改变句子的开头---灵活的奥妙

1、How to Get Your Composition Advanced 改变句子的开头改变句子的开头-灵活的奥妙灵活的奥妙 多种句式多种句式-精彩总是在变化中精彩总是在变化中 分词和不定式分词和不定式-极富表现力的表达极富表现力的表达 过渡词过渡词-文章的润滑剂文章的润滑剂 习语习语-使你文采飞扬使你文采飞扬,与众不同与众不同 洋味十足洋味十足- 话措词话措词 不难的一招不难的一招-相同的意思用不同相同的意思用不同 的词语的词语A Students versionMany students feel it difficult to finish so much homework. Not o

2、nly do they have classes in school but also do their homework at home. I have heard that some of students stay up until midnight. How hard they are!In my opinion, there are some reasons causing it. On one hand, the teachers consider that the more exercise the students do, the better they will learn

3、. so the teachers ask the poor students to do a good many work. On the other hand, the parents also demand their children that they should do too much homework in order to get their lessons improved. Im not in favour of taking too much work . The teachers and parents should change their way to bring

4、 up their children. _a great deal of_/1. 改变句子的开头方式改变句子的开头方式.不要一味地用主语开头不要一味地用主语开头,适当使用状语提前适当使用状语提前1).We met at the school gate and went together early in the moring2). The young man could not help crying when he heard the news.3) We all Know that internet will help us a lot if we use it properly.Earl

5、y in the morning, we met in the school gate and went togetherHearing the news, the young man couldnt help cryingAs is known to us all/As we all know, internet will Help us a lot if we use it properly多种句式多种句式. 避免在整篇文章中只使用一两个句式避免在整篇文章中只使用一两个句式,可以灵活运用省略可以灵活运用省略句句,强调句强调句,倒装句倒装句,主从复句主从复句 with独立主格结构独立主格结构

6、1).My parents praised Ahfu warmly.It had saved my sister bravely.2).We had to stand there to catch other offenders3).Our school has changed a lot.4). He opened his eyes wide and looked at me curiously.5).When I saw the scene, I felt very frightened.6).We dont have enough time to have a rest for a si

7、ngle day.My parents praised Ahfu warmly,who had saved my sister bravely.What we had to do is to stand there to catch other offendersOur school has been /is no longer what it was /used to be.He looked at me curiously with his eyes wide open.At the scene, how frightened I felt!Not a single day do we h

8、ave enough time to have a rest.分词和不定式分词和不定式-极强的语言表现力极强的语言表现力nHe stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offenders.nWe had a short rest,Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories ;some played chess.nTom is a boy of six. He knows three languages.n4. The boss was

9、greatly satisfied with my answer and decided to employ me. He stopped us half an hour ago to make us catch the Having had a short rest,we began to play happily,singing and dancing.Some told stories, while others played chess.Being a boy of six, Tom knows three languages.As a boy of six ,TomAged six,

10、 TomGreatly satisfied with my answer, the boss decided to过渡词-文章的润滑剂记住积累一些常用的过渡词,拿来即用: then, besides, furthermore ,moreover,What was/is more What was/is worse,In addition(to this), so far as Im concerned,As well (as) , not onlybut also, on the contrary, after all,apart from that, in my opinion, there

11、fore, as a result, Needless to say(不用说), thereafter(后来) ,afterward,however, nevertheless ,sooner or later巧用习语-增加文采巧用一些介词短语巧用一些介词短语,名词短语名词短语,形容词短语形容词短语 使文采不同凡响使文采不同凡响1).Many houses are being built. 2).She hurried to catch the train.3).When I thought of the coming holiday, I just couldnt helping smili

12、ng . 4).We decided to stay to help the poor old lady5).When the man got on the bus ,he was tired and hungry.Many houses are under construction.She was in a hurry to catch the train.At the thought of the coming holiday, I just We made a decision to give help to the poor old ladyTired and hungry, the

13、man got on the bus.洋味十足-才是好文章I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. She shouted loudly , “Ive succeeded!”I was very eager to go home. I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.She shouted at the top of her voice, “I ve made it!”I coulnt wait to go home.不难的一招-相同的意思用不同的词语1)I like being left quiet while my sister likes being in an active situation.2)My father lost his work