怎样写好英语作文How-can-we-write-a-good-composition

1、How can we write a good composition(作文)? Class _ No. _ Name_ mark_一、书面表达（本题15分，按五个档次给分）第一档 (13-15分) 短文内容涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑，无语法错误。第二档 (10-12分) 短文内容涵盖大部分要点，意思表达基本连贯，符合逻辑，但有一些语法错误。第三档 (7-9分) 短文内容涵盖大部分要点，但意思表达不够连贯，有较多的语法错误。第四档 (4-6分) 短文内容只涵盖部分要点，写出2-4个句子，但意思表达不连贯，有较多的语法错误。第五档 (1-3分) 只写出1-2个句子酌情给分，只写出个别单词，

2、不给分。内容要点可用不同方式表达，对扣紧主题的适当发挥不予扣分；书写潦草、涂改不清， 酌情扣1-2分。二、What is a good composition ?“一点”: 有“亮点” .有独到之处。“二整”: 书写工整,卷面整洁。“三要”: 数量要达标, 词汇和语法 结构要准确、上下文要连贯。“四不行”: 漏掉内容不行, 写错体裁不行，用错人称不行，用错时态不行。Enjoy a good composition欣赏好作文 日前,由教育部,国家体育总局,共青团中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动” 启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文.

3、内容感想1.学校师生收看了启动仪式;2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等1.锻炼有利于强健身体; 2. 运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高. 3. 每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子. 注意:1.词数80100 个左右. 2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数. 3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使短文通顺,连贯. 4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名.参考词汇： the launching ceremony 启动仪式 build up ones body strength 强身健体 More effective 效果更好 学生满分范文“Milli

4、ons of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played bas

5、ketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time. 三、请你做老师，修改作文。Dear Chairman, I am a boy student from Class1,Grade 3.Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.My name is Wang Ling . Im hard working and Im in g

6、ood health.I often help others. And be friendly to classmates. When someone is in trouble, Ill go and help he or she.I usually help the old people to cross the road.They often say thanks to me. In the bus,Ill stand up when a women with her son get on the bus.In every Saturday,Ill go to center park t

7、o pick the rubbish. I want to take part in this club.,because of I want to help more people. I will be glad if I am received.I am waiting for your answer. yours, Wang Lin四、帮助写作（一）Good beginning is half done.(好的开头是成功的一半）1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句2. 开头万能句型：1) .plays an important part in the.2) As we all know, .

8、 becomes more and more.3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in . 4) Many people say that. But I dont think so.5) I will never forget the .3.Make a topic sentence （主题句） 1）Smoking As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.Many students say smoking is fun, but I dont think so. As everybody knows, sm

9、oking is bad for our health. 2） The Spring FestivalI will never forget the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival plays an important part in our life. Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I dont think so. 3）Learning EnglishAs we all know, English becomes more and

10、 more popular/ important.Many people say its difficult to learn English.But I dont think so. 4）To be a volunteer for the 26th Universiade （世界大学生运动会）As we all know, the 26th Universiade is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.A volunteer plays an important part in the 26th Universiade. 5） A S

11、chool TripI will never forget the school trip last week.4. 结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应1） 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。2）结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally .最后 In a word, .总而言之 In short, . 简言之 We hope that··· 我们希望 Lets try our best to . I believe if we can., . will be . What a .! / How.!5.Make a concluding sent

12、ence(总结句，结尾句子）1） Keeping healthy Lets try our best to keep healthy. In short, its important to have good habits and keep healthy.2）Helping others I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.3）To be a green consumer Lets try our best to be a green consumer. In one word,

13、 its necessary for us to protect the environment.4）Beijing How beautiful Beijing is! Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?6.正文：语言简洁，层次分明1.长句短句交叉使用最好。2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。3.把握要点，层次清晰。4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词， 例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气1.按事情发展的先后或时间顺序 1）Firs

14、tly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not.until, before, after, when , while, during2.表示并列 not only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.nor，on (the) one handon the other hand3.表示举例或补充1）

15、for example ,such as 2）besides / whats more/ whats worse4.表示转折 however, but，although, instead of5.表示原因 thanks to, because of，because6.表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so.that, such.that, 7.表目的 in order to, so that8.表比较 the same as, than, of all 9.表建议的句子：I / we/ you should. Lets. Youd better. Why not. How a

16、bout. 10. 观点：in my opinion/view正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气 Which sentence is better?1.I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. 2. When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. 句式富于变化1.We are good friends. We should help each other. We are good friends and

17、 we should help each other. As we are good friends , we should help each other. 2.I was deeply moved and I couldnt say a word. (good ) I was too moved to say a word. 写作训练生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有朋友的爱，有老师的爱.请以“Love”为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。要求：1、语言规范，书写工整。 2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名 Love means

18、giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding._ 1. Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding. One day, I played football with my cl

19、assmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “ We are good friends, we should help each other.” I was deeply moved. I couldnt say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to o