人教版新目标英语七年级下册书面表达——分析解答与点评

1、人教版新目标英语七年级下册书面表达分析解答与点评1假如李华是你的一位朋友，她生活在一个小村子里，请根据下面要点提示具体介绍一下 你的这位朋友要点提示：1 日常作息习惯；2 能力： 擅长音乐、唱歌和下象棋；3 上学方式：乘船要求：1 语句通顺，语意连贯；2所写内容必须包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥；360 词左右【分析】 【高分句型一】She goes to bed before ten o 'clock every day because she thinks it isimportant to get enough sleep .她每天都在10点钟前上床睡觉，因为她认为足够的睡眠是 很

2、重要的.because引导原因状语从句；she thinks+宾语从句；it is+形容词to do sth做某 事是的.【高分句型二】She is good at music.她擅长音乐.be good at擅长【解答】Li hua is my good friend She lives in a small village Now let me introduce her （点题）She gets up early every day and exercises for half an hour So she is very strong She goes to bed before te

3、n o 'clock every day because she thinks it is important to get enough sleep 【高分 句型一】 （日常作息习惯）She is good at music 【高分句型二】She sings very well She alsolikes playing chess She often plays chess with her father （能力）There is a big river betweenher home and school，so she goes to school by boat every d

4、ay （上学方式）【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务2请你为学校杂志写一份60 词左右的广告，内容要点如下：学校乐队需要四名新成员，分别要求他们能弹钢琴、弹吉他或打鼓.你的联系方式：电话联系8756 - 3559;网上报名地址（address）butterflyxjsm cn【分析】 高分句型一Can you play the piano？ "你能弹钢琴吗？"， 这句是询问对方的能力，注意短语的运用.在乐器前一定要加定冠 词the,即play the piano/the guita

5、r/thetrumpet/drums 不要漏掉the高分句型二come and join us "来加入我们"两个动词的动作同时发生时，或第二个动词是表目的时候，用and 来连接【解答】Students wanted for our School BandWe need 4 musicians for our school band Can you play the piano ？ （高分句型一）Can youplay the guitar？ Can you play the trumpet？ Can you play the drums？ Come and join us

6、.（高分句型二） Please call 8756-3559. Our e - mail address is butterflyxjsm . cn.【点评】这题是要点作文，可以根据要点内容进行翻译，不能遗漏要点内容根据要点内容可知要用简单句，时态主要是一般现在时写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确注意应用所给短语和单词3 请以 "My Day" 为题目， 用所给短语介绍自己一天的时间安排情况：get up， have breakfast，go to school， in the morning ， four classes， in the afternoon， t

7、hree classes， go home， do my homework ， go to bed 要求： 1语句通顺，意思连贯；2所给短语必须用上；3词数：60 词左右【分析】本篇是提纲作文要求用所给短语介绍自己一天的时间安排情况：get up， havebreakfast， go to school ， in the morning ， four classes， in the afternoon ， three classes， go home， do my homework , go to bed.根据所给短语分析，主要包括三个要点：1上午活动；2下午活动；3晚上活动根据所给说明和要点

8、提示可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时，正确使用表示时间的介词 at， in 和 after 等，正确使用并列谓语After that ， I do morning exercises at 8 ： 10 a m 在那之后，我08： 10 做早操（高分句型，正确使用介词）I go home and do my homework at 5 ： 30 p m 我 5： 30 回家做作业（高分句型，正确使用并列谓语）【解答】My DayEvery morning ， I get upat 6： 30 am I have breakfast at 7 o'clock ThenIgo toscho

9、olat 7： 30 a m After that ， Ido morningexercises at 8 ： 10 a m （高分句型，正确使用介词） I have four classes in themorning Ihave lunch at 12 ： 00 a m （要点1 上午活动）In the afternoon , I have threeclasses. At4 ： 30 p. m. , I do after school activities.I gohomeand do my homework at 5 ： 30 pm （高分句型，正确使用并列谓语）（要点2 下午活动）I

10、 have supper with my family at 6： 30 pmAfter supper ，I watch TV for twohours Then，I go to bed at 9： 30 p m （要点 3晚上活动）【点评】书面表达，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，要认真审题，不能偏离主题；而且要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点；在保证正确的基础上，尽量使用并列句和复合句等高分句型在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一 些需要表达清楚的要点和细节4 Tom是一名勤奋的学生，他总是早上起得很早，然后刷牙、洗澡、吃早饭，再去上学 请你发挥你的想象，写一篇关

