill go travelling with my family.四、连句成文抄改连扩抓审书面表达适当使用连接词把写出的句子连成篇章 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.Ill get ma

7、rried to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in abig house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach Englishin a high school. The students love me verymuch. I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time.五、查错改错1.注意时态、语态等是否正确2.是否有破句（缺成分）3.词数是否符合要求

8、4.是否需要合适的开头与结尾抄改连扩抓审书面表达I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. I like playing basketball. Il

9、l play basketball with my friends in my spare time.In ten years, Ill be 28 years old.who is very gentle and loves me very much.with a swimming pool.Ill be a teacher teaching English in a high school.My English is so excellent that I am popular with the students.In a word, my life in the future will

10、be colorful.，and六、誊写修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面一定要工整!抄改连扩抓审书面表达美文欣赏：2014年高考书面表达23分Practice2013年高考辽宁卷一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：1、它是中国传统节日之一；2、家人团聚；3、赏月、吃月饼、 4、还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；3.开头语已您写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇： 中秋节: theMid-AutumnFestival 农历:lunarcalendar 赏月:enjoythefu

11、llmoon 月饼:mooncake 一、审题抄改连扩抓审书面表达 1 说明文，介绍中秋节 2 人称： it, we 3 时态： 现在时二、抓要点抄改连扩抓审书面表达中国传统节日 与要点相关的词汇： traditional, festival, China2 回家和家人团聚 与要点相关的词汇：come home, get together, family3 吃月饼，赏月与要点相关的词汇：eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon4,旅游，访友 travel, visit friends and relatives 三、扩展成句抄改连扩抓审书面表达中国传统节日 与要点

12、相关的词汇： traditional, festival, China2 回家和家人团聚 与要点相关的词汇：go back home, get together, family3 吃月饼，赏月与要点相关的词汇：eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon4,旅游，访友 travel, visit friends and relatives The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China.We usually come home to get together with our f

13、amily.We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon.We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.四、连句成文抄改连扩抓审书面表达The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We usually Come back home to get together with our family. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.五、查错改错注意时态、语态等是否正确,词数是否符合要求,是否有破句（缺成分）等。抄改连扩抓审书面表达The Mid-Autumn Festival