新高考英语作文指津

1、. 新高考英语作文指津专题一读后续写选材特点1所需阅读的短文词数在350 以；2多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比拟强。评分参考阅卷时主要考虑以下容：1与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；2容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；3应用语法构造和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4上下文的连贯性。注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2应使用5 个以上(即至少6 个)短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线(单下划直线即可)标出你所使用的关键词语。写作步骤1精读文章，确定文章线索，如是以时间为

2、线索还是以空间为线索等，这有利于顺藤摸瓜。2仔细审题，明确续写要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等，做到心中有数。3回扣原文，想象续写容。快速回读短文，揣摩文章的思路，结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示，确定续写段落的容。4拟写草稿，修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子构造的多样性，语言的丰富性，上下文的衔接。5标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语，最后誊写文字时，务必做到字迹工整、清晰。方法技巧1在读懂原文的根底上，紧扣原文中心，以原文的结局为起点，写出故事情节的开展和变化。2对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想，翻开思路。多角度地想象出

3、几种情况或结局，并从中加以最优选择。3要注意前后照应，符合逻辑，防止自相矛盾。必须与上文严密联系，使上下文融为一体。4原文的主要角色，续文中都要安排戏，但不要引进影响事件结局的新角色。注意确保四个一致：1要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致。2要与原文的体裁、构造、写作手法保持一致。3要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致。4主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致。写作要求阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进展续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he w

4、alked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank，he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked，It looks like youve got a problem，Ar

5、thur said.Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.Is there something I can do to help？Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said，Thanks.If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble，you could help me get these suitcases into a ta*i.No trouble

6、at all.Id be glad to help.The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground，he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking，he heard the long loud noise of an alarmIt was from the bankThere had been a

7、robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other ，What happened？But everyone had a different ans

8、wer.Arthur，still carrying the suitcase，turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised. Why is she looking at me like that ？He thought.The suitcase ！She thinks Im the bank thief！Arthur looked around at t

9、he crowd of people.He became frightened，and without another thought，he started to run. 注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，Stop，stop！Paragraph 2：The ta*i stopped in front of

10、 the Police Station and Arthur【经典文】【文一】As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，Stop，stop！And also at the moment，Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robberSo Arthur didnt stop，but continued to run until he saw a ta*i.He stopped it，jumped in with the suit

11、case and said to the driver，Go to the police station，please.The man shouting behind is the bank thief ！The ta*i raced away like the wind.The ta*i stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously，the police had already learned about the robberyThey opened

12、the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside ，as Arthur had e*pected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase.Later，with the information，the police caught the robber.The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.(Words：153)【文二】As he was running，Arth

13、ur heard the young man shouting behind，Stop，stop！Thinking of the way the young man had behaved，he realized the young man might be the bank robberSo Arthur ran faster and stopped a ta*i.The moment he got into the ta*i，he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him to driv

14、e to the nearest police station.The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.The ta*i stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police

15、，he heard a voice outside，Help！Help！To the surprise of Arthur，it was the young man.He had followed Arthur in another ta*i.It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes.Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words：158)专题二概要写作写概要时，

16、读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进展合理转换，对文章的具体信息进展概括，再用适宜的语言表述出来。选材特点1所需阅读的短文词数在350 以；2所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。评分参考阅卷时主要考虑以下容：1对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；2应用语法构造和词汇的准确性；3上下文的连贯性；4对各要点表达的独立性情况。注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法构造和词汇，得分相应比拟高。相反，如果概要写作局部出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会

17、大大降低；所写容与所提供容无关不得分。写作步骤1仔细阅读原文，掌握文章的主旨大意。在阅读过程中，要注意搜寻要点，如议论文中的论点、论据，记叙文中的开展、高潮、结局等。2列出文章的要点和各段落的主题句。可以用下划线标记，也可做笔记，将要点逐一列出。3分析原文的容和构造，将容分项扼要表述，并注意在构造上的顺序。4写出初稿。根据列出的要点和对原文的理解，用自己的语言组织容，尝试写出概要。5修改、定稿。认真阅读初稿，对照原文，检查是否漏掉重要容。检查并确定拼写、语法、标点正确无误。检查是否符合规定的词数要求。方法技巧在掌握一定的解题步骤后，为了顺利完成概要写作，学生在写作时还需要注意以下方法技巧。1要