11、于他一天的活动的短文【分析】 高分句型一He always gets up early in the morning 他早上总是起得很早这是一个一般现在时的句子，主语是第三人称单数，注意动词应该用第三人称单数形式高分句型二He goes to bed at 9： 40他九点四十上床睡觉go to bed 上床睡觉【解答】Tom is a good student He always gets up early in the morning 【高分句型一，注意一般现在时的使用】 He brushes his teeth at 6： 40 Then he takes a shower at 7：

12、00 After that ，he eats his breakfast at 7： 20， and then he goes to school by bike at 7： 40， he has four classs in the morning 【要点， 上午的活动】 He eats lunch at school. There are three classes in the afternoon After school ， he often plays football with his friends!He goes home at 5 ： 00【要 点二，下午的活动】 He ea

13、ts dinner at 6： 50， after dinner， he does his homework He goesto bed at 9： 40【要点三，晚上的活动】 【高分句型二，注意固定词组的使用】【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系上下文之间可以适当使用连接词如but， so 等5根据汉语提示及要求，用英语写一篇短文提示：王慧是我的好朋友，她在上海上学她的家距离学校约两公里，她通常骑自行车去上学，大约用15 分钟但下雨天她乘出租车，大约4 分钟；她的父母在离家5 公里的一家医院工作，每天开小汽车上班，大约要用

14、15 分钟要求： 1 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；2词数不少于70【分析】 高分句型一：it takes her about fifteen minutes 这大约花费她15 分钟的时间这里用It takes sb. aboutminutes.表示"某事大约花费某人多少分钟"高分句型二：It's five kilometers from their home 医院离家大约 5公里.这里用It's - kilometers from表示"某地离某地大约多少公里 "【解答】Wang Hui is my good friend Sh

15、e goes to school in Shanghai Her home is about two kilometers from school She usually rides her bike to school and it takes her about fifteen minutes（ 高分句型一）But when it rains ， she goes to school by taxi It takes her about fourminutes （介绍王慧的情况）Her father and mother both work in a hospital It's f

16、ivekilometers from their home （高分句型二）They drive to work It takes them about fifteenminutes （介绍王慧父母的情况） 【点评】1 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识2条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确6根据提示写一篇短文，描述一下你的日常学习、生活情况词数：60 词左右要求： 1 家离学校2 千米；2每天6： 30 起床，早饭后坐公共汽车上学；3到校花10 分钟；4上午4 节课，下午2 节课；5晚饭后做作业，10 点睡觉【分析

17、】 本篇是提纲作文主要要点包括：1 家离学校2 千米；2 每天6： 30 起床，早饭后坐公共汽车上学；3到校花 10 分钟；4上午4 节课，下午2 节课；5晚饭后做作业，10 点睡觉根据所给说明和要点提示可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时，正确使用并列连词和不定式等（高分句型，正确使用并列谓语）I have a quick breakfast and go to school by bus 我快速吃了早餐，然后乘公共汽车去上学（高分句型，正确使用形式主语和不定式）It takes me ten minutes to get to school 我花十分钟到达学校【解答】My home is ab

18、out two kilometers away from school （要点 1 家离学校2 千米） I getup at 6： 30 every day I have a quick breakfast and go to school by bus （高分句型，正确使用并列谓语）（要点2每天6： 30 起床，早饭后坐公共汽车上学）It takes me ten minutesto get to school.（高分句型，正确使用形式主语和不定式）（要点3.到校花10分钟）There are four classes in the morning and two classes in th

19、e afternoon （要点4 上午 4 节课，下午2 节课） After dinner I do my homework At 10： 00， I go to bed （要点5 晚饭后做作业，10 点睡觉）【点评】书面表达，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，要认真审题，不能偏离主题；而且要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点；在保证正确的基础上，尽量使用并列句和复合句等高分句型在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏 一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节7假如你的名字叫Tony， 12 岁了，现在要给你的朋友Alice 写封信告诉她你每天去学校的情况：包括几点起床，早饭吃什么，几点离

20、开家去学校，如何去学校，你家与学校的距 离以及你所花费的时间等开头已给出Dear Alice ，How are you ？【分析】高分句型一I'm writing to you to tell you something about my school day 这是一个现在进行时态的句子，表示正在做某事高分句型二It only takes me about 10 minutes on foot 我走路只要10 分钟左右it takessomebody sometime to do sth.是固定句型，花费某人一段时间做某事.【解答】Dear Alice ，How are you ？ I

21、'm writing to you to tell you something about my school day 【 高分句型一，注意现在进行时态的使用】【开头点明主题】 I usually get up at 6 ： 00 in the morning I oftenhave an egg， some bread and a cup of milk for breakfast After that ， I leave home at around 7： 30 It is only one kilometer from my home to school So I walk to

