英语高考作文如何得满分

1、高考英语作文如何得满分 高考考纲要求： 要求考生根据题示进行书面表达。考生应能： （1）准确使用语法和词汇； （2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯的表达自己的意思。 从考纲中可以看出，“清楚、连贯”是我们写作文的目标，而不需要注意文采、修辞之类的问题。这是与语文作文最大的区别。一、 考试要求 山东卷高考英语写作的三个特征： 1 1. .创设使用英语写作的需要；创设使用英语写作的需要； 2 2. .话题与学生认知水平相符；话题与学生认知水平相符； 3 3. .有一定的开放性。有一定的开放性。高考作文的核心任务：在在15 15秒内取悦阅卷秒内取悦阅卷老师老师高考英语作文最重点：肃清肃清愚蠢语言错

2、误愚蠢语言错误 优秀高考作文应具备的六个基本特征：优秀高考作文应具备的六个基本特征： 1 1、层次不乱、层次不乱 2 2、句式多变、句式多变 3 3、亮点若干、亮点若干 4 4、巧妙串联、巧妙串联 5 5、蠢错不犯、蠢错不犯 6 6、整洁卷面、整洁卷面 通过以上例子，可以大体看出高考中对于英语作文的考查以书信为主，包括提建议、表欢迎、介绍情况以及应聘等等；记叙文则主要以记录某个辩论的形式，说明正反双方的意见并表达自己的看法；同时，还可能出现演讲稿、看图作文的考查形式。 弄清要考什么，就可以对症下药，练习这种模式，在高考中以不变应万变即可。一、审题 拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑眼嘴并用，开始审题

3、。看题目的要求是什么，要点是什么，特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李华，还是随便一个名字？ 要议论文还是记叙文？对分几段写有无要求？等等。诸如此类的硬性要求信息，都最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错，也许你一开始会记得，可随着时间的流逝，你会不会因紧张而遗忘这些信息呢？还是小心为妙。边看最好边张嘴默读，这样就不会遗漏或忽略任何一个字了。三、写作步骤二、草稿 有的同学怕出错，全文都打草稿再誊写，我姑且认为不太可取，毕竟考场时间宝贵，即使我有四十分钟时间写作文也不敢贸然这么做，更何况考场时我们留给作文的时间往往一再被压缩。有的同学不打草稿，我认为更不太可取。一来容易出错，二来边写边想思维不连贯，即使思维连贯也无

4、法审词酌句，展现自己最好的一面，容易后悔。 草稿怎么打？一打结构，二打关键词，三打句式。 1.结构 ：就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？哪段转哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。 2.关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。譬如一省作文题： 假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。你的个人情况：英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人，承诺提供最佳服务。 关键词就是学历、爱好、擅长、乐于、承诺，和你对这篇作文初步构思时想到的一些词。先把这些词（指词的英文表达）写在纸

5、上。有一些词的拼写，譬如学历，可能你本身就记得不是特别清楚，这时一定要在开始写作文前先把它写下来，以免一会因干扰而遗忘。 然后，别着急，这些词不一定就是你作文中要用的词啊。可能看到聪明这个关键词时，你最初写下的往往是clever，再仔细想想，你是不是又想到了smart, diligent好多词，挑个漂亮和合适的用吧。再比如转折，你写了but，这会再想想，是不是又有一堆表示转折的词在你脑里打转呢？挑一个吧，千万别用but。 3.句式：词写下来了，其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述

6、句改成问句？能不能用上一个双重否定句？能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句？能不能用一个插入语？等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。在草稿纸上同样标注。三、正式写 这样的草稿打完后，就要快快写了。注意，英语作文的卷面简直太重要了，一定要把字写整齐，写大。没有把握的词和句子不用，宁可忍痛割爱也不冒犯错的风险。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。 四、检查 注意，最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心，可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。单词拼写的，大小写的，等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象，一定要坚决誓死消灭。即使时间再紧，请务必留下12分钟检查作文的时间，消除隐性错误，避免自

7、杀行为。 需要说明的是，英语的开头和结尾是最关键的，尤其是开头。基本上，不跑题，遵守题目要求，一个漂亮的开头，一个还过得去的结尾，2-3个高级词汇，1-2个漂亮的句子，加上整齐的字迹，作文的分就不会低了哦。 例：例： 根据下面的文字提示，用英语写一篇120-150词的短文，记述2011年3月16日你班组织的“规划人生，立志成才”的活动情况。 要点提示： 1、班主任以微软创始人Bill Gates为例说明了规划人生的意义，教导大家要善于规划人生。 2、班长以篮球明星为例说明了志向和毅力对个人成才的意义，激励大家要立志成才。 3、同学们进行自由交流，畅谈自己的人生规划和近期打算。 4、你自己的感受