18、点齐全。概要写作主要考察学生概括文章主旨大意和准确获取关键信息的能力，关键信息获取不准确往往导致所写概要要点不齐全。要点全面是评分的重要方面，因此学生要训练自己的语篇能力和阅读能力，既把握文本的整体和局部又把握它们之间的逻辑关系。2精练简洁。精练指的是概括的容要高度浓缩。学生可以利用概括的方法对文本容进展提炼，用删略的方法去换不重要或者不必要的细节。简洁指的是所使用的语言简练。学生可以用抽象的、概括性的语言代替具体形象的语言。3灵活转换。语言转换就是用不同的词或句式来表达与原有表达容一样的意义，且重新表达后能做到简单易懂。灵活转换包括语言换说和句子重构。语言换说可以通过同义、近义和反义变换来替

19、换需要被替换的词汇；句子重构可以改变原有句子中个别词和词组在句子中充当的语法成分或变换句式来实现。注意确保四个一定：1一定要使用第三人称。2一定不可参加自己的观点。3一定不可对原文容加以评论。4一定不要引入与原文容无关的信息。写作要求阅读下面短文，根据其容写一篇60 词左右的容概要。Getting rid of dirt，in the opinion of most people，is a good thing.However，there is nothing fi*ed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century，people thou

20、ght that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease，as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538，the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the King of

21、 England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry ，King of France，was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath，the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief

22、 in the merit (好处) of dirt was longlived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speaking，cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet，it seems that standards of cleanliness

23、 have moved beyond science since World War .Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea：Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer，surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt，however，gone too farAttitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many firsttime parents nervously try to warn their ch

24、ildren off touching dirt，which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary，Mary Ruebush，an American immunologist (免疫学家)，encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.【经典文】People have mi*ed opinions ab

25、out dirt on our skin.(要点1)For a long time in history，people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.(要点2)However，people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.(要

26、点3) Yet，some scientists believe that e*posure to some dirt may help our immune system.(要点4)【文点拨】(一)要点分析1文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However，there is nothing fi*ed about attitudes to dirt.换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards dirt.再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes tow

27、ards dirt on the skin. 文中的要点1People have mi*ed opinions towards dirt on our skin.概括非常精练。2第二段主要谈到了在16 世纪，人们认为dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease尤以英、法两国的贵族为代表。结合第三段第一句Though the belief in the merit(好处) of dirt was longlived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since t

28、he 18 century.可知，直到18 世纪之前，人们都认为dirt是很友好的，有助于预防疾病。文中的要点2For a long time in history，people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.很好地总结了这些要点。3 第三段用Though 引出人们对dirt 观点的转变.since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking，cleaning away dirt is good to health.再结合本段最

29、后一局部Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea. 可得出要点3However ，people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.4文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt 的态度还是有所不同，On the contrary引出专家的观点，一位免疫学家认为dirt 有助于增强免疫系统。这一观点得到了一些支持。文中的

30、要点4Yet，some scientists believe that e*posure to some dirt may help our immune system.表达很恰切。(二)要点连接文章概要，在写完了要点之后，下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的连接词进展连接，使上下句之间具有连贯性。本篇文章整篇构造是总分构造，要点2 和要点3 在观点上截然相反，因此，两者之间需要表示转折的连接词，文用了However恰到好处。要点3 和要点4 在观点上又存在不同，因此，文用了连接词Yet。专题三应用文写作类型1| 书信/电子英文书信通常由以下五个局部组成：1信头(Heading)。包括写信人地

31、址和写信日期，通常写在信笺的右上角。在比拟熟识的朋友之间的通信，写信人的地址常可省略。2称呼(Salutation)。指写信人对收信人的称呼，如Dear *iaojun，写在日期下一两行，顶格写，称呼后面可用逗号，也可用冒号，一般用Dear.或My dear. 开头。3正文(Body)。这是书信的主体局部，即写信人要表达的容。正文一般在称呼下方隔两行处开场写，正文的首行左边一般留约5 个字母宽的空白。4完毕语(plimentary Close)。它是书信结尾的恭维话，相当于中文书信最后的祝好、致礼之类的话语。如Best wishes等。5签名(Signature)。签名通常签在完毕语下方的中间

32、偏右的位置，在签名的上方可根据写信人和收信人的关系写Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely(用于长辈或朋友之间)，或Respectfully yours/Yours respectfully(用于对长辈或上级)，注意开头字母要大写，末尾要用逗号。假设你叫华，你的一位朋友John 刚从国外归来，邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会，但你不能参加。请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子：1表达想参加的意愿；2忙于准备高考；3由于感冒，身体不适；4表示歉意并另约时间。注意：1词数80 左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3参考词汇：高考the Col

33、lege Entrance E*amination习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear John，I am e*tremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday.It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I look forward to go to your party and share your e*periences abroad. To my regret，I will absent from your party bec

