2020年新高考英语热点01书面表达读后续写(教师版)

1、精品资源备战高考热点01书面表达读后续写【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广大师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种 新题型1.题型介绍选材特点(1)所需阅读的短文词数在 350以内；(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑 性比较强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；(2)内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；(4)上下文的连贯性。【

2、满分技巧】(1)所续写短文的词数应为 150左右(词数少于130的，从总分中减去 2分)；(2)应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；(3)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；(4)续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面：1 .犯,提短文关键信息和语言特点的能力:2 .语言运用的准确性和丰富性：3 .对语篇结构的把握能力:4 .创造性思维能力。【热点话题】假期生活；生活小故事；哲理故事；寓言故事；学生生活。【限时检测】(建议用时：30分钟)A（2018年浙江省高考真题）话题：假期里发生的故事难

3、度：建议用时：7分1. It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad ' s friend, picked us

4、 up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, U

5、ncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked re

6、ally cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn ' t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don

7、 'latefor supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and

8、the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven( 编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.注意：(1)所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；(2)至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：(3)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；(4)续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph

9、 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. 【参考范文】All of aSuddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. T

10、hen my dad turned around and shouted,“ Hold on!began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the star

11、s came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashli

12、ght waving us over. What a night!【解析】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 这一句是故事发

13、展的转折点，可从 rabbit 出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. 这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul 的叮嘱 不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。B（ 山东省 2020 年普通高等学校招生模拟卷）话题：救治流浪狗的故事难度：建议用时：7

14、分阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray （ 流浪） dog, until he came to me.I was

15、seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and lo

16、oked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the lite one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its

17、presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my

18、hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual gues

19、t “ Shawe keep him with us?" I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first tally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Para. 1 : One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk

20、with a broken leg. Para. 2: Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. 【参考范文】Days passed on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very exhausted. He came to my room and sat near me. It was then that I saw his hind leg was injured and was bl

21、eeding. I called out my mother and she quickly tied a bandage around his leg and gave him food to eat. I was very upset. But the next day, Spotty was up to his usual pranks though he limped a bit. After this incident my relation with Spotty became more intense. I really admired him a lot for his cou

22、rage.Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. We came out and saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere. After some time Spotty became quiet. I patted him on his back and came inside. The next day morning, my heart skipped a beat when I didn't see Spot

23、ty. I searched for him in each andevery corner but he was nowhere. And this time he had gone and would never come back. I cried and waited for him. We waited for one long week. But there were no signs of him. Then one day my Dad got transferred to Mumbai. We shifted back to Mumbai. What would have h

24、appened to Spotty? Would he have died? These were the only questions in my mind, but they all remained unanswered forever.C（2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）话题：Abbie和Mel之间发生的关于乐队的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。What do you think about my audition（ 试奏）yesterday ? My trill（ 颤音）should have been better

25、, don ' t you think ? ” Abbie asked Mel and closed the lid of her violin case before school."It ' s no big deAbbie , " Mel said as theyvalked out the door.Mel didn ' t leatoevtioirry about her little sister ' s mood.It turned out to be a busy day.She had a test in science c

26、lass.She hit two home runs in softball.After school, she and her friends talked about their summer plans.She forgot about the audition results until Abbie dragged her to the music room .Mel thought she ' d probably be in the first violins.Mel and Abbie found the list of names on the board.Abbie.

27、Concertmaster.Abbie screamed , "I can ' t believe it! ” "I can ' t wait to tell Mum and Dad Abbie rushed toward home.Mel kept reading.Mel.Second violins.What ?There had to be some mistake.She ' d figure out tomorrow.When Mel got home, Abbie was playing her audition piece thereM

28、usic poured from Abbie ' s bow like water from a teapot pure and perfect.And the trill sounded like a bird singing.Abbie was goodreally good but that wasn' th e point. Mr Benson must have made a mistake" Mel thought.The next morning , Mel slipped into the music room. Gathering her coura

29、ge , Mel said, “Mr Benson I want to talk to you about the orchestra（管弦乐队）seats.”y Yes-you must be proud of your sister, " Mr Benson smiled."Abbiie a rare student.If she continues topractice hard and grow as a musician , she could become a professional.Then we' ll look back on our littl

30、e orchestraand think about how lucky we are.”注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :Mel froze as there wasn;t any mix-up.Paragraph 2 :After school, Mel found Abbie on a bench outside, playing the violin .【背诵范文】Mel froze as there wa

31、sn ' t any Shix-upalized she was the one who' d made Hem lstteksister hadearned the first chair through efforts and she hadn ' t even congratulated Mer.walked down the hall. Most days,she spent her time thinking about softball, her classes and her friends. Every day was so full that she

32、didn' t alwayspractice her violin while Abbie played every day. Determined to make a change, Mel decided to have a talk withAbbie.After school, Mel found Abbie on a bench outside, playing the violin. Mel made up her mind to apologize toAbbie after a brief inner struggle. She cleared her throat a

33、nd started, " I ' m so proud that you ' re concertmaster. sorry I ' veeen so mean. I guess I was jealous. Abbie was surprised."yBut ' er popular, Mel. You get bettergrades. You' re better at sports.You can do everything. " Mel shook her head. make OctarN like t you

34、 can.”Y Youcan if you keep practicing. Abbie smiled and asked if Mel would like to play with her. Mel agreed delightedly.D（2019届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14）话题：农民 Rip Van Winkle的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Once upon a time, there was a farmer called Rip Van Winkle. He lived in a village in the moun

35、tains with hiswife and two young children, a daughter and a son. Rip was a very happy and kind man and he got on well with allthe children in the village. They loved him because he played games with them and often told them stories while hewas sitting outside the“ King George "inn the villageHe