8、。 参考词汇：举例说明illustrate ; 毅力perseveranceComposition 1. by 杜祥慧 得分：20 （此类文章可以加题目） Our class held a series of activites （1.低级错误，应为activities ; 2.“一系列活动”，但根据题设，仅是一次discussion）about “Planning for your future, making up your mind to succeed ”(“规划人生，立志成才”的直译，可以说此句令人摸不着头脑，make up ones mind 意为decide，不可理解为“下定决心

9、”） the other day. Firstly, our teacher introduced（老师并不是面对面将BG介绍给你了，此词不当，可换为参考词汇中的illustrate） Bill Gates ，who is the CEO of Microsoft to us（想到使用定语从句，较好）. We were all deeply impressed by his experiences and success. Our teacher teached （第二次低级错误，taught）us that we should plan for our future properly. Se

10、condly, the monitor gave up（放弃？此处亦为低级错误） a speech about success. He told the story of Yao Mings growing up（成长？直接换成success即可）. It indicated（该词使用较好） that ambition and perseverance were very importance（再次低级错误） for（to） individuals success. （改为强调句更好）So our monitor called on us to make up our mind to succ

11、ess. （又一句颇令人纠结的中文式翻译，杜祥慧同学应注意这种问题） Thirdly, students talked freely. We talked about our life planning and recent plan （略显重复）in the warm atmosphere（在热烈的气氛中？不是太好）. As a matter of fact（含有转折的意思，此处不太好）, the ambition of the classmates are not（主谓不一致，低级错误） the same, but they all make sense for our life（“对人生

12、有意义”的中文式翻译，make sense的意思指“讲的通，有意义”，并不指这种“有意义”；且无make sense for 这种用法）. Through（通过？这样说不恰当） this activity, I realized the meaning of planning for my future. In the meantime , I made up my mind to succeed(第三次出现）. 总评： 不客气地说，这篇文章写得很失败。出现了几类很具代表性的突出问题： 1、较大量的低级错误。如单词拼写、主谓一致、过去式变化等，这几项足以使阅卷老师断定你的水平不怎么样。 2、对

13、词义理解偏差。突出表现为文章中对make up one s mind 、make sense的想当然生搬硬套式用法，说明该同学对于部分词汇只 是记住了其汉语意思，并没有真正理解其中 含义。不要忘记，词典中英语单词对应的汉 语意思本身也可能具有多种含义。 3、汉语式英语问题较严重。文章中多次出现将一句汉语一词对一词的翻译，并不顾及英语中的表达方式，且包含对词汇生搬硬套式的使用。作为好的英语作文，这一点时要尽量杜绝的。 4、无亮点。虽全文看起来结构较清晰，内容也基本完整，但通篇没有使老师眼前一亮的地方。句式变化少，高级词汇少，复杂句几乎没有。 针对其问题，提高方法可以参考以下几点： 1、打牢基础。

14、单词拼写、过去式变化牢牢掌握，必须保证无此类错误。对于词义的理解，建议使用正规词典，牛津等带有英文解释的最好。 2、多读多写多看，培养语感。这是解决：“中文式英语”问题的根本途径。不要局限于课本中可以说是写得比较拙劣的文章，可自主阅读英文报纸（如老师印发的参考消息上的文章、China Daily等）、英文书籍（如书虫系列），或观看英文电影（现在从网上下的英文电影大多是双语字幕，不要光看中文字幕，也应注意外国人是怎样表达意思的。即使看不懂，多受熏陶，也有助于提升语感）。平时做的题中，有部分阅读理解， 完形填空写得也很好，晨读时不要总是背单词、语法，读背这类文章及作文范文均是不错办法。 3，活学活

15、用，提高意识。对于平时学习的句型、高级词汇，不要一到考场上就什么都不记得了，还是用那些初中就会的词，这样毫无亮点。在平时写作文时，写每一句话都要想想可不可以用一些高级的句式、可不可以用非谓语动词等等，一定要建立这种意识，才会在写作中自然而然地创造亮点。 Composition 2. by 盛名扬 得分：28 Life, Goal, and Success （言简意赅，点明主题） On March 16, 2011, a discussion whose topic was “ Life, Goal & Success ”（定语从句）was held in our class.（直入主题

16、） First, our head teacher used the success of Bill Gates to illustrate（此处对于illustrate一词用法不明，导致使用不当）. Bill Gates, as we all know, is the founder of Microsoft Corp. and has enjoyed （生动形象）great success and wealth. Having a good plan for his life（非谓语动词）, he dropped out from Harvard University and began