34、ause of the College EntranceE*amination is just around the corner，and I am now really busy prepare for it.Whats worse，I caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.Anyway，we have many more chances to get1.防止搭配错误把for 改为of 2.杜绝语法错误go 改为goingshare 改为sharing添加be 动词删除介词of把prepare 改为preparing改为现在完

35、成时havecaught改为一般将来时will have 3.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：Shall wetogether.(让我们把时间定在考试之后行吗？)I am truly sorry and hope you will accept my apology.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Huamake it after the e*am？自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear John，I am e*tremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sund

36、ay. It is very kind of you to invite me to yourhouse and I look forward togoing to your party and sharing your e*periences abroad.to my regret，I will be absentfrom your party because the College Entrance E*am ination is just around the corner，and I am now really busy preparing for it.，I have caught

37、a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.Anyway，we will have many more chances to get together.Shall we make it after the e*am I am truly sorry and hope you will accept myapology.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua1.高级词汇在处参加适当过渡词Whats worse2.高级句型把改为with 复合构造：with theCollege Entrance E*

38、amination just around the corner把改为介词关系代词引导的定语从句：for which I am now really busy preparing3.一定的修辞意识在下面标号后写出相应的修饰词reallyhappyMuchsincere类型2| 建议信1写作目的：建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌领先。2写作方法(1)首段：a简介自己，不要啰嗦；b说明目的，注意语气。(2)主体：a提出具体建议；b首先肯定优点，再写需改良容，否则变成投诉信；c经常进展交流，注意对方感受，时时提升你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为容与议论文相似。(3)尾段

39、：总结建议，注意礼貌，盼望回复。假设你叫华，你的英国朋友Andrew 下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复：1建议骑自行车上学；2自行车是学生常用的交通工具；3骑自行车的一些好处；4骑自行车需注意的问题。注意：词数80 左右。习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Andrew，As for the question about the transportation to andfrom school，Id like to remend your riding bicycle.Here are some reasons.(骑自行

40、车上、下学在学生中是很常见的。)As is wellknown，buying or repairing a bicycle doesnt cost a lot.And parking a bicycle is easy in our school.Bicycleriding is also a way to do e*ercises and protect the environment.What you should do careful is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after youre off

41、 it.By this way，youll feel it simple and rela* to ride a bicycle while youre here.Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.防止词汇搭配错误处careful 改为carefully处By 改为In 2.杜绝语法错误处添加冠词a处e*ercises 改为e*ercise处rela* 改为rela*ing3.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：Riding a bike toand from school is very mon among t

42、he students.自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear Andrew，As for the question about the transportation to and from school，Id like to remend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons. Firstly，riding a bike to and from school is very mon among the students，for buying or repairing a bicycle doesnt cost a lot.Ne*t，parking a

43、 bicycle is easy and (便利的)inour school.(事实上)，bicycleriding is also a (实用的)way to do e*ercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after youre off it.In this way，youll feel it simple and rela*ing to ride a bicycle while

44、 youre here.Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.高级词汇convenientActually/As a matter of fact practical2.高级句型用it is mon practice to do. 改写句加黑局部：it ismonpractice for the students to ride a bike to and from school类型3| 申请信1申请信的写作要求(1)应符合英语信件的格式，表达方式符合英语习惯；(2)申请人的语气要自信而不傲慢，礼貌而不卑微，

45、即不卑不亢，恰如其分； (3)应写得简明流畅，言简意赅。2申请信写法：开头：说明写信目的(申请原因)，信息来源，对所申请工作或学校的认识，自己的打算。主体：着重介绍自己的背景(教育情况，工作经历，兴趣爱好，特长等)。求职信先介绍工作经历，要突出个人能力及工作业绩；求学信要重点介绍自己受教育程度。总之，要努力使自己的介绍引起对方的兴趣。结尾：表达自己的愿望，如希望得到面试时机等，语气要自信而坚决。假设你是我市一名高三学生华，你打算报考一所外语学院。你在网上看到外国语学院的招生信息(admission information)，并对此非常感兴趣。根据招生要求，你需要用英语撰写一份个人申请报告，容应

46、包括：1记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果；2说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等。词数：80 左右。习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Sir or Madam，I read about the admission information while I am surfing the net the other day.Im interested in it.For one thing，I can get on well with all my classmates.For another，I do well in my most subjects，especially in English.I li

47、ke reading English poems and enjoying English movies.Speeches，deliver by famous people are also my favorite.I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city was honored the Best Speaker for my performances. English is so important to me that I intend to learnEnglish (如果我被您的大学

