2016中考英语书面表达备考

1、2021/8/141中考英语书面表达高分突破 2021/8/142一，河南中招英语作文评分标准一，河南中招英语作文评分标准 书面表达，书面表达，15分。考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时分。考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，态、语态、句式和词语， 完整、准确地表达所要求的内容。完整、准确地表达所要求的内容。分四档评分。分四档评分。 第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。清楚，语言无误。13-15分。分。 第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构

2、较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。912分。分。 第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4-8分。分。 第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词语。凑几个词语。0-3分。分。2021/8/1431. 1. 审题不清审题不清如有一年中考作文要求写如有一年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的一项最喜欢的课外活动课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为，有些考生将作文的

3、主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了偏离了“一项、课外一项、课外活活动动”这一主题这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为三四类作文。如何准确，都会被判为三四类作文。中考英语作文常见问题分析2021/8/144 2.拼写问题拼写问题 拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，一般来说分，一般

4、来说两个错误扣一分，两个错误扣一分，而且有大而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。常会降低作文的档次。2021/8/145 3，语法问题，语法问题 语法问题主要包括：语法问题主要包括：名词单复数名词单复数, 动词的时态动词的时态与语态以及与语态以及缺少动词缺少动词的情况的情况, 形容词和副词的等形容词和副词的等级形式级形式,代词代词、介词、数词和冠词的使用、介词、数词和冠词的使用, 主谓一主谓一致等等方面的错误。另外致等等方面的错误。另外,还有诸多常见的固定句还

5、有诸多常见的固定句式的错误。式的错误。经调查分析经调查分析, 学生的语法错误主要是学生的语法错误主要是受母语的负迁移影响。受母语的负迁移影响。2021/8/146语法问题之语法问题之 缺少动词缺少动词在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但 英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成 如：如：“我累了。我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，这个句子没有动词作谓语， 而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一 定要加上定要加上be动词，写成：动词，写成：Im tired. 误误 I happy I can

6、 come to Beijing zoo. 正正 I am happy I can come to Beijing zoo. 误误 The apples cheap. Ill take some. 正正 The apples are cheap. Ill take some.2021/8/147语法问题之语法问题之 代词的误用代词的误用英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中

7、很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误误误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正正 y mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.2021/8/148减少失分，重在夯实基础减少失分，重在夯实基础 通过前面对学生问题的分析，不难看出如果通过前面对学生问题的分析，不难看出如果能学好英语这八类词：能学好

8、英语这八类词：名词名词 、动词、动词 、形容词、副、形容词、副词、介词、数词、冠词和连词。词、介词、数词、冠词和连词。能正确使用能正确使用5种基种基本句型，两种语态，本句型，两种语态，这些初中阶段要求掌握的基这些初中阶段要求掌握的基础知识，作文失分一定会大大减少。础知识，作文失分一定会大大减少。2021/8/149Head Beginning Body TailEnding2021/8/1410 BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句结论句Supporting sentence 支持句支持句（例子、实事、数据或引文）（例子、实事、数据或引文）

9、topic sentence 主题句主题句开门见山，开门见山，紧扣主题紧扣主题总结观点，发表己见，总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应首尾呼应总总分分总总2021/8/14111.1. Cross-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )u Style (体裁体裁）u Person（人称人称）u Tense（时态时态）默读题目弄清要求默读题目弄清要求, ,抓取有效信息抓取有效信息, ,并适当分析。并适当分析。2021/8/1412健康很重要。在学习和工作的健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们的人才会有健康的身体。

10、人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告康组织写一篇完整的调查报告, ,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。并提倡大家进行假日休闲。牛刀小试牛刀小试Cross-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework2021/8/1413Style (体裁体裁）：）：_Person（人称人称）：）：_Tense（时

11、态时态）: _调查报告，记叙文调查报告，记叙文第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时1.1. Cross-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )据实描写：据实描写：适当发挥：适当发挥：度假方式度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲细节及提倡假日休闲2021/8/14142.2. An outline drawing（概略图）u List key points(列要点列要点)u Arrange and Add (布局加首尾布局加首尾)2021/8/1415 如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列

12、出文章的要点。 List key points List key pointsvisit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！有漏点，扣分最多！2021/8/1416 List key points1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work.Enjoy your vac

13、ation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework2021/8/1417How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or p a r e n t s . A f e w p e o p l e w o r k . (the key point

14、s) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加加(add)加首尾加首尾 总分总总分总2021/8/14183.3. Sentence Making and Beautifying word word phrase phrase sentence sentence Beautifying内容和语言表达内容和语言表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点内容全面，表达有新意或亮点2021/8/14193.3. Sentence Making and Beautifying（美化） word word

15、 phrase phrase sentence sentence Beautifying2021/8/1420How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who

16、relax well work well.(the ending) most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美美(beautify)2021/8/1421方法一方法一: :善用意义相近的善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调高级词汇，避免行文单调2021/8/1422Which is better?1 1我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 2 我不吃垃圾

17、食品。我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.3 3 我们应该努力取得好成绩。我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.2021/8/1423 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people stay at ho

18、me. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A

19、few people have to work. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. 2021/8/1424方法二方法二 : : 活用多种句型活用多种句型, ,避避免重复和呆板免重复和呆板, ,增加文采增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求以正确、通顺为最基本要求2021/8/1425Which is better?1 1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily. So he

20、didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 2 我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.2021/8/1426Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people l

21、ike to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a

22、 dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb（谚语）（谚语）2021/8/1427方法三方法三: : 妙用引文和例子，旁征博妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。2021/8/1428加谚语加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying go

23、es, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.2021/8/1429加谚语加谚语(Proverb)加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.2021/8/1430Enjoy s

24、ome proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 8.All roads lead to Rome. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路

25、通罗马。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.2021/8/1431青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, p

26、lant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子2021/8/14324.4. Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinking words（连接词）（连接词）2021/8/1433连连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning） As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy

27、.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well. （the ending） Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.

28、 A few people have to work. (the body)2021/8/1434连连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing th

29、e Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.2021/8/1435方法四方法四: :妙用关联词，使行文连妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使

30、文章富有层次感。贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。2021/8/14361.表示并列表示并列: and, as well as, not onlybut also bothand, neithernor， 2.表示递进表示递进: besides, whats more 3.表示转折表示转折: but, however, althoughthough, after all, anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, since,for, so, therefore, as a result5.表示条件表示条件: if, unless2021/8/14376.表示对比表示对比: instead

31、, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the end； next,later, since then, from then on9.表示强调表示强调: also

32、, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, in a word,generally speaking, in short2021/8/1438_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking._, he stood up. Then he got out

33、. _, he went back. _, he smiled.( )Its too late to invite any more people. _, you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastA2021/8/14395.5. CheckinguSpelling(拼写拼写)uTense(时态时态)uGrammer (语法语法)uHandwriting(书写书写)uPunctuation mark

34、s(标点符号标点符号)通览全文仔细检查通览全文仔细检查2021/8/14401.名词的单复数问题名词的单复数问题More and more students use the mobile phone. mobile phones2.数的不一致、时态不一致、代词不一致以数的不一致、时态不一致、代词不一致以及主谓不一致等问题及主谓不一致等问题Some students said they will put the mobile phone at home. would their mobile phones3.3.时态和语态问题时态和语态问题Great changes were taken place there over the years. have taken place4.Chinglish 4.Chinglish 现象现象They often compare their mobile phone good and bad.I think we shouldnt take the