22、 school every day It only takes me about 10 minutes on foot 【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】 【正文部分详细介绍每天去学校的情况】What about you， Alice ？ How do you get to school every day ？【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but, so等.8为了丰富学生的校园生活，学校正在筹建各种俱乐部，如英语俱乐部（English club ） 、写作俱乐部（writing clu

23、b ）、音乐俱乐部（music club）你想参加哪个俱乐部？你对该俱乐部活动开展有何期盼？为什么？请在校园英语论坛上分享你的想法内容提示：（ 1 ） Which club would you like to join ？（ 2） What activities do you want to do in the club ？ Why？要求： （ 1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（ 2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；（ 3）词数 80 左右【分析】 【高分句型一】I want to join an English club because I think it's a good

24、 place for me to practice speaking 我想加入英语俱乐部，因为我认为它是一个练习演讲的好地方want to do 想做某事；think+ 宾语从句；a good place to do sth 一个做某事的好地方；practice doing 练习做某事【高分句型二】What's more， if I can sing English songs ， I will be proud of myself 另外，如果我能把英语歌唱好，我将为自己感到骄傲What's more另外；will表示将来时；be proud of以为傲【解答】One poss

25、ible version ：I want to join an English club because I think it's a good place for me to practice speaking 【高分句型一】It's also a good place to make friends （加入什么俱乐部）If it's possible ， I hope we can watch some interesting English movies ， and then talk to each other about it A good movie can

26、 always bring us happiness and leave us a deep impression In this way ， it's easy for us to recite some English sentences and we will have interests to express our own opinions It's also a wonderful idea to learn English songs together Our mood can be easily changed by music， and everyone wa

27、nts to keep a good mood What's more， if I can sing English songs ， I will be proud of myself （可以做哪些活动以及原因）【高分句型二】I'm looking forward to joining an English club （期待）【点评】 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误【高分句型一】9 .假如你是李华，请你给美国的

28、笔友托尼（ Tony）写一封信，告诉他你们班的班规并谈谈你对这些规则的看法要点：（ 1 ）不能迟到；（ 2）必须按时完成作业；（ 3）不能和同学打架； （ 4）每天必须打扫一次教室要求： 50 词左右，可适当发挥Dear Tony，I am now in Class 8 ， Grade 7Let me tell you some of my class rules Yours，Li Hua【分析】高分句型一：We have to get on well with them 我们必须和他们相处得很好have to 必须，不得不，get on well with sb 和某人相处好高分句型二：Ou

29、r teachers sometimes are strict， but remember， they make rules to help us我们的老师有时很严格，但记住，他们制定规则来帮助我们be strict 严格， make rules tohelp us制定规则来帮助我们，to help us动词不定式作后目的状语【解答】Dear Tony，I am now in Class 8 ， Grade 7 Let me tell you some of my class rules （开篇点题）We can't arrive late for class We must fini

30、sh our homework on time We can't fight with our classmates We have to get on well with them 【高分句型一】We have to clean ourclsaaroom once a day We can't talk in class We have to be quiet When we meet our teachers ， we must say hello to them We can't eat in the classroom We have to eat in the

31、 dining hall We can't listen to music or play games in class Some students think these rules are terrible ， but I don't think so Our teachers sometimes are strict， but remember， they make rules to help us 【高分句型二】We mustfollow them Yours，Li Hua【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词

32、，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构 分散，废话连篇，严重跑题10 .家有家规，校有校纪.请以 "School rules”为题，向新生 Tom介绍你们学校的一些规章制度提示：1 见到老师要问好；2 不要在教室里大声说话；3上课不能迟到；4不要在教室吃东西；5放学后要打扫教室要求： 50 词左右，条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范【分析】 【高分句型一】You should say "hello" to our teachers when you see the teachers 当你见到老师时，你应该向老师问好.这是 when引导

33、的时间状语从句，当时候.【高分句型二】I hope you have a good time here 希望你在这里过得愉快这是一个宾语从句，I hope 是主句，后面的是宾语从句【解答】Welcome to our school , Tom. Here are some of our school rules .【开头点明主题】Youshould say "hello" to our teachers when you see the teachers 【高分句型一】 You can't talkloudly in the classroom You can

34、9;t arrive late for school In class you can't eat or drink You should clean the classroom after class 【正文部分详细介绍规章制度】I hope you have a goodtime here 【高分句型二】 【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构 分散，废话连篇，严重跑题11 俗话说" 没有规矩，不成方圆"，校有校规，家有家规假如你是一位班主任，请你与

