(作文)GRE作文范例18

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13、乎没有实1现1真正的1进步。技术仓讣新确1实发生1 了 ，但人类的总体状1况毫无改观。战争、暴力1 ,以及贫穷1仍1然伴随1着我1们。技1术1无法1改善人1类1的生存状况。11上述1陈述中1的探讨所围绕的是这样三1个概念 的 含1义1，即 第1 一 句1中 的littlereblpogress， 第|二句中的theoverallconditionofhumaniy”， 以及第三句中的|gnorinthecoiiditi(0価hum;anit*1。毫无疑问战争、暴力1以及贫穷仍然伴随着我们1，并且1，11作內1人类，1由于技术与通信的进1步我们可能比以往任何1时候都更深切地意识到了11这些问题1。但1除非将1pr()