九英全中考英语写作(课件)

1、 分值高分值高（2525分）分）难度大难度大要求要求：语言流畅，语法正确，：语言流畅，语法正确， 逻辑合理，能达到交际目的逻辑合理，能达到交际目的 主要考查学生主要考查学生语言基础知识、语言基础知识、语言组织能力语言组织能力及及书写能力书写能力中考英语中考英语书面表达书面表达提示作文提示作文表格提示表格提示(chart)图片提示图片提示(pictures)汉语提示汉语提示英语提示英语提示根据所给要求、提示写一篇短文根据所给要求、提示写一篇短文（日记、书信、通知等）（日记、书信、通知等）词数约词数约80100字字考试要求考试要求据实描述据实描述+适当发挥适当发挥据实描述即据实描述即提示、要求提示

2、、要求适当发挥即适当发挥即细节、观点细节、观点近年中考书面表达近年中考书面表达写作特点写作特点夹叙夹议夹叙夹议HeadBeginning Body TailEnding BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句结论句Supporting sentence 支持句支持句（细节、例子、数据或引文）（细节、例子、数据或引文） topic sentence 主题句主题句开门见山，开门见山，紧扣主题紧扣主题总结观点，发表己见，总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应首尾呼应总总分分总总1.1. Cross-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )

3、 写作文要求先写作文要求先审题审题，弄清写作要求。，弄清写作要求。 审题的内涵较广，不仅审视审题的内涵较广，不仅审视作文题作文题，还审视写，还审视写作作提示词、主题句、图提示词、主题句、图以及以及作文字数作文字数。 审题一旦出现偏误，就会审题一旦出现偏误，就会“差之毫厘，谬以千差之毫厘，谬以千里里”。大部分同学不会写作，主要原因是不会。大部分同学不会写作，主要原因是不会审题审题, 不会通过审题抓取有效信息。不会通过审题抓取有效信息。 默读题目切中题意默读题目切中题意 勾画要点防止遗漏勾画要点防止遗漏 适当分析定出基调适当分析定出基调1.1. Cross-question(Cross-quest

4、ion(审题审题) )u Style (体裁体裁）u Person（人称人称）u Tense（时态时态）健康很重要。在学习和工作的健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告康组织写一篇完整的调查报告, ,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。并提倡大家进行假日休闲。牛刀小试牛刀小试Cross

5、-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle (体裁体裁）：）：_Person（人称人称）：）：_Tense（时态时态）: _调查报告，记叙文调查报告，记叙文第三人称第三人称一般现在时一般现在时1.1. Cross-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )据实描写：据实描写：适当发挥：适当发挥：度假方式度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲细节及提倡假日休闲2.2. An outline drawingu List key points(列要点列要点)u Arra

6、nge and Add (布局加首尾布局加首尾) 调查报告调查报告 如何度假如何度假 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 List key points List key pointsvisit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！有漏点，扣分最多！ List key points1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home.

7、 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit

8、 friends or parents. A few people work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加加(add) 加首尾加首尾 总分总总分总3.connection3.connection 1)Sentence Making and Beautifying word word phrase phrase sentence sentence Beautifying内容和语言表达内容和语言表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点内容全面，表达有

9、新意或亮点 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending) most people ch

10、oose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美美(beautify)方法一方法一: :善用意义相近的善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调高级词汇，避免行文单调Which is better?1.1.我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 2. 2.我不吃垃圾食品。我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.3.

11、3.我们应该努力取得好成绩。我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades. Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. some peopl

12、e like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. It makes people relaxed to visit friends or parents.

13、 A few people have to work. 方法二方法二 : : 活用多种句型活用多种句型, ,避避免重复和呆板免重复和呆板, ,增加文采增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求以正确、通顺为最基本要求Which is better?1 1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of

14、2 我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment. Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to vis

15、it friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻只会

16、用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb（谚语）（谚语）方法三方法三: : 妙用引文和例子，旁征博妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。加谚语加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the Engl

17、ish club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 8.All roads lead to

18、 Rome. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do wh

19、at we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子2)Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinking words（连接词）（连接词）连连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We

20、made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning） As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well. （the ending） Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay

21、at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the body)连连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away

22、 from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” C

23、ome and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.方法四方法四: :妙用关联词，使行文连妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。1.表示并列表示并列: and, as well as, not onlybut also bothand, neithernor， 2.表示递进表示递进: besides, whats more 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, althoughthough, after all, anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, since,

24、 for, so, therefore, as a result5.表示条件表示条件: if, unless6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, while, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the e

25、nd； next, later, since then, from then on9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, in a word, generally speaking, _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running a

26、nd hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. ( )Its too late to invite any more people. _, you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastA4.4. CheckinguSpelling(拼写拼写)uTense(时态时态)uGrammar (语法语法)uHa

27、ndwriting(书写书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号标点符号)通览全文仔细检查通览全文仔细检查Great changes in my hometown For the past several years, my hometownchanges a lot. Such as in the past, the houses old and small, but now the buildings are tall and beautiful. And at that time, farmers work hardly and made little money. But

28、now people are working in the factoryes and they make much more money. Because its relaxing work in the factory, so they lead a happily life.Inworked hardbutfactorieshas changedhappywere 多处错误，多处错误，降低档次降低档次5.5. Copying out u书写规范，卷面整洁书写规范，卷面整洁解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。或不用胶带或修正液，

29、尽量减少涂改。认真誊写，书写规范，卷面整洁认真誊写，书写规范，卷面整洁誊改连列审书面表达Steps of writingSteps of writing认真审题，勾画出要点并认真审题，勾画出要点并适当分析适当分析.据据文章要点及中心思想文章要点及中心思想，列出主要句型、关键词，列出主要句型、关键词，加上加上首尾，首尾，形成提纲。形成提纲。根据写作提纲和要点，根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤按步骤写出写出每一部分每一部分的具体内容，用的具体内容，用关联词关联词把文章各部分把文章各部分连连起来成文。起来成文。通览全文通览全文，检查并纠正文章中出现的检查并纠正文章中出现的语言语言错误。错误。 认真誊写，认

30、真誊写，书写规范书写规范，注意，注意卷面整洁卷面整洁How can we write a good composition？ 巧用关联词巧用关联词necessary美美善用高级词善用高级词汇汇活用多种句型活用多种句型If possible妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子 Writing skills Writing skills复习和强化训练要求复习和强化训练要求 1.记记。系统地熟读和背诵。系统地熟读和背诵课文课文中关于话题的一些句中关于话题的一些句子、句型和短文子、句型和短文,积累写作素材积累写作素材。大量的大量的背诵和阅读背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的是提高写作能力的有效办法有效办法。许多同学写

31、出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。中国有句古话，叫差异。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作作”。同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起。同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。复习和强化训练要求复习和强化训练要求 2. 练。练。对考纲上和课本中列出的所有对考纲上和课

32、本中列出的所有话题话题逐一逐一进行写作训练。进行写作训练。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示从根据提示写单词开始，到写单句，然后到段落，写单词开始，到写单句，然后到段落，最后到写流利的文章最后到写流利的文章。尽量。尽量尝试多种形式的写作尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。根据表格或记录写短文等。复习和强化训练要求复习和强化训练要求 3. 写。写。有计划地进行限时训练，提高有计划地进行限时训练，提高应试能力。应试能力。要求在要求在20分钟内写出分钟内写出100个词的短文，个词的短文，并且并且质量高、内容全、形式正确质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。形成习惯，