35、同学们一起动手，共同商议，本着民主原则，为你们班制定一份班规，列出 5 至 6 条规则【分析】 【高分句型一】We are not allowed to listen to music in class 我们不能在课上听音乐be not allowed to do sth 不被允许做某事，不能做某事【高分句型二】Listen to the teachers carefully in class 课上认真听老师讲课祈使句，省略主语lisen to 听【解答】Our school has school rules, and our class also has class rules.（点明主题）

36、We can't eat in class.We are not allowed to listen to music in class .【高分句型一】Don't sleep in class.Listen to the teachers carefully in class .【高分句型二】We should arrive at school on time .Don't run in the hallways .【点评】考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构.使用不同的提建议的句型，祈使句，should等，列出5/6条

37、规则即可.12 .根据下列提示为你们学校图书馆写一则规定，要求人人遵守（ obey）. 40词左右.提示：1 .不准讲话；2 .不准吃任何东西；3 .不能听音乐和唱歌；4 .不要将书拿走；5.要按时归还（return）书籍；6.保持图书馆干净、卫生.【分析】 高分句型一 No eating anything in the library .此句结构是"No+动名词+"表示"禁止"或"不许"，no是形容词，在句中作定语，表示否定，意思是没有或不是，可以修饰可数名词的单复数和不可数名词，其后可以接动名词.这句话意为"在图书室里不

38、能吃任何东西".高分句型二 Don't take away the books.此句结构是"Don' t+动词原形+"是祈使句的否定句，表是"禁止"或"不能"，还要注意短语thke away"拿走，带走"，这句话译为"不要把书拿走".【解答】Library RulesHere are our school library rules . Everyone should obey them .1. No talking in the library .2. No eati

39、ng anything in the library .（高分句型一）3. Don't listen to music and sing .4. Don't take away the books .（高分句型二）5. Please return the books on time.6. Please keep the library clean .【点评】这题是要点作文，可以根据要点内容进行翻译，不能遗漏要点内容.根据要点 内容可知要用简单句，可用祈使句的否定形式及no+动名词的形式.都表示不许，禁止.写作时要灵活，注意应用短语和单词.13.假如你是赵楠，Mary下周要来你们

40、学校学习.你现在给她发一封邮件，向她介绍一下 你们学校的校规.内容包括：1.上课不许迟到；2.不允许打架；3.要保持教室的干净、整洁、安静；4.不能在教室里吃东西； 5.不能在走廊听音乐；6.放学后按时回家.Dear Mary ,How's it going ? I'm very glad to hear you are coming to our school . My name is ZhaoNan.I hope to see you soon.【分析】 高分句型一 Don't fight with others .不要和别人打架.这是一个祈使句. fight wi

41、th和打架.高分句型二I hope you will like our school .我希望你会喜欢我们的学校.这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句.Dear Mary ,How's it going ? I'm very glad to hear you are coming to our school . My name is Zhao Nan. I want to tell you something about our school rules .【开头点明主题】You can'tarrive late for Class . Don'

42、;t fight with others【高分句型一，注意祈使句的使用】.You have to keep the classroom clean and tidy. Keep quiet in the classroom . Don't be noisy . You can't eat in the classroom, but you can eat in the dining hall . Don't listen to music in the hallways . And you have to go home on time after school . I

43、 hope you will like our school【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】.【正文部分详细介绍学校的校规】I hope to see you soon.Yours , Zhao Nan . 【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but, so等.14 .同学们，你们的家里有没有一些小家规呢？比如父母要求你必须干什么.不能干什么.请以"My Family Rules"为题写一篇小短文.【分析】【高分句型一】Then I need to help my m

44、other make breakfast.然后我需要帮助 我的妈妈做早餐.need to do sth需要做某事；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事【高分句型二】I can't play after school because I have to do my homework first .放学后我不 能玩，因为我必须先做作业.because引导原因状语从句；have to+单词原形，表示不得不做某事 【解答】My Family RulesMy name is Mary . There are too many rules in my family .（引起下文） I hav

45、e to get up at 6: 00 a. m. and make my bed . Then I need to help my mother make breakfast .（要做 的事情）【高分句型一】 After breakfast, my mother says, "Don't leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen" . So after cleaning the dirty dishes , I have to run to school . I usually go home at 6 : 00 P. m. I

46、 can't play after school because I have to do my homework first .【高分句型二】 After dinner, I can't relax , either. I must read a book before I go to bed . Rules, rules, rules! （不能做的事情） What can I do ?（我的困惑）【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语 和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务15 .假如你们正在进行英语测试，教室里非常安静，

47、英语老师站在黑板前，注视着同学们， 大部分同学在忙着答题，只有东东在东张西望.因为喜欢阅读，所以你先做阅读部分.试 题不太难，你希望同学们都能取得好成绩请以"An English Test”为题，根据所给信息，发挥你的想象，以第一人称的形式写一篇40词左右的小短文.描述下测验时的情形. 提示： be queit; be busy doing ; try one's best; enjoy reading ; look at; get good grades【分析】 【高分句型一】I try my best to do the reading exercises first .

