英语 分词与写作(example 5)

1、Participles in writingTeaching Aims 1. Participles as attribute 2. Participles as adverbial 3. Participles as object complement. 4. Absolute construction( -ing/-ed) 5. The use of participles in writing.Read the following sentences and change them into simple sentences with participles: 1. Please tel

2、l the children who are playing outside not to make so much noise. Please tell the children playing outside not to make so much noise. 3. Setting off firecrackers (鞭炮鞭炮) is a practice which was handed down from the remote past Setting off firecrackers (鞭炮鞭炮) is a practice handed down from the remote

3、past分词作时间状语：分词作时间状语： 6.When he saw the house on fire, he dialed 999 Seeing the house on fire, he dialed 999. 7.When metals are heated, they expand. Heated, metals expand. 分词做原因状语分词做原因状语 8.Because I was sick, I stayed at home. Being sick, I stayed at home. 9.The boy cried hard because he was lost in

4、the forest. Lost in the forest , the boy cried hard. 分词作条件状语分词作条件状语10.If you turn to the right, you will find a path leading to his cottage. Turning to the right, you will find a path leading to his cottage. 11.If the trees had been given more attention, they could have grown better. Given more atte

5、ntion, the trees could have grown better. 12.It rained heavily and caused severe flooding in that country. It rained heavily, causing severe flooding in that country. 分词作结果状语分词作结果状语13.The teacher followed the students and came into the classroom. Following the students, the teacher came into the cla

6、ssroom .14. The teacher came into the classroom and the students followed her. The teacher came into the classroom, followed by the studen ts. 分词做伴随状语分词做伴随状语17.The farmer had his horse running.18.Her questions set me thinking.19. I found him locked in the room. 分词作宾语补足语：分词作宾语补足语：常见的可以带分词作宾语补足语的动有：常见

7、的可以带分词作宾语补足语的动有： catch（碰上）（碰上）discover，feel， find, get ,have, hear , help, keep ,leave, listen to，look at ,notice, observe, see, set, start（使得，引起）（使得，引起）, watch 独立主格结构（独立主格结构（ing/ed) 19. The three Bront sisters adopted this practice, and Mary Ann Evans did the same and wrote under the name of George

8、 Eliot. The three Bront sisters adopting this practice, Mary Ann Evans did the same and wrote under the name of George Eliot. 20. When the test was finished, we began our holiday. The test finished, we began our holiday. With+ sb + doing/ done的结构：的结构： 21.With National Day (October 1) approaching, ma

9、ny people have become a little worried about their wallets. 22. China is the worlds largest cigarette consumer, with education about the dangers of tobacco not widely known 小试牛刀小试牛刀 1.在这个世界上能为别人减轻负担的人都在这个世界上能为别人减轻负担的人都是有用的。（狄更斯）是有用的。（狄更斯） 2.中国是一条沉睡的巨龙。让他睡吧！如中国是一条沉睡的巨龙。让他睡吧！如果他醒来，他会让全世界震撼。（拿破仑）果他醒来，他

10、会让全世界震撼。（拿破仑）No man lightening the burden of someone else is useless in this worldChina is a sleeping dragon. Let him sleep! If he wakes, he will shake the world. 小试牛刀小试牛刀 3.世界上大部分的麻烦都是要想成为伟大世界上大部分的麻烦都是要想成为伟大人物的人搞出来的。（艾略特）人物的人搞出来的。（艾略特） 4.乐观主义者就是被狮子逼上了树乐观主义者就是被狮子逼上了树(get treed)但仍能欣赏风景的人。（温切尔）但仍能欣赏风景

11、的人。（温切尔） Most of the trouble in the world is caused by people wanting to be important. An optimist is a person getting treed by a lion but enjoying the scenery. 小试牛刀小试牛刀 5.夏日黄昏之际，成群的母牛从小山上下夏日黄昏之际，成群的母牛从小山上下来，哞哞地叫着（来，哞哞地叫着（low)，脖子上的小铃，脖子上的小铃铛儿叮叮当当的响着铛儿叮叮当当的响着(tinkle)奔古城而来奔古城而来 At this time of summer

12、evening, the cows are trooping（成群而行）（成群而行）down from the hills to the old town, _. lowing and with their bells tinkling.小试牛刀小试牛刀 6.昨日清晨，他打着雨伞沿着泥泞的小巷，昨日清晨，他打着雨伞沿着泥泞的小巷，艰难地向校园走去，心里惦记要背诵的艰难地向校园走去，心里惦记要背诵的课文。课文。 Yesterday morning, he made his way _，along the muddy alleyway to his school _. with an umbrel