48、录取)Iwant to have a job relate to languages in the future.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours，Li Hua1.杜绝语法错误处am 改为was处enjoying 改为enjoy处deliver 改为delivered处添加连词and处relate 改为related2.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：if I am admitted into your university3.躲避中式英语处我的大局部学科应准确表达成：most of my subjects自我提升向极优作文迈进De

49、ar Sir or Madam，I read about the admission information while I was surfing the net the other day.Im interested in it.For one thing，I can get on well with all my classmates.For another，I do well in most of my subjects，especially in English.I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies.Speeche

50、s, deliveredby famous people are also my favorite.，Ionce won the first prize in an English speech contest1.高级词汇在处加过渡词Whats moremajor in2.高级句型把改为省略句：whilesurfing the net the other day3.强烈的修辞意识根据语境写出相应的修held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my performances.English is so important to me

51、 that I intend to (主修)English if I am admitted into your university.I want to have a job related to languages in the future. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours，Li Hua饰语really/quitee*cellent/outstanding类型4| 邀请信1邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或知名人士、专家等参加*项活动时所发的邀约性书信。在国际交往以及日常的各种社交活动中，这类书信使用广泛。2一般邀请信具有简短、热情

52、的特点。格式一般为：(1)说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图；(2)具体交代情景：包括受邀请的人，邀请朋友干什么、地点以及具体的时间等容。并且强调为什么邀请收信人而不是别的朋友；(3)表示期待朋友的回复。假定你是华，你所在的学校将在暑假期间举办澳大利亚文化展览。请你根据以下要点给澳大利亚朋友Peterson 写一封信，请他届时前来给你们做一次讲座。目的：帮助师生了解澳洲历史与文化容：简要介绍澳大利亚的风土人情日期：8 月第一周任意一天的下午时间：3：005：00，约两个小时注意：可适当增加细节，以使构造完整，词数80 左右。习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Peterson，Our school

53、is planning to hold an Australia culture e*hibition in summer vacation.Im writing to invite you to e and give a talk on the people and custom on the continent of Australia. It will help our teachers and students learn more about your history and cultural.You may choose any day of the first week in A

54、ugust.You can give usthe talk that afternoon，that will start from 3: 00 pm.and finish at about 5：00 pm.(请让我尽可能早的知道，以便于我及时作出安排)I am looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the talk.Yours，Li Hua1.防止搭配错误处Australia 改为Australian处custom 改为customs处cultural 改为culture2.杜绝语法错误处添加冠词the处that 改为which 3.要点一定不要

55、遗漏补上处要点：Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements in time.自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear Peterson，Our school is planning to hold an Australian culture show this summer vacation.Im writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the people and customs on the continent of Australia.We w

56、ould like to get our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture.You may choose any day of the first week in August and give us the talk that afternoon，which will start from 3：00 pm.and finish at about5：00 pm.Im looking forward to your reply and were sure your talk will be a s

57、uccess.Yours，Li Hua1.高级词汇用schedule 的相关短语改写处的黑体局部：is scheduled to2.高级句型用It is a good chance for sb.todo sth.改写句：It is a goodchance for our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture.处改为现在分词短语作后置定语：starting from 3：00 pm.and ending at about 5：00 pm.类型5| 求助信1求助信要简明扼要，语气委婉、真诚，不强人所

58、难，并尽量提供足够的信息，能使收信人愿意帮助你。2写作指导(1)清晰述请求的容或所要获取的信息；(2)提出的问题数量不宜过多，要便于答复；(3)解释收信人回信的理由并表示感。假设你是*中学的高一学生明，最近与母亲关系紧，难以相处。请根据下表容用英语给*英文杂志Helper栏目的编辑Mr.Smith 写一封80 词左右的求助信，请他帮你解决问题。你的情况你母亲的情况你的问题1.学习成绩好；2.爱母亲；3.有点害怕母亲。1.大学教授，工作勤奋，很少有时间和你说话；2.对你严格要求，易发脾气。1.与母亲很少交流；2.不知如何沟通。习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Mr.Smith，I am writ

59、ing to tell you my problem troubled me for a long time.It is relationship between my mother and me.My mother is a university professor she works very hard.She is strict in me but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies，but I still

60、feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easy.I dont know how to municate with her.1.防止词汇搭配错误处in 改为with2.杜绝语法错误处troubled 应改成troubling处应添加冠词the处应添加连词and处easy 改为easily处e*change 改为e*changed3.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：Id appreciateMaybe its because we have seldom sat down and e*change our feelings a