48、我尽力先做阅读练习.try to do sth尽力做某事.【高分句型二】I think the exam is not too difficult .我认为考试不是太难.I think+宾语从句.【解答】We are having an English test now.（点题） The classroom is very quiet. Our English teacher is standing in front of the blackboard and looking at the students . Most of the students are busy answering t

49、he questions. Only Dongdong is looking around . Because I enjoy reading , I try my best to do the reading exercises first .【高分句型（描述考试过程）I think the exam is not too difficult . I hope all the students can get good grades.【高分句型二】（希望）【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语 和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务.16

50、.假如你叫Lisa,给你的朋友 Linda发一封电子邮件，介绍几种你喜欢的动物，不少于 60词.【分析】 【高分句型一】I like them because they're very smart and competent.我喜欢他们原因是他们机敏、能干.because引导的原因状语从句.smart "聪明的、机敏的".competent "有能力的，能干的".【高分句型二】 And they are always loyal to their owners .而且他们总是对主人很忠诚.be loyal to sb ."对忠诚&quo

51、t;.【高分句型三】Pandas are also cute so that I would like to go to the zoo to see them everyyear.大熊猫也很可爱所以我每年都想去动物园看他们.so that "因此,结果",引导结果状语从句.Would like to do ""想要做某事".【解答】Dear Linda ,Do you like animals ? I like animals very much .（开1 见山，直接,点题.）I like manyanimals, such as cats,

52、 dogs, pandas. But my favorite animals aredogs . I like them because they're very smart and competent.【高分句型一】（介绍dogs的特点及喜欢的理由.）Dogs are the best companion for people . And they are always loyal to their owners . 【高分句型 二】I also like cats very much . I think they're friendly .（介绍 cats 的特点及喜欢的理

53、由） Pandas are also cute so that I would like to go to the zoo to see them every year. 【高分句型 三】Of course, as a Chinese, I am very proud of our country wherethere are many pandas.（介绍第三种动物及喜欢的原因，使用复合句，为文章增添亮点.）What animals do you like ? Look forward to your reply! （结尾升华主题.） Yours , Lisa 【点评】写作时首先要注意电子邮

54、件的格式，开头和结尾用语，用一般现在时和第一人 称介绍几种自己喜欢的动物，语言简洁.尽量使用各种不同句式或高级词汇、短语，增 强文章的美感.17 .根据所给提示词，写一篇60词左右的短文，叙述你在动物园里看到了什么动物，最喜欢的动物，为什么喜欢.提示：see, many, zoo, koala, tiger, elephant, dolphin , panda, lion , penguin, giraffe , like , because, cute, interesting , smart, shy, friendly .【分析】 本篇是提纲作文.要求用所给单词叙述你在动物园里看到了什么

55、动物，最喜欢 的动物， 为什么喜欢：get up, have breakfast, go to school, in the morning , four classes,in the afternoon , three classes, go home, do my homework , go to bed .根据所给单词分析， 主要包括三个要点：1.动物园里看到了什么动物；2.最喜欢的动物；3.为什么喜欢.根据所给说明和要点提示可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时，正确使用并列句和原因 状语从句等.（高分句型，正确使用原因状语从句）I like koalas best, because the

56、y are very cute.我最喜欢考拉，因为它们很可爱.（高分句型，正确使用并歹U句）They sleep during the day , but at night they get up and eatleaves.他们白天睡觉，但是晚上起来吃树叶.【解答】I see many animals in the zoo . They are koalas, tigers, elephants, dolphins , pandas, lions , penguins and giraffes.（要点 1.动物园里看到了什么动物）I like koalas best,（要点2.最喜欢的动物）

57、because they are very cute.（高分句型，正确使用原因状语从句）They come from Australia . They sleep during the day, but at night they get up and eat leaves.（高分句型，正确使用并列句）They are very friendly to people .（要点3.为什么喜欢）【点评】书面表达，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，要认真审题，不能 偏离主题；而且要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点；在保证正确的基础上，尽量使用并列句和复合句等高分句型.在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏 一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节.18 .现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一 篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文.winter, windy and cold , wear coats and scarves, inrestaurants,in the park, have a good time【分析】【高分句型一】Everyone is having a good time .每个人都玩得很开心.have a