36、 spend a lot of time in the inn because he was a very lazy man. Instead of working on his farm, he would gofishing or hunting, or sit in the village inn talking to his friends. His family was poor and his wife used to get angrywith him. " What kind of farmer are you? ” She would say. " Why

37、 don ' t you get down to some work, you lazAfter arguments with his wife, Rip always went off hunting with his dog, Wolf. One day, after anotherargument, Rip went further than usual in the woods and came to a beautiful valley. Suddenly, he heard a strangevoice calling his name. An old man, dress

38、ed in old-fashioned clothes, was trying to carry a barrel（ 木桶）and askedRip to help him. Rip agreed. They took the barrel to a cave, where there were more people, all dressed in the samestrange clothes. After that, the old man gave Rip a drink from the barrel. Rip immediately fell into a deep sleep.注

39、意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；1 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1:Some time later, he woke up under a tree in the same valley.Para2：When he got to his house, he saw that it was old and abandoned.【背诵范文】Compared with paper towels, hand dryers have more advantages, which

40、 will benefit school in four ways. First, they are clean and healthy because bacteria ca n' t touch kids. Additionally, it can help school save money. Thirdly, our bathroom can be kept clean and neat. Besides, it can dry our hands more effectively if we take longer time.Therefore, school is advi

41、sable to fix the equipment at once.（66）E（2020届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题）话题：寓言故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer waseating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily her

42、e and there. The deerfollowed her fawns （幼鹿）into a cave. The deer was frightened because it was a tiger' s cave. There weidead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud ro

43、ar. She saw the tiger at adistance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a plan. The deer raised her voice and shouted, "My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture （捕捉） a tiger for you to eat.You can have a good dinner."The tiger heard

44、 these words and became frightened. He thought, "Whose is that strange voice from the cave?A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me. I shall run away to escape death." The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.A jackal （胡狼）saw the running tiger. " Why are yo

45、u running in great fear?" the jackoLasked. The tiger said, "My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away."The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a

46、coward（懦夫）.It said, "Don ' t be afraid. No animal isfiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out."But the tiger said, "I do not want to take a chance. You may run away. I will be left alone to die. So, I will notcome with you."The jackal said, "Trust m

47、e. Let us knot（打结） our tails together. Then I will not be able to leave you." Thetiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal. So the jackal tied their tails in a knot. Now they walked towards the cave together.Para.1The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together.Para.2The tiger was shocked

48、 to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him【参考范文】The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. She again raised her voice. She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave, " My dear children, I requested my friend, the clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us. No

49、w look the jackal has captured a tiger for us. He has tied the tiger' s tail to his tail. This is to prevetiger from escaping. You will soon have the tiger for dinner."The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him. So, the tiger decided to escape from the ter

50、rible animal standing inside his cave. He started running. He forgot about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns. In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks. The tiger pulled with all his might. His tail got cut. The jackal was killed in this incident. The tail-less

51、tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her young ones left the tiger 'cave. They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.高频必考攻克高考以下内容为：高中英语到底怎么学？开学伊始，对于所有的同学来说，都是新的开始，新学期到底该如何学好英语? 这是很多同学高中三年都一直追问的问题。看了那么多英语学渣变身学霸的逆袭故

52、事，为什么还是学不好英语?我只能说：愿望是好的，行动是关键!今天，一位高考英语137 分的学姐和大家分享高中三年英语到底该怎么学，希望你不只是看一看，唯有行动才能结出硕果!进入高中的第一天起，你的人生就开始了一个崭新的阶段。高中三年，你要为你的将来打拼，你要知道，能够对自己人生负责的只有自己。不要想着刚刚开学，一切都不着急，高中的每一天都不能懈怠，因为别人一直在进步，你停滞不前就是退步。更不要觉得初中底子好，短期内吃吃老本儿没关系，久而久之，你就会为你的懒惰和厌恶改变埋单。英语学习也是这样，你要做好改变的准备，改变以前初中时的英语学习方法，你要做好打一场持久战的心理准备。如果你是高二、高三的同

53、学，以上说的这些同样适用。单词方面，大家都知道，初中英语1600 词，高中英语3500 词，这只是量的比较。从单词长度和用法来讲，高中英语远远难于初中。没有一定的词汇量，英语水平和成绩的提高便无从谈起。所以，你要制定一套不同于初中的记单词方法。下面推荐一套完整的高中英语记单词方法：1. 买一本课本同步参考资料。课本上的单词不仅要记住，其固定搭配、句型和用法也非常非常非常重要，而这些你都可以在参考资料上找到。2. 准备一个单词笔记本。把课本同步资料上的重点单词、短语、句型及其用法用心摘抄到笔记本上，一周至少复习三次。3. 买一本 3500 词。没错，高一开始就可以刷3500 词了，你可以利用零碎时间看和记。这样做的好处是，到高考前夕，一本 3500 词你至少应该可以翻个七八遍了，相对于那些一遍都没翻过的同学，你领先的可不是一点点哦！4. 保存做过的每一篇完形和阅读。这样做的目的是，要定期翻看上面的生词注释，避免遗忘。前提是，做完每一篇之后你要把生词查出来标注在相应位置。我不建议把文章中的生词摘抄到笔记本上，脱离语境的记忆印象不深刻、记忆不持久、用法不清晰。5. 看名著简写本。阅读英语名著，可以增加词汇量、提高阅读能力、了解英语本土文化、滋养身心真是好处多多啊！给大家推荐书虫和床头灯系列，大家可以根据自己的英语水平选择读哪些。书虫系列分年