13、la held in his hand thinking of the passage to recite( holding an umbrella)小试牛刀小试牛刀 7.这是一个小而宜人的公园，到处被花和这是一个小而宜人的公园，到处被花和树覆盖着树覆盖着 ，中间有一个小湖。，中间有一个小湖。 This is a small nice park with trees and flowers （dotted ）everywhere and with a little lake lying in the center. This is a small nice park covered with

14、trees and flowers everywhere and with a little lake lying in the center.小试牛刀小试牛刀 8.当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照当我们沿着道路行走的时候，太阳灿烂地照耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。耀着，微风轻轻地吹着。 While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. = We were walking along the road, with the sun shining

15、 brightly and the breeze blowing gently We walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently.小试牛刀小试牛刀 我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着和听我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着和听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲。见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲。 We saw the beautiful flowers smiling at us and heard the birds singing their sweet songs in the tr

16、ees. 查漏补缺查漏补缺 Reading the following sentences and correct the mistakes if any. 1. There are large quantities of birds fly to the south in winter. 改法一：改法一：There are large quantities of birds flying to the south in winter. 改法二：改法二： Large quantities of birds fly to the south in winter. 查漏补缺查漏补缺 2.The n

17、umber of the chickens which affected by the bird flu has reached 100,000. 改法一：改法一：The number of the chickens which were affected by the bird flu has reached 100,000. 改法二：改法二：The number of the chickens affected by the bird flu has reached 100,000.查漏补缺查漏补缺 3. We enjoy seeing the films having been dire

18、cted by Charlie Chaplin. 改为：改为： We enjoy seeing the films directed by Charlie Chaplin. 4. Most of the people being invited to the party were famous scientists. 改为：改为：Most of the people invited to the party were famous scientists. 瞬间动词不用瞬间动词不用ing进行时的被动语态作定语进行时的被动语态作定语查漏补缺查漏补缺 5. Soon they saw the man

19、 disappearing in the crowd. 改为：改为：Soon they saw the man disappear in the crowd. 瞬间动词作宾补不用瞬间动词作宾补不用ing形式。形式。 6. Being late, so he was punished by his teacher. Being late, he was punished by his teacher. 查漏补缺查漏补缺 7. His brother being a PLA man is 19 years old. 改法一：改法一： Being a PLA man, his brother is

20、19 years old. 改法二：改法二：His brother who is a PLA is 19 years old. 8. Looking around, there was no one in sight. 改为：改为：Looking around, I found no one in sight. 查漏补缺查漏补缺 9. The roof of our house was damaged by a fallen tree in the great storm last night. 改为：改为：The roof of our house was damaged by a fall

21、ing tree in the great storm last night. The ground is covered with fallen leaves. The falling leaves are dancing in the air. 查漏补缺查漏补缺 10. With the price of this TV set has reduced, its sales are larger than last years. 改法一：改法一： With the price of this TV set reduced, its sales are larger than last ye

22、ars. 改法二：改法二： As the price of this TV set has reduced, its sales are larger than last years 五句话作文：（尽量使用分词）五句话作文：（尽量使用分词） 一辆载着六百乘客的火车从格尔木（一辆载着六百乘客的火车从格尔木（Golmud）出）出发，在星期天到达了拉萨火车站，这标志着划时代发，在星期天到达了拉萨火车站，这标志着划时代的（的（landmark railway)火车的开通。这辆名为火车的开通。这辆名为“青青藏一号藏一号”(Qing 1)的火车，从格尔木出发，穿越了的火车，从格尔木出发，穿越了号称号称(dub)世界屋脊的青藏高原世界屋脊的青藏高原(the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau )，到达了西藏的省会拉萨。在火车离开格，到达了西藏的省会拉萨。在火车离开格尔木前，国家主席胡锦涛强调了保护青藏高原环境尔木前，国家主席胡锦涛强调了保护青藏高原环境的重要性。许多当地的农民等在铁路边向奔驰而过的重要性。许多当地的农民等在铁路边向奔驰而过的火车招手致意。入藏的火车将运载的火车招手致意。入藏的火车将运载75%的货物入的货物入藏，降低了交通成本和推动藏，降低了交通成本和推动(boos