17、his own career. For us students, we should also have a good plan for our future.（加入了对BG事迹的具体说明，是文章充实） Our monitor then took Yao Ming, the famous basketball player, for example. He is very strong-willed and hand working, which led to his success in NBA. （定语从句） Our monitor tried to tell us its ambitio

18、n and perseverance that really matter on ones way to success.（强调句，且使用on ones way 显得生动形象） At the end of the discussion, students talked to each other about their goals and plans for life. We were all greatly inspired. Personally speaking（学会使用此类连接词）, I think the discussion was very meaningful and can

19、direct our future life. In a short time, well graduate from high school. We should make full preparation from now on and set our own goals for life.（联系生活） Where there is a will, there is a way. （引用名言）The bright future is waiting for us.（拟人） 总评： 本文写得较为成功。首先保证了杜绝低级错误；在此基础上，使用了强调句、定语从句、非谓语动词等，并引用了名人名言，

20、做到了亮点若干；结构完整严谨，思路清晰，在题目要求的基础上，又加入了部分其他描写，措辞上有较为生动形象之处。整体较为流畅自然，少汉语式英语现象。 但同时，文中仍有少量语法错误，且词量较大，有些冗余；在句式的变化、高级词汇的使用上仍有较大提升空间。，考试中英语作文： 1、基础：单词拼写、卷面、文章格式。 2、提高：复杂句、非谓语动词、倒装句、强调句、高级词汇、名人名言；清晰地结构，灵活的连词。 3、最佳：深刻的思想，独到的见解，贴切的描写（很难做到，前两点足矣，但第三点为语文作文所必须）。 临场临场技巧一：认真审题，弄清任务技巧一：认真审题，弄清任务 临场技巧二：开放部分，大胆发挥临场技巧二：开

21、放部分，大胆发挥 临场技巧三：连句成篇，避免涂改临场技巧三：连句成篇，避免涂改 临场技巧四：就地取材，寻找亮点临场技巧四：就地取材，寻找亮点四、写作技巧一、开头句型1.As far as is concerned, 2. It goes without saying that 3. It can be said with certainty that 4. As the proverb goes. 5. Its likely that . 6. Im very glad to receive your letter. 7. I hate to say it that I cant make i

22、t to . 8. What a inspiring picture it is! 句型：二、衔接句型1.As is often the case, 2. But the problem is not so simple. 3. But it is a pity that . 4. In spite of the fact that., they. 5. However, . 6. In addition, . 7. Similarly, . 8. As has been mentioned above, 9. On the contrary,. 10. On the other hand,

23、. 三、举例句型1.Lets take as an example. 2. Here is one more example. 3. This offers a typical example of . 4. Just think of. 四、结尾句型1.I will conclude by saying 2. Therefore, we believe that 3. With everything taken into consideration, we4. It may be safely said that. 5. In short, . 6. To sum up, 7. In my

24、opinion,. 8. All in all, . 9. Briefly, . 五、常用谚语 Speech is silver, silence is gold. Easier said than done. Every man has his weak side. Honesty is the best policy. Every coin has two sides. One mans meat is another mans poison. Love me, love my dog. Seeing is believing. Well began is half done. When

25、in Rome, do as Romans do. Where there is a will, there is a way. No pains, no gains. Strike while the iron is hot. There is no smoke without fire. Its never too late to mend. Knowledge is power. Practice makes perfect. All roads lead to Rome. Many hands make light work. More haste, less speed. 六、as

26、句型1.As is known to all, . 2. She is such a fool as to believe what he said. 3. As it was getting late, we had to quit. 4. Young as he was, he made great contributions to his motherland. 七、seem句型1. It seems that everyone was satisfied. 2. It seems to me that she is right. 3. There seems to be a heavy

27、 rain. 4. It seems as if nothing had happened to him. 八、would rather句型1. I would rather have taken his advice. 2. I would rather I had worked harder. 3. I would rather you did it yourself. 4. She would rather die than be married to that old man. 九、before句型1. It wasnt two years before he left the cou

28、ntry. 2. Let me tell you the rules before I forget. 3. I would shoot myself before I apologize to him. 4. It will be ten years before everything returns to normal. 5. The boy had run out before I could stop him. 十、强调句型1.It was how I said it that made him angry. 2. Was it how I said it that made him

29、angry? 3. What was it that made him angry? 4. Can you tell me what it was that made him angry? 十一、感叹句型1.What a tiring day! 2. How tiring a day! 3. How I want to see you in New York! 十二、not until 句型1.He didnt realize the truth until he came back.2. Not until he came back did he realize the truth.3. It was not until he came back that he realized the truth. 十三、since句型1. He has lived here since his father moved here.2. He moved here in 1988 and has lived here ever since. 3. It is ten years since I got married.4. It is ten years since I was married. 十四、if only句型1.If only Mr. Johnson w