上海英语中考作文题

1、上海英语中考作文题【篇一：上海市历届中考英语作文题目】上海市历届中考英语作文题目2002 my favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人2004leave school 毕业时分2005 growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼2006 i have a dream 我有一个梦2007 a story about my parent(s) ”一个关于我父/母的故事2008love around me 爱在我身边2009i want to do something for my scho

2、ol 我想为我的学校做点什么2010im proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪2011i m a member of .我是的一员2012if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she carestoo much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议2013 how to protect myself 如何保护自己2014 this time next year 明年此时【篇二：2014 上海中考英语作文范文和点评】中考作文点评今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时” (this tim

3、e next year ) ，黄浦区初中英语教研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，给予了考生一定的想象空间，可以说是在“意料之外，又在情理之中”。周加有表示，前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体，加上时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有自己的想法，所以有一定难度。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点 以 “我 ”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒。2014 年中考英语作文：题目： this time next year亮点一：定语从句修饰对高中生活的向往亮点二：用as.

4、as 的比较级结构，抓人眼球亮点三：用到了idiom ，而且用的极为恰当亮点四：on topof the list永远放在第一位亮点五：be of great importance 名词结构更高端亮点六：turn a new leaf of my future life翻开未来生活的新篇章?写作小tip ：今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章。全文的时态应全部运用一般将来时，对未来生活进行展望。全文应表达积极阳光的信念。2014 年上海中考英语范文1 this time next yearits exciting to imagine what the happy life will be

5、like.at this time next year, i will be a senior high student, and i will make a lot of new friends. i hope to be more independent so that perhaps i will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken english. also i will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of

6、myself when i am alone.life will be totally different, but im really looking forward to it.【解析】这篇作文需要涉及三个方面：变化、期望和自己的作为，因此文章中需要涵盖着三点。第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为，紧接其后的是第二个作为，而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度。2014 年上海中考英语范文2this time next yearlife is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is

7、 full of challenge as well as hope.perhaps i will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in english. basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. then, i will

8、benefit from readingenglish books. what is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral english. only in this way can i progress in english endlessly.make plans and go for what i want. and i believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.(110 words)文章的标题告诉我们文章内容应

9、该是与未来的生活相关的，生活在变化，一年后我将进入高中，但是学习还在继续，所以我仍有自己的目标。文章主要立足于两点，我对未来的计划或者期待，以及我要如何去实现。作为一名英语学习者，我会从三点去提高自己的英语。英语学习是一个持续的过程，只有不断努力才会有收获【篇三：上海中考英语作文】上海中考英语作文学习资料一 . 评分标准上海中考英语作文总分为20 分，其中内容分8 分、语言分8 分、组织结构分4 分。以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：1. 内容分8 分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。2. 语言分8 分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少

10、于60 字的作文要酌情扣分。3. 组织结构分4 分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。二 . 注意点：每少 5 个词扣 0.5 分，拼写错误每处扣0.5 分，标点，大小写错误每 2 处扣 0.5 分 3 内容和语言表达总分达15 分及以上，得23 分内容和语言总分1314 分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给12 分 通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分 开头句 +给的几个参考点+结尾句 +亮点。先划档次：a 档 1815 分 b 档 14.512 分 c 档 11.58 分 d 档3.50 分 然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给

11、出总分。三 .学生常出现的问题：1. 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。2. 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：i must learn english well. 就可以换成：it isimportant for me to learn english well.4. 结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的 结构。5

12、. 都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un. 初中二年级下un. 可以用用被动语态。6. 连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如:to my surprise （ 让我惊 讶的是）,what ' s more（而且，还有）等， 让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。四 中考写作高频使用词组、句法1 .作文开头的有用句as we all know, as it is known to all, it s known to all thatit ' s common

13、knowledge that it ' s commonly accepted that there is no denying that how time flies! in a blink of an eye, time flies like a speeding arrow, time goes like the flowing water.2 、中间分层部分的有用结构:分正反两面论述:on one hand, on the other hand 分两点：forone thing, for another, 分三点：firstly, secondly, last but notl

14、east3 、结尾部分all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in brief, in short, to put everything in a shell, 概括的说，简单的说last but not least组织语言发表观点的in my opinion, from my point of view, inmy eyes, as far as i am concerned, believe it or not, 表示递进的in addition furthermore more importantlywhat smore moreover 其他与我”有

15、关的写作材料1、重点句型it's+a. for sb.to do sth. so +a./ad. thatsuch a +a.+n. that too?to do not?.until that ' s Why+ 那是。的原因 it ' s said that 旬 子4 、增添亮点使用复合句和谚语谚语举例i firmly believe that “ aforei gn language is a weapon in the struggle of life” . as afamous saying goes, “ a man becomes learned by as

16、king questions. ” it s common knowledge that the road to successis not always full of roses. an old saying goes,“ nothing isimpossible to a willing h eart. ”五 2002-2013 上海中考英语作文题目集锦2002 my favorite thing（s） 我的心爱之物2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人2004 leave school 毕业时分2005 growing pains and

17、gains 成长的烦恼2006i have a dream 我有一个梦2007 a story about my parent（s） 一个关于我父/母的故事2008 love around me 爱在我身边2009 i want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做 点什么2010 im proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪2011 my favourite thing （ s） 我的心爱之物2012 if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she cares too much a

18、bout the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。2013 write at least 60 words about the topic“ how to protectmyself ” （以 “如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文）六近 5 年上海中考英语真题范文分享2009 命题作文write at least 60 words about the topic“ i want to do somethingfor my school ” 以. （“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（ 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校

19、名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ）use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容仅供参考）lwhat do you want to do for your school?2 why do you want to do it?3 how are you going to do it?例文1：i want to make school clean. you may think it is very simple. but i dont think so. our teacher said, school is your home, you shou

20、ld keep it clean. but i have never done anything to make school clean. for example, i have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. i also threw the rubbish on the ground. so i want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. during this summer holiday, i

21、 will go to school to make school clean. of course, i will do it with myclassmates. we will make school clean every weekends next term as well. now, do you think it is simple?2 one possible versioni want to do something for my school im leaving my school. i want to plant a tree in my school garden.

22、i have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so i want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. if i plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. in their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010 命题作文上海中考英语作文题:im proud of myse

23、lf1 、 what kind of person are you?2 、 what makes you proud of yourself(give an example/examples)3 、 why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60 字范文： 1i am a boy of less confidence. i always hate running. but as we all know, the students of grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. at that moment, i just wanted to give up. but my parents encouraged me: impossible is nothing, you could challenge yourself! so with the encouragement of them, i tried my best to run and insisted on running. when i got to the finishing line, i felt proud of my